Atlantis

This is my second try at a storybook and i hope it works. This is the plot of the story.Even if it seems bad comment and say what i should change.

An airplane crashes over a small unnamed island. The survivors are wounded and have no food or water. What they don't know, is that this is no ordinary island. Its Atlantis, a legendary island that holds all the mysterious and mystical creatures that have been told in myths and legends. But not all though creatures are nice and some are quite the opposite. Soon, they realize, once getting on this island, there is no getting off but most them of them don't care one bit. That's the least of their problems. the key is just to survive.

Ok, that's the plot. I think it could be a ton of fun because so can incorporate all your favorite creatures into the story and start to make the world as you go. Further into the story we can develop and evil race that live there and try to destroy them.

Fill this out.

Name:

Age:

Appearance:

Personality:

History:

Other:

After you will this out you must start on your character's view of the plain crash, then the fun begins

I will have a spot... Oh and I think I found the person who commented after you. check to see if I was right though.
I will post later.

*saves spot for girl* I'll post in a bit!

Name: Alyssa


Age: 17


Appearance: pale skin, white hair that reaches to her mid-back, and red eyes. She's an albino. She's about 5 '8 and thin, but not unhealthily so. She wears a black long sleeved shirt and blue jeans with white sneakers. She wears a gold locket on a chain at all times. She wears sunglasses almost all the time to cover her eyes, and tends to wear hats and hooded shirts to hide her hair.


Personality: She's friendly, but after years and years of being teased about her looks, she's become rather quiet.


History: Her father would abuse her when she was little because she was 'odd'. Eventually she told someone and she was removed from her situation. She will always carry a scar on her right cheek to remember him by though. Her older sister died in a car crash when she was five. When she began school she was always the target for bullies. She's just recently decided that enough is enough and ran away. That's how she ended up on the plane.


Other: Up for love.

Alright. I can't wait to start this, I'm thinking up the view on the plane crash!

I do have a question, how bad was the plane crash, I'm gonna make my viewpoint bad, but if you imagined it any other way let me know.

Name: Jhonnathan Mattyhews

Age: 26

Appearance: Jhonnathan, or Jhon.

Personality: Not one whom is good with ladies, so it'll be clear if he likes you, he likes to think things through before acting, and can be taken over by pure instinct when he feels threatened. Also a very sweet guy, who still has childlike innocence inside him.

History: He was an orphan up until the age of eleven, he was picked on, and the parents who adopted him were popular in their high school days, and regret picking on nerds. He was raised to be an odd mix between a nerd, and a popular kid, thus making him stand out from ANY crowd of people. He then became homeschooled, and had very little interaction with other kids.

Other: Up for love, if you're into the mushy gushy kind of love he'll dish out.

*Saves spot for a girl*

Name: Harmony Rose

Age: 21

Appearance: http://mykissrunsblack.deviantart.com/a ... -139679549

Personality: She’s shy, and hard to communicate with or get close to. Though once she’s opened up to you, she can be the most talkative, funny and witty girl.

History: Born, lived in England up until a year ago. She was bullied in school by half the girls in her year at school. When she turned 15 she resorted to drinking and smoking weed, this messed up her whole life. It isn’t until recently that she had help with her problems, finally quitting the habits. She’d finally started to get her life back on track, until the plane crash.

Other: Up for love, though she is very uncomfortable around men after her failing relationship with a boyfriend of two years, and would be hard to get through to.
She doesn’t drink alcohol at all, scared that she might become an alcoholic once more.


[By the way, I don't know if it was on purpose or not, but your title is spelt 'Antlantis' and not Atlantis. Sorry if it's supposed to be like that xD]

i will post soon, i gotta go to school now! Get more people to join please.

save me a spot

Name: Rachel (Ray) Watson

Age: 18

Appearance: 5'6. Messy dark brown hair. Very dark brown, wide eyes. She is very curvy, but not in an overweight way. Ray wears whatever she feels like; sometimes it can be eccentric, bright combinations. Other times it will be her favourite jeans and a jumper.


Personality: Ray is funny, bright and talktative. She isn't afraid of cleverness and makes the most of learning whenever she can. She doesn't tend to keep secrets and will be anyones agony aunt.

History: Ray was abandoned by her parents at birth, however this didn't affect her in a bad way; she took on the motto that "you can't miss what you've never had". She wasn't popular at school, but she was never bullied or picked on. She was one of the "funny nerds" who was always making someone laugh. In her last year of school she was involved in an abusive relationship which resulted in her ending up in hospital and her boyfriend going to court. Again, she isn't marred by this experience; but she decided to go on holiday for a bit to get away from it all.

Other: Up for love. Has a silver ring she never takes off.

Name: Frederick Stone

Age: 16

Appearance: Medium height and medium build. Extremely handsome with short brown hair. Blue eyes. Strong and smart.

Personality: Strong smart, and has that knack of always doing the opposite of what is expected. Loves to scare people and has a tinge of evil in him.

History: none

I'm interested. Do we have to be survivors of the crash? Or can we be inhabitants of the island?

I like th idea that people can be inhabitants too. So yes.

Hello, I thought I'd make a native If it's not right I can edit it to fit the plot.

Name: Asavari Meaning: Spirit of the heavens Pronunciation:(AH sa VAH rih)

Age: 16


Appearance: Tall (about 5'10), long legs, bright blue eyes, very slim build (like a runner, but not too skinny). She also has a birthmark across her face (the same colour as her eyes) it is small, and on her right cheek, it symbolises strength, beauty and Harmony. It is two short lines, one just below and one on her cheekbone, they are about 3cm long and have a slight curve to match the shape of her face.



Personality: Noble, kind and caring. Curious, adventurous and playful. She is very suspicious of the new comers.


History: Her father died in a tsunami. She lives with her mother, roaming the land, going wherever they please. Her mother is a keeper - she is in charge of storing knowledge, and she is constantly exploring to find it. She has no brothers or sisters.


Other: She has... abilities; she can send thoughts into people's minds, but not look into their minds or receive an answer telepathically, it's a one-way communication. (Tell me if this isn't okay and I shall delete it).

Up for Love: Yes.

That's fine. JUst make it mysterious in the beggining