Welcome to the Reviewing Machine [OPEN]

ArcticMonkey · 2010-08-08T19:00:14Z

Yo 8) [05-04-13] So I'm bringing this thread back to life, because I need to review more! And your requests would help me a lot with that :D What I review? I will review pretty much anything. My stronger points are lyrics and short stories; however I can review anything. So please, request away! ~Arc p.s. Sorry for opening and closing this reviewing thread so much, it's just that I've been swamped with school work. Thanks for understanding!

SporkPunk

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Fri Aug 27, 2010 6:44 am

SporkPunk says... · Fri Aug 27, 2010 6:44 am

Taffy! Wanna check out my first poem...? Nah, who am I kidding? I know you want to.

Hahaha

it began with a lump in the throat

Thanks so much!

~Sporky

Grasped by the throat, grasped by the throat. That's how I feel about love. That it's not worth it.

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XChangeX

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Sun Aug 29, 2010 5:09 pm

XChangeX says... · Sun Aug 29, 2010 5:09 pm

Ambush

Critique ruthlessly

How can I be better?

XO Change

The only constant in our lives is Change.

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He will wipe every tear from their eye. There will be no more mourning or death or pain. There will be no more crying for the old way of things has gone away.

ArcticMonkey

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Tue Aug 31, 2010 1:10 pm

ArcticMonkey says... · Tue Aug 31, 2010 1:10 pm

Done, Rae, anyone else?

Someone told me there's a girl out there, with love in her eyes and flowers, in her hair.

austenite

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Tue Aug 31, 2010 3:48 pm

austenite says... · Tue Aug 31, 2010 3:48 pm

Could you review the first chapter of my new novel, Missing? Many thanks! topic68915.html

I will eviscerate you in fiction. Every pimple, every character flaw. I was naked for a day; you will be naked for eternity.
Chaucer, A Knight's Tale

Deceiving others. That is what the world calls a romance.
Oscar Wilde

retrodisco666

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Tue Aug 31, 2010 5:32 pm

retrodisco666 says... · Tue Aug 31, 2010 5:32 pm

topic68942.html

If you would review it would be much appreciated.

'I have loved to the point of madness, which for me is the only true way to love'
~Francoise Sagan

lilgreendots

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Tue Aug 31, 2010 9:38 pm

lilgreendots says... · Tue Aug 31, 2010 9:38 pm

Hi Tam,

I just posted my first story so will you please review it for me topic68959.html.

-lilgreendots

Incarceron is a prison like no other
It gives life
It deals death
It Watches All

Incarceron
By: Catherine Fisher

For more information about the book click here!

Need a Review Click Here!

ArcticMonkey

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Wed Sep 01, 2010 6:26 am

ArcticMonkey says... · Wed Sep 01, 2010 6:26 am

I'm done with all three. Anyone else?

Someone told me there's a girl out there, with love in her eyes and flowers, in her hair.

Futuristic

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Wed Sep 01, 2010 7:11 am

Futuristic says... · Wed Sep 01, 2010 7:11 am

Well, I could use more reviews for http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic68944.html if you don't mind. Am working on Chap. Two, but want to make sure Chap. One is straight before I post the next one. Would appreciate any critique you could provide. Thanks in advance

There are those that live in the past. Those who focus on the present. I strive to be Futuristic.

ArcticMonkey

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Sat Nov 20, 2010 9:22 am

ArcticMonkey says... · Sat Nov 20, 2010 9:22 am

Hey, guys. It's open again! So, start requesting!

Someone told me there's a girl out there, with love in her eyes and flowers, in her hair.