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blackbird12
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Sun Sep 05, 2010 10:48 pm
blackbird12 says... · Sun Sep 05, 2010 10:48 pm
Hey there! Would you mind reviewing this short story for me? Thanks in advance!

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Jetpack
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Mon Jan 24, 2011 8:44 pm
Jetpack says... · Mon Jan 24, 2011 8:44 pm
Opening this to requests again. I've taken off the guidelines on the first post of this thread, as even though I'm a little rusty, I'll review almost anything now - bar poetry, which is still quite a large chunk of YWS, I know. Oh, and graphic 18+ stories. Other than that, requests, anyone?




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Sins
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Mon Jan 24, 2011 9:21 pm
Sins says... · Mon Jan 24, 2011 9:21 pm
This is a bit of a big ask here, but...

Would you mind reviewing the first three chapters of my novel? The catch is that they're in five separate (longish) parts. Because of that, it's cool if you don't want to review them. I'd totally understand.

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Please and thank you!
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Jetpack
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Sins
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Thu Feb 03, 2011 4:09 pm
Sins says... · Thu Feb 03, 2011 4:09 pm
*Stalks*

Could you please review the next part of my novel for me, Jet? A small part of me is requesting this just so I have an excuse to stalk your wall again. :P

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Thanks!
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Camulaeus
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Sun Mar 20, 2011 4:16 am
Camulaeus says... · Sun Mar 20, 2011 4:16 am
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Would you mind reviewing this for me?
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Thu Oct 27, 2011 5:01 pm
mistielovesyou says... · Thu Oct 27, 2011 5:01 pm
Could you review this?

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