Disclaimer: This is an edit of Shipwreck Isle ch.1. I did change it around a bit.
Do not go gentle into that good night,
Old age should burn and rave at close of day;
Rage, rage against the dying of the light.
Though wise men-
‘Lizzie,’ My mother said, rather annoyed. ‘ Do me a favor and give Dylan Thomas a rest and get dressed. The guests should be here any minute now. They have a grandson, he’s your age. He just moved here, too. Maybe you could be friends.’ She looked giddy with happiness. It was obvious that she was convinced that guy I’d never met would be my new boyfriend or something.
‘Okay mom.’ I sighed as I put the book away. Dylan Thomas had been my only comfort since we moved to Shipwreck Isle. Everything here was just so different. I mean, I know it was where my parents had grown up but it didn’t feel like home to me. Actually, it’s not like I had the slightest idea what that is. We had been on the move ever since I could remember. It had been exciting to visit new places at first. But then it got annoying. I got sick of always having to leave behind the friends that I made and the place that I had inevitably learned to love.
‘Lizzie! Lizzie!’ My mother snapped her fingers at me. It looks like I had once again zoned out on her.
‘Yes mother? ’ I asked, as I absentmindedly picked up the book again.
‘I thought you could wear that new dress we bought you before we came over from California.’ Right. She was going on about clothes. Always. Clothes and make up. Me and my mother were just so different, and had very different priorities.
‘All right mom, can I have a minute please?’ I said as I picked up the dress she had laid out for me.
‘Sure,’ She sighed as she left my new room. A lot of the stuff was still in boxes, as we hadn’t funnly unpacked, yet my parents had invited people over already. The neighbors that lived across the street with their grandson. I put on my dress and tried to smile in the full length mirror across the room. The effect was absolutely pitiful. My hair was the same brown it had been my whole life, despite my mother trying to get me to dye it. I put it up in a pony tail. My mother would not approve, but it kept the hair out of my eyes.
As the bell rang and I walked down the stairs, all I could think of was ‘Do not go gentle into that good night’ and how beautiful that line was. Dylan Thomas had written it for his dying father. He was trying to tell him to fight death and not just accept it as something that happend naturally to people of old age. As my mother opened the door to greet the guests, I thought that the greatest battle was the one fought against death. And when I saw our neighbor’s grandson, I was not capable of thought for a few long seconds.
A sudden feeling came over me. I knew I had met him somewhere. I knew I had known him. And I knew this wasn’t dejavu. But where? When? And how? I looked into his eyes and as he returned my gaze, his was one of rage and hate. I lowered my eyes in wonder . All of this in the course of just a few seconds.
‘Welcome to our new home!’ My mother said, as she welcomed our guests.
‘Come on in.’ My dad said cheerfully. ‘You have already met our Lizzie.’ He looked over to me. The old couple smiled at me radiantly. The old man’s eyes sparkled with a light that was normally put out as life evolved and humans lost hope. And yet, I could see that in his case, it was still there. And even though he was about seventy, he looked so much younger. With wonder, I realized that the old woman had not lost that light in her eyes, either.
‘This is our grandson, Jake.’ The old woman said. ‘Jake, say hello.’ She said as she turned to her grandson.
Jake ignored his grandmother and said instead: ‘Grandma, I‘m not very hungry. Could I show Elizabeth around, instead?’
My mother was quick to agree before consulting with me: ‘Oh she‘d love to. But come back later, I‘ll save you both some dinner.’
‘ What! Is she insane? Did she not see the way he looked at me a moment ago?’ These were the kind of thoughts that raced through my head as I followed Jake out. His piercing blue eyes had cut deeply into my soul with that not so well hidden rage.
‘So, what‘s on the agenda? ’ I asked, trying to sound cheerful.
‘I don‘t know.’ He said.
‘Well, what can you do here?’ I tried again.
‘Nothing.’ He said.
I glared at him. He was pushing the limits of my short patience.
‘Well, will you show me around?’
‘Nothing to see.’ He said.
I suddenly exploded, ‘ Listen, I don‘t want to see around. There‘s nothing to see. This town we‘re in... Fate, there‘s nothing here. All of the houses look identical, like we‘re in Pleasentview or something and on top of that there‘s like one restaurant. What the heck. But then you take me out to show me around and act like a complete jerk. That‘s it. Why is everyone so weird here?’
‘Is that right, Lizzie? Everyone‘s so weird here. Well, you‘re one to judge.’ He spat out.
‘You‘re a wacko. And you know what, I don‘t even care anymore, I‘m leaving.’ I said, as I turned around.
‘That‘s right Lizzie. You never care about anyone but yourself. Ever. Just go. You‘re good at that.’
I froze. What had he said? Had he, in a way, indicated that he had known me. I turned around slowly. He looked absolutely terrified at what he just said.
‘What did you say?’ I asked, a bit breathlessly.
‘Nothing!’ He cried. In an instant he was by my side, clutching me by the throat. ‘You hear me, you heard nothing!’. He did not loosen his grip. My eyes watered as I struggled against him. I no longer had enough air. I struggled to survive, struggled against death, the way Dylan Thomas had said ‘Do not go gentle into that good night’.
Suddenly, I grabbed his wrist ‘Rage, rage against the dying of the light’. He immediately backed away, clutching it, like I’d burnt it. I stared in surprise but quickly came to my senses. I ran home and did not stop until I had locked the door behind me.
I was out of breath, my dress ripped in one spot, and my face red with tension and sweat. I could not think straight as I raced up the stairs and shut my door. I then locked it. Fear engulfed me as I sat by my bed, hands wrapped around my knees, teeth chattering, my whole body shaking. I couldn’t think right. I couldn’t breathe right. My breathing came in gasps. I was in shock- I could not comprehend what had just happened.
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