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Hey guys! I'd like to review more, so I'll be happy to critique whatever you throw at me! :D

Strengths:

~Romance! When I'm on YWS, the Romance section is seriously the first place I go to. I gush over anything involving a bit of love.

~Even though I don't review it too often, Fantasy is what I'm really experienced in. I read way too much of it. :D

~Any kind of poetry I'll review.

Weaknesses:

~Art is my main weakness. I draw well, but when it comes to pointing out other people's flaws I'm simply horrible at it.

~Science Fiction is something I occasionally read, but when it starts getting into these technological advances and space stuff I'm completely lost.

So just post the link, genre, and perhaps a short summary. I'll get back to you ASAP. ^_^
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The Butterfly Effect

It's in other poetry
If you review I will be ever so grateful.
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Done, angel! Anyone else?
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Will you please review chapter ten of my romantic fiction piece called Let Me Love You

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Done! Nice job, by the way.

Make me happy! :D Give me things to eat *ahem* I mean critique!
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How about lyrics? Do you do lyrics?

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Eh, I can do them but I'm not sure I'll be too helpful. I occasionally write a song every once in awhile... so I'll give it a shot. :D
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That's okay :) No one's reviewed it yet and I just want some kind of feedback.

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Done!
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Will you please review my story Carnelian? I have chapters 1 and 2 up of it. The link goes to chapter 1, and you can reach chapter two from there. The story is a romance, but I posted in Historical fiction since its set in the 1800s. I would really love to know what you think of it. Please and thank you.
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Hi,
I have a story that I really want feedback on. It's the first part of a three part short story. Also a possible entry for the 'Once Upon a Time' contest. (It started as that but now it's way too long, that's why I'm splitting it up.)

Once Upon a Time
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