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Hello all, Lily here and I’m itching to do some reviewing.
All you need to do is post a link, the name of your piece, and the genre and I’ll get back to you quick as I can.

I’ll review almost anything, really, I will but I have to say that I’m not the best at reviewing poetry but I’m getting better at it than I was before I got here so if nothing else, I’ll give you the best opinion I can.

And if that doesn’t persuade you…there’s a cookie in it for you and possibly a gold star too. *slaps a gold star on her forehead*

~lil
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Would you like to review my fashion designs? The link is: Designs!

Thanks in advance!:D
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You have been reviewed! *slaps a star on shubhi*
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Heya Lily :)

Would you be ever so kind and review this for me please? It's the second chapter of a story, is that okay?

Thanks in advance! If you want me to review something of yours back, just ask!

xoxo Skins
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Hey Lily!

Genre: Fantasy short story
Title: The Knight's Secret
Link(s): Part 1 and Part 2 (It's under 2k, don't be put off by the parts!)
A writer is a world trapped in a person— Victor Hugo

Ink is blood. Paper is bandages. The wounded press books to their heart to know they're not alone.




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Hey there Lily.

Could you review my short story for me? There are two parts of it, so could you review the both of them? If it's not too much trouble, that is! :xd: I've had plenty off comments on them, just not really any critiques.

Part one

Part Two

Thanks!
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Hey Lily,
I'm writing a goosebumps story for my little bro, and I was hoping you'd be able to review the 3 part for me. :)

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Thanks! :)
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So, after being silly and forgetful, I managed to catch up on all my review requests!

And I'm out of school now, which means I can review forever and ever and ever...well...when I'm not working and sleeping...and showering (I've heard taking your computer into the shower is bad on it).

Request Away!
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*bump*
:D
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Hi there!
I've written a general kind of short story and I'd be really grateful if you could review it for me.:) Here's the link:

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Thanks a ton! Casey




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Donesies!
Any more! Bring it on!
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*bumps...again*
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Hiii :) Would you mind reviewing this for me:
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It's "The Crossfire" and it's a short fiction...aaand.
If you wanted...you could review anything else of mine? Hahah.
Thanks again, bye!
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Hello there! If you would be so kind I'd like you to review my poem. I'm not exactly sure what genre it is. Incoherent Blabbering, perhaps. Anyways, here's the link:

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THANKS IN ADVANCE. (:




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Doneskies!
Any more?
Never forget who you are, for surely the world will not. Make it your strength. Then it can never be your weakness. Armor yourself in it, and it will never be used to hurt you.



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