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Camp Hillbay

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So, your 11-16 years old. Your mother sends you off to camp Hillbay. Some are excited, some hate camp, and some just don't know what to do.

This is camp is definitely a place for:

*summer romances

*cat fights

*friendships

*and so much more....

The outcome, only you can decide.

Please keep boy-girl ratio even!


Name:

Gender:

Age:

Picture:

Personality:

History:

Up for Love:

Other:

Welcome to Camp Hillbay!
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Name: Kimberley Ann Desan



Gender: Female



Age: 16



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Personality: Very sweet and a great friend. She makes friends easily and the guys love her. Loves apples and lillies.



History: A southern girl from lousianna who drove all the way to ohio just to attend this camp. Comes from a wealthy family but could care less.



Up for Love: YES!!!



Other: Do not ever make fun of her. She hates it. She loves to swim and dance. Also a very talented singer and actress.
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Kay, what's up hun? Well, here goes another. (I think I have a SB addiction. Haha!)

Name: Darliana -Dari- McHason
Age: 16
Picture: *cant put one cause I'm via cell phone but she looks a bit like a younger version of Megan Fox (only 'cause I love Megan Fox) but with purple eyes and black hair. There, do you have a good image? She only wears black, grey, or dark purple clothing.
History: Born and raised in Britian but moved to the states at the age of fourteen. Only lives with her older sister who is twentyseven because her parents were murdered when she was twelve. Ever since then she hs been a problem child. Her sister sent her here to try to get her soften up. She's not afraid to try anything and is sort of a dare devil. Loves to scare the newbies.
Person: Laid back and mellow. Some would say she was "effortlessly cool". She likes to keep to herself at times and hates happy pep people. Would rather just lay back with some candles, a pack of smokes, and a good horror novel.
Up for: everything!
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Name: Jake Cole

Gender: Male

Age: 16

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ImageWell, younger than this, of course, because this picture is of someone who's 35, but he still appears pretty young, and it's the best face I think of for this character.


Personality: Jake is a very smart kid, usually very fun and outgoing, has plenty of friends at home, enjoys being part of a really large and close family, but at camp, he's completely nervous, quiet, and antisocial.

History: Although Jake lives an exciting and active social life at his home in , he usually just spends his time at camp listening to music on his mp3 player and privately writing a novel. He keeps the active social life he has outside of camp a general secret for no reason other than he's just nervous about making friends with strangers across the country. He never wanted to go to camp, but his parents wanted him to expand his friend-web, but he really is just upset that he can't hang around with his friends and family at home over the summer.

Up for love: Sort of...he's not against it, but he's not too determined for it.

Other: Jake is a city boy. He's never done any sort of outdoors camp before, and is slightly afraid of the forest.

*I actually really hope this goes well, because I've spent the last 5 summers at a 3-week outdoor camp called Camp Miriam. It was a hell of a place, and there was a rediculous amount of drama; some involving me and some with me as a spectator. I think this could be a lot of fun, and I can't wait 'till it gets started*
"I'm fearless in my heart
They will always see that in my eyes
I am the passion, I am the warfare
I will never stop
Always constant,
Accurate,
Intense"
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*****Okay, I had a burst of inspiration! I think that it would be really cool if Jake and Kimy (Kimberly) ended up together. She could help him grow more used to the forest, and he could help her a bit with schoolwork. (Mostly because Kimy is so social she can't keep up with her grades). Tell me what you think of this idea!*****
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This sounds like fun, I might post a pro later
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So I save a spot for a boy and a girl
Les sanglots longs
Des violons
De l'autonne
Blessent mon coeur
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Monotone.

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Name: Abbigale *Abbey* Gaines



Gender: Female



Age: 16



Picture: http://dark-odyssey.deviantart.com/art/ ... H-61519895


Personality: She honestly is a plainly bored girl with too much personality. She loves telling people what she thinks and how she feels but is generally a nice person. You can say that she is a bit too honest and likes to dig into other people's emotions because she sees them as easily readable. She is a devoted person to those whom she likes.

History: She would rather not say..

Up for love: That would be nice....


Other: She is touchy about he past and is best friends with Johnathan


*****if this is ok....I'll just create Johnathan...tell me if it's not...

Name: Johnathan *Jon* Stark-

Gender: Male

Age: 16

Picture: http://makes--me--wonder.deviantart.com ... -121567129

Personality: A bit cold at first, contradictiong Abbey quite a bit. He likes sarcasm and opens up once he is comfortable. He comes off as the silent type but actually is mainly on another cloud thinking about a completely opposite situation. Like say you were talking about how the world was going to end, he would thinking about chulupas his grandmother made when he was four.
He likes to cook a bit, can ook any sort of Spanish or Mexican food that you like. He likes music but mostly techno to ambient just mostly stuff he can zone out to.

History: Father was a Police officer and mother left, typical so says Johnathan. His mother was a model directly related to the rich upper class and was from Spain. At one of her shoots in England his Father was there as an exchange student, they hit it off and then came Jon.

Up for Love: Of course! Bring it onnnn

Other: Best friends with Abbey
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Name: Annette Jaymore



Gender: Female



Age: 15.8



Picture: will be up later (she is really freakin' pretty!!!!)


Personality: Is very sarcastic but is not mean. She is really liked by the younger children. The older kids accept her but she doesn't really hang around them. She has a major crush on a 16 year old boy (anyone want her?)



History: lived in San Francisco all her life. Has three younger siblings which is why all the younger kids like her. Her mother abandoned her after her youngest sister's birth.



Up for Love: only for that *special* 16 year old boy. She is REALLY gorgeous but is oblivious to it.



Other: has an immense fear of dogs. Is an amazing singer and plays drums, guitar and piano.
I am nothing
but a mouthful of 'sorry's, half-hearted
apologies that roll of my tongue, smoothquick, like 'r's
or maybe like pocket candy
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We can start once we get two more people...
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Pictures of the camp:

The Lake:

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The Cabins Inside:
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The Cabins Outside:
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so here are my profiles.
Name:Evangeline Adler

Gender: famale

Age:16

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Personality:she's really funny but shy, that's a problem for her because she loves being around people but is to shy to really relate to them. She's a great student and a great musician, she plays the guitar and earned a national contest. She loves quite and likes being honest so if she sees something awkward she'll surely reveal it, no matter how hard or dangerous it can get. But she's really insecure about herself and keeps a secret, she cuts.

History: She has pretty much a normal life, except for the fact that her mother died when she was five and his father remarried just six months later and had a child with his new wife, forgetting both his sons. That really affected Evangeline because she was really close to her father before and all of a sudden he remarried and excluded her and her brother of it. So when she was fourteen, she was sent to a boarding school with her brother.

Up for Love:yes, totally

Other:she likes sleeping with a little light on
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Name:Aidan Adler

Gender:Male

Age:16, he's Evangeline's twin

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Personality:Really laid back, almost too laid back. He's really charming and respectful with girls and has this certain weakness for them too, so he's still waiting for the right one.lol. But...he's also a rebel, and enjoys breaking the rules, all the rules for he doesn't really care what people says about him. He likes skateboarding and playing guitar and piano. He's an outstanding student and a genius in math but no one really sees that because he's too rebel to even care.He likes metal music, always has and is a composer too.

History:He had a normal life until his mother died and his father remarried and started a new life with his new wife. He hated that woman since the first day he saw her. His father never talked to them as he did before his mother died when that woman came to their lives. That changed Aidan completely for no one really cared about him or his sister and unlike his sister he wanted to make a statement, so he began doing things like going out to parties at midnight, drugs and other stuff until his father sent him and his sister to a boarding school.

Up for Love:yes, totally

Other:chews gum as a hobby and always has guitar picks in his pockets.
Les sanglots longs
Des violons
De l'autonne
Blessent mon coeur
D'une langueur
Monotone.

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*****Yay, time to start the story.*****

Kimy

I hate the fact my mom had to drive me to the camp in her porsche, but I was glad to be going. In her opinion I should be in year round boarding school. Thank god I wasn't. I was sick of uniforms, and the insane nuns that were the teachers.

A few people stare as I step out of the car, thank god I look somewhat normal. I am wearing jeans and the camp t-shirt I got in the mail. It was green, my favorite color. A few people stare and point. Fabolous. a man in the typical camp counselor slothing is handing out direction sheets and showing people to there bunk.

"What bunk am I?" I ask politely.

"Name?"

"Kim Desan."

"Bunk....8G." I would soon learn that G stood for girls. The boy's bunk next to ours was 8B.

I walk down a row of cute little cabins. Finally I find 8G.

Three other girls are already in the bunk.

"Hello!" I say cheerfully, "I am Kimy."

One girl says, "Hi, I am Evangeline."

"Pretty name," I say, "but do you mind if I call you Eve."

"Not one bit."

The other two introduce themselves as Abby and Anette, I would also soon meet Dari. She would be a bunkmate as well. They all seemed really nice. I shove my hot-pink suitcase under a bed and sit on it. A bit soft, but it would do.

I swing my feet of the bed and onto the ground. I walk to the bench outside the cabin and grab a Teen Vogue magazine as I do. And I sit out there, just reading, and enjoy the summer air.
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Jake

"See you in a few weeks!", my mom yelled from the seat.

The rest of my family in the minivan waved and said "Bye Jake". I tried to smile back. I didn't want to be at this camp, but after enough people saying "it's fun", or "it'll be good for you", the only way to stop them would be to just go and get it over with. Hey, a few weeks couldn't kill me, right?

The family minivan drove away, and I walked towards the only authority figure I could see. I got to him just after he was talking to some dark haired girl.

"So, where am I off to first?", I asked him, trying to sound happy. It didn't work.

"Right now, you just throw your stuff onto your bunk and have some free time", he told me.

"And where would that be?"

"Name?"

"Jake Cole"

"Cabin 8B. That way"

"Thanks".

I picked up my heavy suitcase and started walking towards where the counseler told me to go.

It was only 3 or 4 minutes of walking, but it was still a strange pain on my feet. When I finally saw the cabin, I took a strong look at it. It seemed strangely clean.

I walked right on in, and found it was pretty empty. I threw my suitcase under a bed furthest from the door and went back outside to look around. The cabin area here was pretty quiet, but a small group of girls seemed to be chatting away in their cabin, and another was sitting on a bench reading some magazines.

I wasn't looking forward to the time here, but right now, it was good. I decided to take my ear buds out of my pocket and threw them in. I turned on some Beatles music on the mp3 player and took a seat on the ground against the cabin, beside the door. I took a deep breath, closed my eyes, and relaxed.
"I'm fearless in my heart
They will always see that in my eyes
I am the passion, I am the warfare
I will never stop
Always constant,
Accurate,
Intense"
"The Audience is Listening", by Steve Vai




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*Darliana*

I sat on a bench, a fag hanging loosly from my lips. The counslers gave me weird looks but none said anything. I stood up, a poetry book trapped between two of my fingers, and stalked off towards the camp pool.
I wasn't wearing a bathing suit underneath my clothes, but I figured a simple pair of undergarments would do just fine. The pool wasn't open yet, but the fence was low enough to climb.
I stood at the edge, my bare toes slightly hanging over the edge and my clothes in a not-so-neat pile in one of the chairs, and an extinguished fag on the ground next to them. Closing my eyes I leaped in.
The water felt good, a cool relief from the unforgiving summer heat. It was a differnt world under the water; a world where I was detatched from my anger towards my sister, Faith, for sending me here. A world so peaceful, where I wasn't just Dari, the bad seed, a world where I was-
" Excuse me." I frowned and surfaced. When I succesfully wiped the water from my face I saw a boy standing behind the gate, I frowned at him.
" May I help you?" He just laughed. Laughed at me. That wasn't such a good idea.
" I don't think you're allowed to do that." I rolled my eyes and shook some water from my hair.
" You're point?" He just casually jumped the gate and sat in a chair by my clothes, eyeing my jeans suspiciously.
" Well, won't you get in trouble," he kicked off his shoes and laid back. I raised myself from the water and sat on the edge, letting my toes pulse through the water still.
" Yes, probably. But, if you hadn't noticed, so are you." He just laughed and stood up to stand by where I was sitting.
" True, so very true," he took of his shirt and slipped off his jeans as if it was the most casuall thing in the world to be undressing in front of a girl," in that case, can I join." I stood up and stared at him for a few before diving back in.
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