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I was just talking to Kimy when the most amazing looking guy walked in.

"What's that?" he asks pointing to the sheet paper.

"Oh, umm it's sheet music. For the um piano, I played for 7 years. Not that I'm trying to brag or anything it's just-" He cuts me off with a laugh.

"So your new? I'm Jake"

"Oh, I'm err, I'm umm", My face begins to blush as I realize I forgot my name.

"Annete. This is Annete, Jake", Kimy says saving me from death by embarassment. He smiles brightly and shocks vibrate up my arms as he shakes my hand.

"And what do we have here?"
I am nothing
but a mouthful of 'sorry's, half-hearted
apologies that roll of my tongue, smoothquick, like 'r's
or maybe like pocket candy
that's just a bit too sweet.

~*~




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Jake

Annette was somewhat nervous, but I didn't know why. I couldn't tell exactly what it was, but something was going on in her head. I stopped making assumptions when I heard a voice from behind us.

"Well, what do we have here", said some girl who just walked in; of course, it was Darliana.

"Do you want something?", I said. Wait, hold up, why was I speaking up? It somehow seemd fluid to speak, but I had no idea why I felt I did-Darliana scared the shit out of me since the fight.

"Just stoppin' by. I see it's become a sexy little three-some", she said. Kimy gave a ridiculously angry look at Dari for that one. Kimy didn't really want to speak, but she looked like she wanted to claw out Darliana's throat.

"What's your deal, richie?", Dari asked Kimy. Kimy remained silent. Nobody was speaking up. I really didn't want to fight this battle, but I guess somebody had to.

"Look, if there's nothing else you're here for, would you mind leaving? We're in the middle of a...discussion", I said. I don't know why I said discussion, but I didn't know exactly what it was we were doing there.

"Whatever", she said bitchily (that's the only word that I can think of that described how she said that), "Guess I'm out"

She paused for a second and pulled out a box of ciggarettes.

"You want one too?", she asked me. Odd. Why did she ask me?

"I don't smoke", I told her.

"What're you talking about? You've asked me for one of these every hour since we got here"

That bitch! As soon as she said that, Kimy and Annette both looked at me concerningly. They believed her, and anything I said couldn't have helped me.

"I don't smoke", I said twice; once to Darliana and another time to Kimy and Annette.

"Yeah, you told me you hid the butts in that top pocket of your suitcase", said Dari. As soon as she said that, Kimy and Annette walked off. Either they didn't want to hang around with me, or they were actually checking my suitcase for cigarrette butts. Dari didn't plant some in my suitcase, did she? Either way, I was fucked.

When Kimy and Annette were gone, it was just Darliana and myself in the room.

"What the hell did you do that for?", I angrily and loudly asked her.
"I'm fearless in my heart
They will always see that in my eyes
I am the passion, I am the warfare
I will never stop
Always constant,
Accurate,
Intense"
"The Audience is Listening", by Steve Vai




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*Darliana*

I took a long drag, exhaled through my nose, and shrugged.
" Calm down, 'twas a joke." He glared at me and shook his head.
" It wasn't funny," I just shrugged again and turned to walk away, but he grabbed my wrist. I hissed at him, actually hissed.
" Hey, what gives? Let the hell go," I snatched my hand back and dropped my ciggertte,"
Dammit!"
" You're a mean girl, Darliana," he said my name like it was posion. I scoffed.
" As if I didn't know that," I laughed and pulled out another smoke," you sure you don't want one?" I raised my left eyebrow and cocked my head to the side.
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Kimy

I wouldn't check his bag. I knew Jake better than that. But Annette did. I just shrugged her off. I had a better plan. I walked into the cabin 8G. I went into dari's bag to find almost twenty packs of cigaretes. I take themm all in my arms and throw them into the lake. Hope she likes wet smokes.

I walk back into the hall. Jake is still talking to dari. I push her aside and walk up to Jake.

"Problem solved." I say to him, loud enough for Dari to hear.

"What did you do?" Jake asked.

"Threw all twenty of her cigarrete packs into the lake." With that Dari ran back to the cabin. Within two minutes there was a long, drawn out scream. Me and Jake shared a laugh.
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*Darliana*

I screamed to find all of my smokes gone. Every single one of them. I turned around and ran back to where Kimy was and pushed her to the ground then sat on top of her.
" What. The. Hell?!" Jake grabbed my arm and pulled me off of her. She quickly stood up and dusted off her clothes. I made a move for her again, a string of not-so-nice words spilling from my mouth.
" Calm down, crazy," Jake yelled. I snatched my arm away from him and pinned Kimy to a wall.
" You're gonna pay for this," I hissed between clenched teeth," don't assume for a moment that this is over, richie." I turned away and headed for the pool, the only safe place in this mixed up camp.
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*what time is it....in camp?? I'm just wondering...
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*After dinner. So about time for bed.*
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Jake

I walked over to Kimy, who was on her knees on the ground. I walked as Darliana walked away angrily.

"Do you think that we should really be worried about her?", I asked. If attemping to put Kimy against me was her best shot, then I didn't think that she could do much worse. Maybe murder, but somehow, I doubted anybody, even Darliana, would actually full-on kill someone.

"She pushed me to the ground and sat on me. If she wanted to murder us, she would've done it already", said Kimy. The p.a. said "All campers to bed in 30 minutes".

"Guess we better be heading off. Seeya tomorrow", I said. I walked off to my cabin. We may have been given two threats in total, made a crazy girl crazier, but it still was a pretty good day. Crazy, but good.
"I'm fearless in my heart
They will always see that in my eyes
I am the passion, I am the warfare
I will never stop
Always constant,
Accurate,
Intense"
"The Audience is Listening", by Steve Vai




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Kimy

I was very, very surprised to go into my cabin and not find Dari there.

"She has been put with the ED's." Said Anette.

"ED"s?" I asked.

"Educational Deficits. The 'special' kids who need help. She wont go near you any more." She said. I did a fist pump. My day just got better and better.

I went to sleep feeling clam, and very safe.
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*Darliana*

I slipped out of the DT bunk. Psh, they actually thought a locked door would contain me? Ha!
I opened the door to my old bunk quietly and, what a surprise, Kimy was sleeping right where I could reach her. I crept over slowly and lifted her body from the bed and threw her over my shoulder. Jeez, this girl was heavy. Seems like someone needed to lay of the caviar.
I walked slowly to the front gate oof the camp and kicked it open quickly then started down the dirt path leading to the woods. She stirred a bit, but never woke.
I pushed my way as far into the trees as I could manage and dumped Kimy off at some random location. I laughed silently as I planted a few leaves in her hair.
" Sweet dreams, richie." I quickly returned back to camp and headed for the pool. When everyone woke and found Kimy gone they knew it was going to be me. I might as well enjoy my free time while I still had it.
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Kimy

I woke up in the middle of a forest. My mind flew into a panic, how did I get here. Then logic got a hold of me. Dari. I hate that girl!!!! I saw I was near a river. In camp, it allways flowed to the left. So all I had to do was follow it upstream and I would be back at camp in no time. I followed the river a bit, and before long I returned to a hectic camp. The counslers were in a full fledged state of panic. I walked up to one.

"I am fine!" I said. She breathed a sigh of releif.

"I found her!" The counseler cried. Meanwhile I saw Dari being lead into a police car. Serves her right.

Jake came up and gave me a quick hug. "Im glad you got back. But, your a mess."

"Thanks, 'cause thats really what I needed to hear right now." Just then a limo pulled up. Shit.

And out stepped my dad. Tom McFlagger. Aka, hollywoods biggest male movie actor of this year.

"Kimberly!" He said, coming up to me. His two bodyguards, Chip and Dale, were behind him. The whole rest of the camp just stared.

"What happened to low profile?" I asked him.

"I had to be sure you were okay. Do you want to come back to hollywood with me. There is a spot open in Heights and Hills!"

"No, I want to stay here with my friends!" I said.

"Fine, But I gotta run, filming starts in five hours." He sighed. He got back into the limo, and it sped off.
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((Hey, could someone bring in Winter? Sorry I haven't been caught up, I was grounded this last week >.<))
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I was thinking maybe Annette would get super jealous of Kimy cause she likes Jake too but JAke likes Kimy. So Annette gets in line with Dari to ruin Kimy.
I am nothing
but a mouthful of 'sorry's, half-hearted
apologies that roll of my tongue, smoothquick, like 'r's
or maybe like pocket candy
that's just a bit too sweet.

~*~




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*Darliana*

I put on my innocent girl face, I'd worked on it pretty well.
" Did you abandon Kimy in the woods, Dari?" The first police was staring at me intently. I sighed then sniffled.
" Y-yes sir. I am truly sorry. It's just, well-" I wiped invisible tears from under my eyelids," Kimy's just so...perfect and I was.." I buried my face in my hands," jealous," I mumbled. Someones hand fell upon my back. They were actually buying this bullshit! Jealous of Kimy? Me? Ha!
" It's okay," the police said," just no more okay." I nodded, conjuring up fake tears.
" Y-yessir. I promise." I looked up.
" Okay then," he turned tail and stalked back to the police car. That was almost too easy. I turned around and headed towards the pool. I needed a quiet space to think of my next move against Kimy. Messing with her was just too much fun.
I positioned myself on the edge of the pool and lay my head back and closed my eyes.
" Hey," I opened my eyes and turned around.
" What Ann? I'm busy." She looked down and fingered the metal gate blocking off the pool.
" Can I join?" I shrugged and then laughed. Suddenly she needed my permission to enter the pool? I heard the gate rattle as she jumped it. I turned around as she stripped down to her bathing suit and sat next to me.
" Can I ask you a question," she whispered. I shrugged again and ran my toes through the water," It's about Kimy." I smiled and craned my neck to look at her.
" Go on."
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**I think you meant Annette but it's alright.**


"Do you think Jake likes Kimy?"

Jake and Kimy seemed to like each other very much. It somehow annoyed me.

"Oh, them? Well...Yeah. They seemed to be love birds since the moment they got here. I don't think anything could break them apart...wait why?" Dari replied with sincere sadness. Wow, she was really nice.

"Oh, nothing really, it's just that I thought Jake was really hot and stuf but if Kimy has him then there's really nothing I can do I guess."

"We-ll. You see the problem in this is Kimy right?"

I sat up from the plastic chair and nodded.

"If you get rid of Kimy, then Jake is all yours. He was checking you out when you first got here but then Ms. Kimy Knowitall came and whisked him away"

I nodded again. It was true. Kimy was really hasty to get JAke away from me the first time I saw them. Hmmm.

"What should we do then?"
I am nothing
but a mouthful of 'sorry's, half-hearted
apologies that roll of my tongue, smoothquick, like 'r's
or maybe like pocket candy
that's just a bit too sweet.

~*~



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