Attempted reviews from a Rock.

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LittlePetRock
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Fri Mar 12, 2010 5:31 am
LittlePetRock says... · Fri Mar 12, 2010 5:31 am
So,
I hate reviewing. Don't ask why, I just do. Anyways...
I'm forcing myself to at least try to review... So actually, I need you more than you need me. :lol:

Will you help the rock to better her reviewing? I'll point out grammatical mistakes, stuff that does not make sense, what I think of the work, etc.

What I will not review:
Poetry (sorry).
Fan-Fiction.
Lyrics.
Scripts.
18+ rated work.

Please help me to help you!

Much love,
Rocky.
Last edited by LittlePetRock on Sat Mar 13, 2010 6:23 am, edited 1 time in total.
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MiaParamore
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Fri Mar 12, 2010 6:23 am
MiaParamore says... · Fri Mar 12, 2010 6:23 am
Hi LittlePetRock. I know sometimes it gets tedious to review someone else's piece but once you start doing it,it becomes fun. Can you review this?
Finding me back- prologue
A criminal's heart

Both the storiues are different. I need reviews more for second one since it's new.
Thanks in advance.
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Ranger Hawk
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Sat Mar 13, 2010 1:58 am
Ranger Hawk says... · Sat Mar 13, 2010 1:58 am
Hey Rocky!

Can you check out part of my fantasy novelette? topic60111.html

Thanks! :D
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LittlePetRock
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Sat Mar 13, 2010 2:07 am
LittlePetRock says... · Sat Mar 13, 2010 2:07 am
shubhiloves2write: Finding me Back is done, but A Criminal's Heart is deleted?
Ranger: I'm on it right now!!
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LittlePetRock
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Sat Mar 13, 2010 2:38 am
LittlePetRock says... · Sat Mar 13, 2010 2:38 am
Ranger: Your review is done!

Anyone else? Please... anything? I'm becoming review-thirsty. O_o maybe I'm turning into a review-vampire... Hmm... a revpire, or vampiew?
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Auteur
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Sat Mar 13, 2010 6:07 am
Auteur says... · Sat Mar 13, 2010 6:07 am
Hi :D You can review anything of mine, if you want.

Revpire (;
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MiaParamore
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Sat Mar 13, 2010 6:17 am
MiaParamore says... · Sat Mar 13, 2010 6:17 am
@LittlePetRock: Yes I have deleted A Crriminal's Heart but will soon post it. i will update you soon with it.
Thanks.
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Next time you point a finger
I'll point you to the mirror"

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MiaParamore
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Sat Mar 13, 2010 2:54 pm
MiaParamore says... · Sat Mar 13, 2010 2:54 pm
I have posted A criminal's heart again. Review it please.
Here's the link:
A Criminal's Heart
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Next time you point a finger
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Hecate
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Sat Mar 13, 2010 3:00 pm
Hecate says... · Sat Mar 13, 2010 3:00 pm
Hey, could you please review this? I know it's a tad weird..
post673156.html#p673156




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LittlePetRock
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Sun Mar 14, 2010 5:13 am
LittlePetRock says... · Sun Mar 14, 2010 5:13 am
All done!!
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ToritheMonster
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Mon Mar 15, 2010 1:31 am
ToritheMonster says... · Mon Mar 15, 2010 1:31 am
http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic60146.html

It's other fiction. Thanks!
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LittlePetRock
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Tue Mar 30, 2010 3:53 am
LittlePetRock says... · Tue Mar 30, 2010 3:53 am
Come on guys.
I'm trying to do at least five reviews a day.
Help me!
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Tue Jun 13, 2023 10:50 am
DreamyAlice says... · Tue Jun 13, 2023 10:50 am
Hello, I am one of the res crew mods here on YWS. This is a message just to inform you that I will lock and archive this thread as it is not active anymore. We have to archive and lock the inactive threads to keep the forum organized so no worries if you'd like to reopen it at any point in the future please contact a current resources moderator, we would be happy to reopen it for you ^-^

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