Bring it on! (Open)

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MiaParamore
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Sat Oct 23, 2010 10:52 am
MiaParamore says... · Sat Oct 23, 2010 10:52 am
Jade, your work is done. Working on Jash's.

You guys can pour in requests. I am accepting.

~Shubhi
"Next time you point a finger
I might have to bend it back
Or break it, break it off
Next time you point a finger
I'll point you to the mirror"

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IgnisandGlacialis
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Sun Oct 24, 2010 7:15 am
IgnisandGlacialis says... · Sun Oct 24, 2010 7:15 am
Hiya!
I was wondering whether - when you have time - you could review the first part of my fantasy novel, White Eyes.
The link is here:
viewtopic.php?t=69991
But it's quite a long chapter, so if you don't want to review it that's absolutely fine. Of course, I'd like it if you did, but no pressure :P
God bless,
Ignis :pirate3:
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A thousand times you hear it
And fools are those who heed its call
But fools are those who fear it.

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MiaParamore
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Sun Oct 24, 2010 12:53 pm
MiaParamore says... · Sun Oct 24, 2010 12:53 pm
Yours is done, Jash-I'd look up to the next part after Ignis!

Going to do yours, Ignis!
"Next time you point a finger
I might have to bend it back
Or break it, break it off
Next time you point a finger
I'll point you to the mirror"

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MiaParamore
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Wed Nov 10, 2010 10:20 am
MiaParamore says... · Wed Nov 10, 2010 10:20 am
All done. I am opening up again, guys! 8)
"Next time you point a finger
I might have to bend it back
Or break it, break it off
Next time you point a finger
I'll point you to the mirror"

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MiaParamore
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Fri Nov 12, 2010 12:37 pm
MiaParamore says... · Fri Nov 12, 2010 12:37 pm
DON'T YOU WANT ME TO REVIEW?! :(
"Next time you point a finger
I might have to bend it back
Or break it, break it off
Next time you point a finger
I'll point you to the mirror"

— Paramore




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Sins
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Sun Nov 14, 2010 10:18 pm
Sins says... · Sun Nov 14, 2010 10:18 pm
Heya, Shubs :)

Would you mind reviewing my prologue of Can You See Me?

forum361.html

Thanks a bunch!
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Gheala
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Wed Nov 17, 2010 12:00 pm
Gheala says... · Wed Nov 17, 2010 12:00 pm
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This scene is very short, but it's very important in my novel because it's the reason of my protagonist's misery. Thank you, Shub ^^
I'm back to my YWS after months of disappearance, hoping that I'd gain the immunity of books and quills against the harmful realism of our world.

In case this made no sense, I'm just saying that I'm happy I'm back!




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MiaParamore
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Thu Nov 18, 2010 3:57 pm
MiaParamore says... · Thu Nov 18, 2010 3:57 pm
Idraa done, need to do Skins and Gheala's....Tomorrow!
"Next time you point a finger
I might have to bend it back
Or break it, break it off
Next time you point a finger
I'll point you to the mirror"

— Paramore




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MiaParamore
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Fri Nov 19, 2010 12:29 pm
MiaParamore says... · Fri Nov 19, 2010 12:29 pm
Skins is done...Just Ghe left, would take her up later today or tomorrow. Thanks guys, and I am accepting requests. :D
"Next time you point a finger
I might have to bend it back
Or break it, break it off
Next time you point a finger
I'll point you to the mirror"

— Paramore




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Fri Nov 19, 2010 2:54 pm
Shearwater says... · Fri Nov 19, 2010 2:54 pm
Rawr, Daughter you need to review this for me or...I will die.
Just kidding, but seriously, I'd like your opinion. =]
topic71883.html

Thank you!
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Dad.
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ArcticMonkey
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Sat Nov 20, 2010 9:18 am
ArcticMonkey says... · Sat Nov 20, 2010 9:18 am
Heyy Shubs, this will be my first post since October 15th and my first work posted up since August (which was just a drawing). Here is the link:
The Silver Lining (chapter one)

Thanks so much, it needs a lot of work!
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MiaParamore
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Wed Nov 24, 2010 12:51 pm
MiaParamore says... · Wed Nov 24, 2010 12:51 pm
All set and done. Anyone else craving for my reviews? :wink:
"Next time you point a finger
I might have to bend it back
Or break it, break it off
Next time you point a finger
I'll point you to the mirror"

— Paramore




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Sins
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Wed Nov 24, 2010 3:44 pm
Sins says... · Wed Nov 24, 2010 3:44 pm
Heya, Shubs! :)

Could you review the first chapter of my novel for me?

topic72285.html

Please and thank you!
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MiaParamore
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Sun Nov 28, 2010 7:49 am
MiaParamore says... · Sun Nov 28, 2010 7:49 am
Done with you, Skins. Anybody else? :wink:
"Next time you point a finger
I might have to bend it back
Or break it, break it off
Next time you point a finger
I'll point you to the mirror"

— Paramore



have u ever noticed how ugly rosy-lipped batfish r? and not like in the “aw ur so ugly ur cute” way that like opossums r — no they’re just hideously ugly beasts that should never have existed and r the epitome of evolution fails. the stupidity, blank look, head emptiness. they’re horrible n everyone who likes them r horrible too. they truly have the worst fan-base >:[
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