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jasminebells wrote:Ever feel like you life was screwed?
So you just reverted to being mean and rude
Alone in the dark, everyone left for someone else who shines
Just stuck in the solitude, swirling down in decline
Okay so I am not sure if there should your or you? Did you mean that the second person screwed their lies or we feel that our life is screwed?Ever feel like your life was screwed?
So you just reverted to being mean and rude
Hey these two words rhymed together so perfectly and I loved it!Tired of people, tired of work
Tired of failure that nearby lurks
I was a bit of confused about the second line's meaning but it can just be me!Feeling so messed up, disappointing those you love
What will you do when push comes to shove?
This was a perfect line!You've gone too far in, your about to drown
The queen of faults, it is you that deserves the crown
Ever feel like you life was screwed?
So you just reverted to being mean and rude?
Tired of people, tired of work;
Tired of failure that nearby lurks.
Feeling so messed up, disappointing those you love.
What will you do when push comes to shove?
Constant frowns, ever constant tears.
Someone screaming failure in a voice only you can hear[color=#FF0000].[/color]
Wanting just to shut it out,
Parents now silent when all they did here was shout.
You've gone too far in, you're about to drown.
The queen of faults, it is you that deserves the crown.
You wish you could take it all back,
but mercy is one thing Father Time lacks.
Alone in the dark, everyone left for someone else who shines.
Just stuck in the solitude, swirling down in decline
There's nothing left to say, you've done yourself in.
I always knew failure should be considered a sin.
jasminebells wrote:Ever feel like you life was screwed?
So you just reverted to being mean and rude
jasminebells wrote:You've gone too far in, your about to drown
The queen of faults, it is you that deserves the crown
Wanting just to shut it out,
Parents now silent when all they did was shout
You wish you could take it all back,
but mercy is one thing Father Time lacks
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