322sivart's WRFF thread

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322sivart
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Tue Feb 08, 2011 11:58 pm
322sivart says... · Tue Feb 08, 2011 11:58 pm
Hi everyone!
If you have something that you would like me to read and review for you, I would love to.
I'll review anything you ask me to. So, ask away.
-Alex
Last edited by 322sivart on Sun Mar 13, 2011 8:10 pm, edited 3 times in total.
Need reviews?
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Sun Feb 13, 2011 4:20 am
emoticon220 says... · Sun Feb 13, 2011 4:20 am
Hey topic76224.html would you review this for me? I dont know what to think of it because I wrote it on my phone when I was angry and sad. Please and thank you, Brigitte Rae
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CaseySaz
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Sun Feb 13, 2011 1:58 pm
CaseySaz says... · Sun Feb 13, 2011 1:58 pm
Hi there!
Do you think you could review this piece for me?
topic76101.html
Thanks so much!
Casey




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322sivart
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Sun Feb 13, 2011 5:45 pm
322sivart says... · Sun Feb 13, 2011 5:45 pm
Done and done! Thanks for being the first two writers to post!
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Sun Feb 13, 2011 7:09 pm
aweqs says... · Sun Feb 13, 2011 7:09 pm
How about one scene from a script?

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/Isha:/= To be honest, we are talking about mostly nothing which in its own essence is something. But somethingness can't be nothing if there isn't nothing in the first place. So really, we're talking about meaningly somethingness that's technically caused by nothingness.


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322sivart
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Sun Feb 13, 2011 8:04 pm
322sivart says... · Sun Feb 13, 2011 8:04 pm
Done! Thanks again for posting.
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Sun Feb 13, 2011 9:06 pm
FLyerS says... · Sun Feb 13, 2011 9:06 pm
Hey, could you please review this for me? It's written in Iambic Pentameter.
Thanks.
http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/viewtopic.php?t=76271
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322sivart
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Sun Feb 13, 2011 10:23 pm
322sivart says... · Sun Feb 13, 2011 10:23 pm
I just finished the review for your poem, FLyerS. Thanks for posting!
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Sun Feb 13, 2011 10:35 pm
Rascalover says... · Sun Feb 13, 2011 10:35 pm
Hey can you pretty please review chapter two of my romantic fiction novel My New Home. topic76151.html#p820675

Please and thank you,
Tiffany
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322sivart
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Mon Feb 14, 2011 12:40 am
322sivart says... · Mon Feb 14, 2011 12:40 am
I just finished your review, Rascalover.
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322sivart
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Wed Feb 16, 2011 1:24 am
322sivart says... · Wed Feb 16, 2011 1:24 am
Megs, yours is done!
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Fri Feb 18, 2011 1:48 pm
GeeLyria says... · Fri Feb 18, 2011 1:48 pm
Hey. Can you please review my poem?
topic76450.html
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Fri Feb 18, 2011 8:58 pm
rubberduck says... · Fri Feb 18, 2011 8:58 pm
Hey there! Mind giving me a review when you have the time?
topic76496.html
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322sivart
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Fri Feb 18, 2011 9:08 pm
322sivart says... · Fri Feb 18, 2011 9:08 pm
Solvalery and rubberduck, yours are done!
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Fri Feb 18, 2011 11:10 pm
GeeLyria says... · Fri Feb 18, 2011 11:10 pm
You're fast. Thanks a lot!
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