Trix's Critiques *Accepting*

Hullo.

I'm Trix, and I'm hoping to review your stories. I'm not looking for a payment, just here to help. I don't sugarcoat. Only ask for a review if you want one that will really dig into the story and pick it apart bit by bit to find out what works and what doesn't.

General Rules:
- Don't whine about any critique that I give. That's no good for either one of us.
- Nothing over 10,000 words.
- I'll review the first chapter of a longer work, but I only promise one. If I like it, I'll let you know, and I'll keep reading. =]
- Only ask me to review one work of yours at a time, please.

I will review...
- Fantasy
- Historical fiction
- General fiction
- Art & Photography
- Scripts

I will not review...
- Poetry
- Action/Adventure
- Fan fiction
- Nonfiction
- Romantic
- Science Fiction

Currently accepting stories.

Right. Thanks for your time.

- Trix

Hey Trix

I thought that I'd give you a review to get you started! Will you review a chapter for my novel for me please? It's the sixth chapter though, is that all right?

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If not, that's fine. I just thought that I'd try and start to get this thread moving for you!

Thanks.

Do you mind giving this a go? It's short, the beginning of a novel. But only part of it, as to not intimidate people with its length.

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