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Hey friend! Do you think you can review this for me??
Pretty please :)
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WOuld you please review my latest story?

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The Janitors - Prologue

Thanks, Hero out.




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Lassie......Do you think you could review a 50k novel? It's in Advanced Critiques. I'm not gonna put the link so you can say no :) If you say yes I'll give the link. I've noticed that a lot of the review threads here don't mention Advanced Critiques. :P

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Will you review the novel I'm working on. It's called the Assassin's Redemption. Here's a link:
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Thanks.
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Hi! Could you review part twelve of my story in other fiction? Sorry If you don't understand what's happening, I just want a grammar, etc. review.

http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic58494.html

Thanks! And I don't mind harshness!

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Could you review my story please. The Janitors Chap 1:

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Thanks! TheHero




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Hello! I was wondering if you could please review my poem "Bird of Recess". It's in the Other Poetry category.
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Need some Class for my review. Would you mind, Act/Adv? Superhero teenagers...

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Someone says it should be Urban Fantasy or Sci-Fi but I'm not so sure.




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I am so sorry guys! My computer is being mean and I can't get online. I will do these as soon as possible. Sorry it's not a speedy quick review as usual.

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Hey classy! Coco here again, hope your well :D I've finally posted up chapter 10 for you to look at when your not busy. I'm kinda nervous to see what you make of it but fingers crossed you'll enjoy the chapter.
Thanks a million
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http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic59756.html

Heya! Could you please review the link above? It's part two of a three part story. If you want to read part one so you understand what's happening, there's a link within the story.
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Hi, Classy! I would absolutely love if you could review this for me... Please? Pretty please? With sugar and a cherry on top?

It's in the Other Fiction forum. The piece ties in some of the themes of Romeo and Juliet to a young boy's perspective on his country's advances, which happens to be Nazi Germany.

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Thanks! :smt003
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Could you please review this for me?
It's Science Fiction and 1200 words.

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Thanks very much :)
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