I don't want to seem rude, but could you review something else for me? Pretty please?
Your last review was really helpful, so I thought if I asked kindly enough, you might do me another one?
It's the next part of the one you've already reviewed. I don't think it's as good though at all, I need some help telling me what needs to be improved! I've probably done the same mistakes as I did in the first one as well, knowing me.
Annabel is actually a ghost, by the way. All of that gets explained in the first chapter! But your hallucination comment has actually given me and idea...
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