It's rather long (perhaps too long; I'll appreciate your thoughts on length), so I understand if this takes a while to get to. My main concern is if the dialogue is believable for each character, and if the pace is alright. Thank you! I'd be happy to review anything you need in return.
"Let's eat, Grandma!" as opposed to "Let's eat Grandma!": punctuation saves lives.
THE Janitors (Chap 1/Part 1) Action Adventure (Though some say it should be in either Sci-Fi or Urban Fantasy) I'd like you to look out for clicheness and also tell me where I should post this...
Done and done! I apologize for slowness. Deadlines and coursework are rather heavy right now, so I'm also going to apologize in advance for slowness--you all can still request reviews, but they might take a little while.
You don't have to do this right now, not even this week, but I posted another part of Chapter 1 of my novel and also Chapter 2 part 1. Here's the links if you can check the out: topic59120.html topic59461.html
Thanks if you can find the time.
Men's reach should exceed the stars... else, what's a heaven for?
Hey WD, I have three chapters of a Fantasy novel (Eventide) I've been working on up on YWS (and they have been up for a while I think...) but I never recieved as many reviews as I would have liked. So if you wouldn't mind looking at them? Or even just one of them would be great.
Name: Finding me back Genre:Historical fiction Length: Moderate Brief Synopsis: It has a little background of US-Iraq war but a normal teenager story. Magical a little bit I would say.Sorry,can't reveal much. I would be really grateful to you if you review it and you are surely up for some points.
I didn't read the format, if there was one. Sorry, im at school and have very little time to do this. Sorry, if this seems rude. I usually don't do this. Here's the link-
At this point, I really don't have time to commit to keeping up with some of the longer, multi-part pieces you all asked for help on. I will try to read the next parts at some point, but I can't promise to keep up with the different parts and review them. If there is any specific chapter or part you want me to take a look at, you can feel free to request a review on that part, but, unfortunately, I don't have time to follow multi-part stories right now! Thanks!
Just wondering if you could review my latest chapter of my Reg Carter series in historical fiction? (It's chapter four but doesn't particularly require any background for this particular extract)
