Haiku Train

BarrettBenedict · 2009-04-26T07:14:14Z

This is pretty simple and can be lots of fun. The premise is you take the last line of the haiku before yours and make it the first as yours. It doesn't necessarily have to be the exact line either. If you can cleverly change it in subtle ways so that it rhymes or sounds the same that is also cool. Example: This is a haiku five, seven, five syllables would be the format ... could be a doormat were it not for the large head must be tiger's skin etc. So here's a starter haiku: old film reels rotate monochrome images of what dogs imagine

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Mon Jul 18, 2022 2:14 am

fatherfig says... · Mon Jul 18, 2022 2:14 am

I might mirror tea
Warming what holds me burning
Those who crush my leaves

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Mon Jul 18, 2022 5:49 am

Kelisot says... · Mon Jul 18, 2022 5:49 am

I might mirror it
Becoming a reflection
A stable mirage

Bonus

Those who crush my leaves
I still remember my fall
When I was still young

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Mon Jul 18, 2022 6:17 am

NewHope says... · Mon Jul 18, 2022 6:17 am

When I was still young
And sunlight was still a glow
Brimming round my smile

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Mon Jul 18, 2022 6:19 am

Kelisot says... · Mon Jul 18, 2022 6:19 am

Brimming round my smile
And my cup of joy BURSTS BIG
It's euphoria!

I like Gabber. I recommend that you should also listen to it.

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Mon Jul 18, 2022 1:44 pm

fatherfig says... · Mon Jul 18, 2022 1:44 pm

It's euphoria
The plant dances to rainsound
Pleasant water's kiss

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Mon Jul 18, 2022 10:23 pm

Kelisot says... · Mon Jul 18, 2022 10:23 pm

Pleasant water's kiss
A sonata of heaven
Touching the zenith

I like Gabber. I recommend that you should also listen to it.

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Thu Jul 21, 2022 1:26 pm

Starve says... · Thu Jul 21, 2022 1:26 pm

Touching the zenith~
The wind's whispers up there start
with fee-fi-fo-fum!

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Thu Jul 21, 2022 1:29 pm

Kelisot says... · Thu Jul 21, 2022 1:29 pm

With fee-fi-fo-fum!
The giant steps, the dubstep,
Feel it's gritty bass

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Sun Jul 24, 2022 11:11 am

Kelisot says... · Sun Jul 24, 2022 11:11 am

Spoiler

I hope you don't mind me doing the haiku again twice in a row.

Feel it's gritty bass
But it's for the future parties
So don't feel so bad!

I like Gabber. I recommend that you should also listen to it.

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Sun Jul 24, 2022 1:18 pm

fatherfig says... · Sun Jul 24, 2022 1:18 pm

I don't feel so bad
Leaves tangling in my wet hair
Wind brushing my face

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Sun Jul 24, 2022 2:54 pm

Kelisot says... · Sun Jul 24, 2022 2:54 pm

Wind brushing my face
Purifying me deep-clean
I feel amazing

I like Gabber. I recommend that you should also listen to it.

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Mon Jul 25, 2022 7:34 pm

NewHope says... · Mon Jul 25, 2022 7:34 pm

I feel amazing
when sunshine warms my cold face
in deepest Winter.

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Mon Jul 25, 2022 8:01 pm

fatherfig says... · Mon Jul 25, 2022 8:01 pm

In deepest winter
I am preserved by your warmth
And your memory

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Mon Jul 25, 2022 11:28 pm

Kelisot says... · Mon Jul 25, 2022 11:28 pm

And your memory
It had such great mirth that I,
Became very jealous

I like Gabber. I recommend that you should also listen to it.

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Sat Jul 30, 2022 11:24 pm

Omni says... · Sat Jul 30, 2022 11:24 pm

Became very jealous,
when i looked through your hidden things
memories revealed

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