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Can you please review my story?

here's the link: http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic64143.html

thanks in advance!
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I'd appreciate it if you could review something for my sister. Here's the link:

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Thanks very much :) If I can return the favour any time I'll be glad to xx
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Hey Classy, I've set to work on a brand new novel, would you mind giving me your throughts on the Prologue?
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It's a bit like my Reg Carter book, but perhaps a little more "thriller" and "mystery" I'm hopingm a bit like Gregg Iles if you've ever had the chance to read his books.
Thanks, Ben.




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Fancy taking a look at a Column bestest buddy? :)
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I'd value your opinion! :D




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Could you review this please?
I am nothing
but a mouthful of 'sorry's, half-hearted
apologies that roll of my tongue, smoothquick, like 'r's
or maybe like pocket candy
that's just a bit too sweet.

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Hiya!! Can you review mine as well? post719654.html#p719654 Thanks in advance!
I will eviscerate you in fiction. Every pimple, every character flaw. I was naked for a day; you will be naked for eternity.
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Can you review Chapter 3 of my novel. There might be alto of grammar mistakes and no ones critiquing it so I'm not sure if there is or isn't.

http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic65072.html

Thanks a bunch!

Lots of :smt049, Nepo!
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Much appreciated, thank you very much!
I will eviscerate you in fiction. Every pimple, every character flaw. I was naked for a day; you will be naked for eternity.
Chaucer, A Knight's Tale

Deceiving others. That is what the world calls a romance.
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No problem! Thanks for the compliment and the gift. ;)




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Hiya, classy, coco here! Remember me? :D

I've been kinda awol lately what with school and stuff, but I'm back in YWS world now. I've used the spare time that I now have in abundance to go back and completely revamp my whole story [well, when I say story I mean the 10 chapters that I already posted]. I'd be super dooper greatful if you could check out the changes I've made and give me your honest opinion on them. Take as long as you need though, no rush :)

Of Loss and Love: chapter 1 http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic53716.html

Thanks a bunch!

*coco
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I'm back! I will be leaving on a trip tomorrow, (tuesday U.S.) so I want the requests to kind of stock up while I'm away. Please request!

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Hi there. Would you mind reviewing this poem for me? Thanks in advance!

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If I had wings, I would have opened them.
I would have risen from the ground.

-Mary Oliver



Just think happy thoughts and you'll fly.
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