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Diana

Canoeing? There was canoeing? I thought, a bit miffed that I hadn't seen that. I shrugged. "Oh well, I guess i'll head on over to writing or climbing." I laughed. I hope I wasn't being a bother, the reason I was so eager to join them was mainly because I was somewhat lost. Something I didn't, but knowing my luck I'd wander off and get in trouble with a counselor.

"Well, I guess I'll see you guys later." I replied. I was about to leave until I stopped and turned around. "There's just one problem though. Do any of you know how I can get there." 'Maybe I should just go with them to canoeing. It would be easier.' I thought.
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Aidan
Canoeing? Well, definitely not his favorite but not it was not as bad as going to do some stupid girl activities. So he followed Abbey although they were actually walking together. It was a bit awkward but well, it seemed natural as well, so it wasn't a big problem.

"So have you done this before?"He asked Abbey.

"Sometimes, with Jon" She said with a wide smile. How did she so to smile so much?

" I have never to be honest, so this is kind of nerve wrecking" Aidan said with a smile on his face.

They walked with Jon and Diana following.


**Can someone please bring in Evangeline***
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Blessent mon coeur
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Kimy

"I am not afraid of you." I called after her.

"You wanna go, rich girl?" She asks, pulling me out into the grass infront of the cabin.

"Bring it on." I growl. I throw a puch, she is quick to grab my wrist and twist it. ouch. I kick her in the face, and she stumbles back.

"Richie's got a nasty bite." she commented. By now the guys were out of the cabin. Some were taking bets.

Then it was chaos. Puches thrown, kicks left and right. Finally two counselers were able to pull us apart. Dari fought against the conseler, but I knew better than to try that. As soon as I was calm the counseler released his grip on me.

Dari threw me a evil glare. I knew this wasn't over yet.
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**Can someone wth a male character who runs into the girl cabin for a reason...??*
I am nothing
but a mouthful of 'sorry's, half-hearted
apologies that roll of my tongue, smoothquick, like 'r's
or maybe like pocket candy
that's just a bit too sweet.

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Evangeline
Canoeing? of all things for me to get stuck with canoeing? I walk a few steps behind everyone else, wishing I could be anywhere else but here right now. Maybe if I just don't show up to stupid canoeing no one will miss me.....
Giving in is easy,fighting for what you believe in is the hard part.




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Jake

That fight was intense. I got to say, it was a bit strange that there was fighting so early into camp, but I suppose that time moves slower than the events that happen in summer camp.

Kimy was walking away, holding onto her wrist. That twist she got looked like it hurt like hell. Kimy was still pretty pissed off, even though she was calm enough to pass for the counsellers. As it appeared, the counsellers didn't really care much about us to help us like they should; I figured I'd go talk to her.

Why did I figure I should? I don't know exactly why. She was a friend, I suppose. Maybe I thought I owed her something for the writing help and the breakfast situation a while back.

I went up to her, and said some words I regretted saying as I spoke, mainly because it wasn't too specific, and she could think of me as a clueless idiot, but nonetheless, I said them.

"You okay?", I asked, putting my headphones into my pocket.
"I'm fearless in my heart
They will always see that in my eyes
I am the passion, I am the warfare
I will never stop
Always constant,
Accurate,
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Kimy

"Fine," I said. I notice his stomach growl and I say, "Wait here a sec." I run into the cabin and come back with two bannana muffins. I hand one to him.

"Thanks." He says. I sit down on a bench and he sits beside me. I start rubbing my hurt arm.


"She got you pretty bad?"

"Yeah, stupid smoker." We laugh.

"You worried?" He asks.

"About what?"

"Her threat at the end."

"Not one bit." I reply. But I most certainly am.
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*Darliana*

I twisted out of the counsler's grip and squeezed my nose. Dumb bitch got me in the face. I shrugged and walked to the cabin to get another pack of fags and a nice book.
The pool water was a refresing getaway from camp madness. I sighed as I dove underwater, smiling as my ears popped. It was nice under here.
" You're not allowed in there," someone called from above the water. I surfaced and looked around.
" Bite me," I dove back under and didn't come back up 'till my lungs were on fire.
" Dinner time everyone!" One of the counslers ran through the camp with a megaphone and a whistle," Dinner!" I just rolled my eyes and went back under.
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Evangeline
I ran from my cabin drenched,from the quick shower I had to give the affect of canoeing, as I herd the call for dinner.
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Kimy

I hear the call for dinner. As I walk into the dinner hall I decide to sit by Jake and Eve.

"Hey guys!" I say, sitting down. They both say hi.

"Here comes trouble." eve murmered. Dari was coolly walking into the hall.

As she walked by me she whispered, "Your in for it, Richie." She didn't say snything else, she just walked by. But I must admit, it sent shivers down my spine.

I looked at our dinner, the counselers attempt at stake, and sighed. Would serving some nice lobster kill them. But I take my knife and fork, and make a vaild effort to eat. Eve seems to actualy like it.

Jake won't even eat it.
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**Sarah, Evangeline is my character. If you want to join the storybook you have to make your own character**
Les sanglots longs
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De l'autonne
Blessent mon coeur
D'une langueur
Monotone.

Verlaine




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You guys I think I might have to drop out of this. It's gonna sound prissy but no one is really putting me in so yeah unless it happens soon, I'll be dropping out. I havent yet, I'll wait another day or so.
I am nothing
but a mouthful of 'sorry's, half-hearted
apologies that roll of my tongue, smoothquick, like 'r's
or maybe like pocket candy
that's just a bit too sweet.

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Kimy

I walk over to Annette.

"Hey, I heard you play piano."

"Yes, and?" She says.

"Well, I wrote a song that I could use in the end of camp talent show but I really don't know how to play piano. And it includes a piano part. Would you want to do it with me?"

"Sure!" She says entusiasticly.

I pull the sheet music out of my bag. I hand it to her. She looks it over. It is called Summer Dreams.

"Why are there gaps in the lyrics?" She asks.

"Well, part of it is about what I loved about the summer, and since we are not that far in I cant fill it out yet." She nodds.

"I like how in the begining it starts out really slow, but then goes a bit faster."

"Over all its a calm song, thought." I reply. Then Jake comes up to me.

"What's that?" He asks.
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Oh sorry! That was unintentional,I got confused.
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(Hey I have to drop out of this too, sorry. Things have come up and I don't have the time to keep up. I would love to stay in, but things happen.)
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