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...except to do homework occasionally and chill to music. I will gladly review anything given to me. I'm not much of a grammar corrector; rather, I'll review what I see in the depth of the story, the characterization, and things of that nature. If you're interested, feel free to drop me a pm or something.
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First customer here. Could you look at my action/adventure, Turning The Knives.

Chapter 1
Chapter 2
Chapter 3

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Sure thing. I'll get on it and pm you when I'm finished.
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Ello! If you feel like it, I've got something that might relieve your boredom for a day or two :P

It's a novel; urban action/adventure fantasy, if that's your thing.

Check my signature for the link! :lol:
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I'll take a look at it. I'll pm you with my thoughts when I finish. Please have patience, as that it could take a while. I can't say for sure how long it'll be.
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Could you please review the first chapter of my novel, Prydwen Hall? I'm about to send it off and I'd appreciate it if you could offer any feedback. Please help.

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Would you mind reviewing my story? It's fantasy, called the Horse from Transview, the first chapter of what might become a book.
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