MV's Mystical/Awesome Reviews!

MidnightVampire · 2009-03-07T05:19:59Z

Welcome to MidnightVampire's Mystical/Awesome Review shop! I want to review more, and possibly get another star sometime soon...so give me what you want to review.. What I Can Review Dramatic Poetry Other Poetry Romantic Fiction Action/Adventure Fantasy Fiction Other Fiction What I love to review Narrative Poetry Lyric Poetry Photography and such (not promising the best reviews, but I do enjoy it) I especially love these (^) but I do like reviewing all of them, so I will. What I can't review (Sorry guys, I do have my limits) Horror Scripts Here's my reasons to why I don't necessarily like critiquing these: I usually stay up late, so if your horror is really good, then I'll be freaked. And if it's not, I'll still freak out. and for scripts,I don't think I could give them the review they deserve. I may make a couple exceptions, though. So post the title, genre and give me a link. Also, if its in the middle of the story, please fill me in. I'll try to give honest reviews...if you want me to go easy or hard on you or search for anything specific please tell me. I'm not good at spelling or grammer, though. What I Have Done: Stuck In the Past by saphire_earthgaurdian Mimimac's random story part. The Kingdom is Departed by TL G=Wooster Hellfire (part 1) by RayneChild Listless by Sinnful The Mansion (chapter eight part one) by Lord Anzius The Accidental Rebellion by Hippie Robin Hood:Sell out by Emilygale Tree of Deciet by TeenQueen What I Have Yet to Do: The Mansion: Chapter 8 part 2, Chapter 1 part 1 by Lord Anzius Phantasm: Prolouge,Chapter 1 part 1, Chapter 1 part 2 by nevermore So...let the reviewing begin!

Hippie

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Sun Mar 29, 2009 2:36 am

Hippie says... · Sun Mar 29, 2009 2:36 am

Looks like you've got plenty to review today. Here's another one.

topic45709.html

I must have posted this one at a bad time, because it got pushed back to page 2 before it got any reviews.

It might make more sense if you read chapter 1

topic45145.html

You've already read the prologue. Your review of that was fantastic.

Thanks

Q: Where do you go to buy shoes?

A: At the shoez canal, lol.

emilygale

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Reviews 3

Sun Mar 29, 2009 6:47 pm

emilygale says... · Sun Mar 29, 2009 6:47 pm

Hi, would you be able to review my Action/adventure story? for now there is only two chapters to it though i hope to upload a third, i would really like to hear your critique and would love it if you would review it. It's called Robin Hood:Sell out

here's a link

topic45719.html

sorry if its a bit long

Emilygale
xxx

MidnightVampire

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Mon Mar 30, 2009 2:53 am

MidnightVampire says... · Mon Mar 30, 2009 2:53 am

Alright..I really have my arms full right now, I guess.
Anzius- Could you give me a summary of what's going on right now?
I'm a little too lazy to look read eight chapters.

To everyone else-I got more requests than I thought I would between the next time I checked and last time, so it will take me a little longer to get to them, but I will review them, I promise.

I realized that I said I'd be gone for only two weeks...but I was gone for much longer.I hope to stay on this time.

TeenQueen

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Sun Apr 12, 2009 6:11 pm

TeenQueen says... · Sun Apr 12, 2009 6:11 pm

post533358.html#533358

It'd podted in lyric poetry.
Umm...I know that you're busy and all with other reviews, so you can take your own time to get to my poem...
Thanks a lot,
TeenQueen!

"No tears in the writer, no tears in the reader. No surprise in the writer, no surprise in the reader." ~ Robert Frost

Lord Anzius

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Mon Apr 13, 2009 4:50 pm

Lord Anzius says... · Mon Apr 13, 2009 4:50 pm

http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic46616.html

To copy reality is good... But to create reality is much, much better.
-Giuseppe Verdi-

Lord Anzius

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Fri Apr 24, 2009 12:23 pm

Lord Anzius says... · Fri Apr 24, 2009 12:23 pm

http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic46616.html

mansion ch 8 part 2

To copy reality is good... But to create reality is much, much better.
-Giuseppe Verdi-

Lord Anzius

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Reviews 127

Sat Apr 25, 2009 8:57 pm

Lord Anzius says... · Sat Apr 25, 2009 8:57 pm

http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic47202.html
sorry to bother you again , but I want you to read this story.

And there was drum roll
chapter 1 part 1.

To copy reality is good... But to create reality is much, much better.
-Giuseppe Verdi-

nevermore

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Fri May 15, 2009 12:12 pm

nevermore says... · Fri May 15, 2009 12:12 pm

Heya! I would like you to review my works, but I guess you wont. They're somewhat scary, horror, but I swear, you'll enjoy them. So, please, I'm begging... hehe.. 'cause I think my works were the only ones with no reviews. Readers seemed to freak out..peace out!

Just please review..here are the links..

PHANTASM:Prologue and Chapter One (Part One):

http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic47850.html

and the other one, PHANTASM: Chapter One (Part Two):

http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic48017.html

Thanks!

DreamyAlice

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Wed Jun 07, 2023 8:16 am

DreamyAlice says... · Wed Jun 07, 2023 8:16 am

Hello, I am one of the res crew mods here on YWS. This is a message just to inform you that I will lock and archive this thread as it is not active anymore. We have to archive and lock the inactive threads to keep the forum organized so no worries, if you'd like to reopen it at any point in the future please contact a current resources moderator, we would be happy to reopen it for you ^-^

-ALICE

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