I don't know if you really care, but the second half of chapter one of The Elements: Secrets of the River is up. You could review that for me. Maybe? Please?
It's based on a video game called Super Smash Bros. Brawl, also SSBB. Have you heard about SSBB before? Because I know about 3 other people on this site who know about SSBB and are obsessed with it like me....
"We're all born with selfish desires, so we can all relate to those feelings in others. But kindness is something made individually by each person...so it's easy to misunderstand when others are trying to be kind to you." --Fruits Basket Book 1, page 134
This please? One of the first pieces of poetry I've done that I actually cared about, so I'd like a heaping helping of critique. I care more about general opinion than grammar, but anything is A OK. Mucho gracias.
Spoiler
I like people thinking that I have something so scandalous to say that I put it in spoiler tags, and I'm sorry that because of this selfish desire you were roped into reading this for not real lasting value.
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