Feed Me Poe-tree! [accepting]

I can't believe I'm doing this, but! I want to review more, but I honestly have no idea where to start in the poetry forms, and I don't want to subject anyone to my style of reviews unless they're wanted - well, mostly. I'll inflict some poor soul with my insane nit-picks, I'm sure, but I'll try to refrain somewhat

Anyhoo, I'll do just about anything in poetry, and only poetry (and maybe art work) for now -- I'm all rusty with my critiquing abilities!

A link to the last review I did for Anna, here.

Now FEED ME.

<3 Bek

The Butterfly Effect
Go ahead and nitpick. I won't mind.

Do you do lyrics Miss Mesh? It's similar to poetry...

Done, pinkangel!

Tnme, I've done very little with lyrics before, and always for friends, so I have the music right there, so I can mess with words to help fit melodies. So, I'm not sure how much help I'll be? I can give it a whirl, but I can't make any promises as to helpfulness.

Mesh! Mesh! Would you like to take a look on this:

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I've fallen in love with haikus and tankas recently, so these are some haikus I've been writing. I would love it if you told me what you think of them.

Also, you misspelled "poetry"... xD


xxx

I'd love it if you could give me your thoughts/corrections on Paradise Lost?

Thank you so much!!

~Techni

Techni, I'm working on finishing yours, since I got sidetracked a bit (upgrading my computer) in the middle. I should hopefully be done by tonight! Which seems a rather inordinate amount of time, I know. It also would help if YWS would decide to stop logging me out when I need it to cooperate!

Hey I'm Pudin!!
I'd really appreciate if you could review this one and tell what's right and what's wrong.

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thanks
Pudin

Also, you misspelled "poetry"... xD

I thought that was a reference to Edgar Allen Poe. xD

Would you: topic52001.html

Thank you! xxxxooo

Ok! Finally had a few minutes to finish yours, Techni, (so late, I know! I'm sorry!).

Pudin, I can't tell you what you did wrong, but I can tell you what I like/don't like, and why. Also, did you mean to link me to a poem? I can't do prose/fiction, but I'll gladly do anything poetry!

Marz! *noms* Yes'm! I'll go eat that one right now, actually! Or at least start; I seem to take forever to finish a review, but I hope they're still good/welcome?

Bek

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I love yoou!!!!!

I'm reviving this!

Here's the deal: I'll do anything in poetry; prose, it's a case-by-case basis. I know nothing about art beyond what I like/don't like, so ask at your own risk!

Mind checking this poem out? Please do tear it apart, I just wonder if it's got potential. Thanks in advance.

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*coughs*

Would you be so kind to review this poem?

Link: viewtopic.php?t=67956

Thanks in advance. :3

Hi there, me again! Mind checking out another poem? Your last review was so helpful that I can't resist asking. Preferably, tear it apart! Thanks a million.

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