I mainly would like comments on the idea, and plot line, rather than grammatical mistakes an stuff. If thats okay
Bai Bai -Ava
/Isha:/= To be honest, we are talking about mostly nothing which in its own essence is something. But somethingness can't be nothing if there isn't nothing in the first place. So really, we're talking about meaningly somethingness that's technically caused by nothingness.
Okay, so sorry Leth I won't be able to review it. But maybe I can read it later and tell how I feel about it. Sorry. I can review the next parts, though.
Guys, other reviews done. More?
"Next time you point a finger I might have to bend it back Or break it, break it off Next time you point a finger I'll point you to the mirror"
Synopsis: William, after a terrible incident, finds himself torn between two realities as he comes in conflict with the Mad Duke, God of Maddness
Thanks again, Tom
Dream's power is absolute. Tell me, how much power would Hell have if it's inhabitants couldn't dream of Heaven? Tell me, how could God create our world if he had not dreamed of all it all before, and not everyone believes in God, but everyone has Dreams.
I am done with the review requests. Tenyo's piece would be reviewed as I go on, so I am OPEN now again. So pour in requests; I can't wait to open my box. xD!
"Next time you point a finger I might have to bend it back Or break it, break it off Next time you point a finger I'll point you to the mirror"
