Haiku Train

BarrettBenedict · 2009-04-26T07:14:14Z

This is pretty simple and can be lots of fun. The premise is you take the last line of the haiku before yours and make it the first as yours. It doesn't necessarily have to be the exact line either. If you can cleverly change it in subtle ways so that it rhymes or sounds the same that is also cool. Example: This is a haiku five, seven, five syllables would be the format ... could be a doormat were it not for the large head must be tiger's skin etc. So here's a starter haiku: old film reels rotate monochrome images of what dogs imagine

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Sun Jul 10, 2022 1:10 am

WeepingWisteria says... · Sun Jul 10, 2022 1:10 am

The red heron feet
mark a map through the forest.
I follow blindly.

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"wist how dare you play with my heartstrings like that" ~ winter
"wist is in every rp" ~ley
“ah yes, fear Wist's smile :slight_smile: <- speaks of layers and layers of secrets” ~mint

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Sun Jul 10, 2022 6:09 am

Omni says... · Sun Jul 10, 2022 6:09 am

I follow blindly.
one eye looks to the future
one stuck in the past

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Sun Jul 10, 2022 8:15 pm

NewHope says... · Sun Jul 10, 2022 8:15 pm

One stuck in the past
One stuck in the furthest south
One running in love

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Sun Jul 10, 2022 8:25 pm

Plume says... · Sun Jul 10, 2022 8:25 pm

One running, in love
with new possibility.
It never tires.

I was born to speak all mirth and no matter.

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Sun Jul 10, 2022 9:14 pm

NewHope says... · Sun Jul 10, 2022 9:14 pm

It never tires
To stargaze in the meadows
Full of pink flowers

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Sun Jul 10, 2022 9:18 pm

Omni says... · Sun Jul 10, 2022 9:18 pm

Full of pink flowers,
the meadow is untarnished
fear not, innocence.

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Sun Jul 10, 2022 9:20 pm

NewHope says... · Sun Jul 10, 2022 9:20 pm

Fear not, innocence
Bumble bees only sting the crooks
My Dad used to tell me

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Mon Jul 11, 2022 2:07 am

JoyDark says... · Mon Jul 11, 2022 2:07 am

My dad used to tell
me stories in song form; my
lullabies were books

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woah
i actually made a post
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Mon Jul 11, 2022 2:13 am

NewHope says... · Mon Jul 11, 2022 2:13 am

Lullabies we’re books
And old poems were sweet songs
Sing to me again

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Mon Jul 11, 2022 2:16 am

WeepingWisteria says... · Mon Jul 11, 2022 2:16 am

Sing to me again,
Oh sweetest angel of death.
Give me strength to live.

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"wist how dare you play with my heartstrings like that" ~ winter
"wist is in every rp" ~ley
“ah yes, fear Wist's smile :slight_smile: <- speaks of layers and layers of secrets” ~mint

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