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What? You don't like my reviews anymore? :(
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Fly, Fight, Win . . . in Air, Space, and Cyberspace.
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Excellence In All We Do
~Air Force Core Values~

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hi Shubbi,
please review my novel FireBird.. and at the end please tell me if you want me to continue or not...

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these tornadoes are for you


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Done with all except for Point's last chapter. Would have it done soon. So pour in requests.
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Thanks for the review, Shubs. Here's part two of my story if you wish to look at it: topic72755.html
Fly, Fight, Win . . . in Air, Space, and Cyberspace.
-Air Force Mission Statement-

Integrity First
Service Before Self
Excellence In All We Do
~Air Force Core Values~

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Alright, so, the first chapter of my new novel. Even The Beautiful Lose Control
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Honestly, what do you think?
I'm not exactly sure where it's going, but it's gonna be romantic.
'We will never believe again, kick drum beating in my chest again, oh, we will never believe in anything again, preach electric to a microphone stand.'

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Wicked done. I am sorta busy this weekend, would have the review done soon for the rest.
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Point, done. I'll give Leth's a shot later this week end and I need fresh posts comin' till then since I am a bit tired of reading Fantasy. So somethin' else(even Fantasy would do)
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All set and done. Gimme more reviews to do.
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Would you mind reviewing that for me, Shubs? It's the beginning of a novel of mine... yet again. x3 I've rewritten the beginning of the first novel I ever wrote, and would love your opinion on it.

Please and thank you!
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Hey Shubhi! I was wondering if you would pretty-please-with-sprinkles-icecream-and-cherries-on-top review my romantic short story, Almost. I have plans to submit it to a magazine, and any suggestions would be greatly appreciated. Here's the link:

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Let me know what you think!
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Can you review my short story please?

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Hey, PLEASE review my stuff :)
Especially my first story on here, Together Again Part One (I need to get more points to post Part Two...); I want to know what people think of that ;) THANK YOUU! xxx
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Skins and Stels done. Going to take till Wednesday to finish other reviews.
"Next time you point a finger
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Next time you point a finger
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Okay, opening again(never closed though)...would have Emmie's done soon. :)
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Or break it, break it off
Next time you point a finger
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You walk into this room at your own risk, because it leads to the future, not a future that will be but one that might be. This is not a new world, it is simply an extension of what began in the old one. It has patterned itself after every dictator who has ever planted the ripping imprint of a boot on the pages of history since the beginning of time. It has refinements, technological advances, and a more sophisticated approach to the destruction of human freedom. But like every one of the super states that preceded it, it has one iron rule: logic is an enemy and truth is a menace.
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