Story Boot Camp (Closed)

Bring me those worn out first drafts and I'll help you shape them up. At Story Boot Camp, I help stories develop their plot muscles for endurance that will last a novel (or short story). Characterization will be made stronger. Works will shed cliches and become lean on creativity. I'll try not to be too harsh , but I will be honest. Your stories will complete camp more coherent and confident. No payment necessary, but guestbook posts would be appreciated .


I'm willing to enroll:

Action/Adventure
Science Fiction
Fantasy
Realistic Fiction
Romance

If your work doesn't fall under any of those categories, I'll still review it provided that it is NOT:

Fan-fiction
Poetry/Songs
Historical Fiction
Vampire/Ghost Related
Nonfiction


PM me if you have any questions.

Come on people . I'm open.

Can you please help me review my novel --- Empyrosis? I'm still writing the second chapter, and I'll probably post a new chapter every week. Please?

I promise I'll spam your guestbook every now and then if you promise to review the whole thing! (Just kidding.)

Of course, I'll help you. I'm on it right now.


Finished. Iceprincess, Empyrosis has just graduated. It was in pretty good shape already, so I didn''t have much work to do.

Hey there! Would you mind reviewing this short story for me? Thanks!

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Sorry, its kind of historical fiction.

Blackbird, it's done. 11:58 has graduated and it didn't really need lessons. It just took the test and passed. Smart story.

I'm not really good with historical fiction, but I'll see what I can do, Lena.

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Swimming Against the Kolyma River has graduated. There were some character muscles to shape up, but now I think your story is in an overall good shape.

Hey Viviel

Would you mind reviewing a chapter from my story? It's the fourth chapter, is that okay? I have written a short summary of what has already happened in the story in the post, so that will help you understand what's going on.

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Thank youss!

No worries, Skins. It's already done. I read the other chapters, too, since they weren't too long. There's only one review though.

A Shot of Arrogance has graduated and is well on its way to a successful story life.

Hyea Viviel!

Don't worry, I'm not stalking you. Would you mind reviewing the next chapter of my story for me? topic67921.html It's kind of long but I hope you don't mind.

Thanks a lot!

Sure, Skins.

Don't worry, I'm not stalking you.

Interesting, because I am stalking you.

I'm open people.

Hey there! Will you please review this for me? It's not actually my first draft, but a thorough review will be appreciated:

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It's done, Stelagineva. I'm closing, but if you have any questions about my review or need help, don't be afraid to PM me. I'll be happy to help.