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Wow look at how generous you are! Please can I get reviews for my story. It's a romantic fiction called Of Loss and Love, there are currently 4 parts to it.

http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic53716.html (chapter 1)
http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic53746.html (chapter 2)
http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic53800.html (chapter 3)
http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic53888.html (chapter 4)

Thank you so so much. I really appreciate it!

Nitpick me, bud!

Thanks

~Amy

Whoa. I'll get to it when I can, but I've just got new glasses and staring at the computer is making me dizzy.

Of Loss and Love, I
Of Loss and Love, II
Of Loss and Love, III
Of Loss and Love, IV

It's a spoon's life, really.

Done and dusted. Sorry it took a little longer than anticipated! Keep the requests coming.

Okay. So I have this personal narrative posted in Non-Fiction. I know you said that you don't review non-fiction, but I thought I would ask anyway. I have seen some of your reviews, and I believe you do a great job, especially, with sentence run-ons and such, which, admittedly, is one of my weak points. So, that is why I am asking.

Of course, if you do not want to review it, I totally understand. Here is the link: http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic53879.html

*recovers very old thread*

I figured there was no point starting a new one, so this is open again. All the guidelines on the front page still apply. If you haven't seen me around, I tend to do quite long reviews with a lot of nitpicks. I do not review any form of poetry. For Fanfiction, PM me and I'll consider it if it's based on a story I know.

Any requests?

I would very much like to request a review. This is the first chapter of my book. Thanks in advanced.


topic66771.html

Done, Phoenix! Thanks for the request.

Anyone else?

I'm not sure but do you take multiple requests? these are all quite short since I always cut my stories into parts:

Scifi
Lightning platoon 106
prologue and chapter 1 part 1 and 2

http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic60898.html
http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic61630.html
http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic66800.html

Yes, I do. I shouldn't, but I do. Especially if it's sci-fi.
A checklist, then.

Lightning Platoon 106 Prologue
Lightning Platoon 106 Chapter 1 Part 1
Lightning Platoon 106 Chapter 1 Part 2

EDIT: All done, Anzius. It starts brilliantly and then fades away a bit, which is unfortunate because I love your ideas. Hope you can act on some of the reviews.

http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/viewtopic.php?t=66775 please and thank you ^-^ i appreciate your kindness ^-^

All done, Leilani. Any more requests?

Would you be so kind as to review this short story? ^^ It's for a contest, so a review before the 19th would be very much appreciated! (Title- One of the guys (1). Genre- Romantic short stories)

thanks jetpack i really appreciate it ^-^

No problem Leilani. And Rosey, yours is done, but rather unhelpfully because there wasn't much to criticise!

More requests, pretty please?

I'm back! The Review Shack is open for requests. Anyone?