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The Outcasts

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Should we start over? Only vote if you are part of the storybook please!

yes! i am lost
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No! I think we are doing fine
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I don't Care
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Evan~~

After ditching the car I ran into the town. Selecting a good looking store I ran in covering my face with a mask from the car and held my hand out at the guy.

"Give me all the cash in the register." I told the man. "And i want all of you to load those bags with food." I said the last part addressing the people.

"why should we you ain't got no gun." The cashier said.

"I don't need one." I said. Then I raised a few chunks of rock from the floor with my mind. Instantly i felt a wave of difference come over me. My hair and eyes changed from white to brown. And my usually calm self changed to a more serious one. With a heave i then shot the rocks at the man. He was wide eyed and I could tell the others were to. The man nodded at me then he began to pull money out of the three registers, and the other people started to pull foods off the racks and carry them into the bags. Then they carried them to me and i tied them together at the handles. Then when I knew I would barley be able to carry these I grabbed them and the cash and was ready to leave when i kicked someone behind me. I turned to see a Man about twenty holding a broom ready to strike me. But I felt him before he could and he was knocked out cold.

With that I ran out of the store and to where i left the car. Stuffed the bags in then sped back to the woods. Then When I was driving I came to a stop. IN front of me were a group for kids, almost all my age. I stopped the car and waved.

"Hey, Evan. Need a lift." I said and hopped out to meet with them.
That User Who Changed Their Name A Dozen Times And So No One Ever Knew Who They Were Half the Time and When They Did Only Used Bolt.

The tragic tale of losing all #Brand for nothing in return.

The Take Away Is You Probably Know Me As Bolt




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Sorrry about what i said. we arre going to write as we were, but grammer is very important!
Last edited by imapoemperson on Sun Mar 08, 2009 6:57 pm, edited 1 time in total.




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What is happening: Robin is flying over the forest looking for other outcasts.

The wind blows past my face tugging at my soul




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* you got we all wrong I see my charecter as having a sad little cruch that Robin didn't return is all and please don't make us start over because if you do this will crash and burn so please I'm gonna just do another one as we are but if you decide to change it and start over anyway I'll delete this post*

Jack

Max wasn't so much a regular in are group more a person we bumped onto occasionly "good to see you again" I said high fiveing her the girl on the floor was still tired. "come on love got along way to go" I said to her picking her up "need to get you good shower rinse off all the traking gel they rubbed on you, look like you could use some patching up to" the girl walked a little bit and Max picked up her bag, she opened it and took a black pistol. She put in her pokert. " I got a lot of good diamonds from that place my parents are going down" I gave her a sceptic look.

We walked into a pharmesty and looked around " hey I'll find the stuff you go wash her" Max said looking at the drugs behind the counter. I took the girl Kori to the staff showers I carefully undressed her before turning the hot water on in the shower and lifting her in I turned her around slowly before letting her support her own weight she did for a couple of seconds before falling over I caught her and held her back in the shower making my jacket soaking. The hot water was waking her up and she clutched at her self as she became more aware even half dead people can be embarresed I thought and stepped to the side "okay I 'ok go get what you need wash your self soap and all I'll be back" I started walking away towards the front desk "wait Jack did you see any thing" Kori asked I shook my head but my school boy smile gave me away.




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Deleted, never mind. I've decided I made a stupid decision. Please allow me to continue!
Last edited by Flux on Sun Mar 08, 2009 7:10 pm, edited 1 time in total.
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Give him a mask and he will tell you the truth."

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Forget everything i said here
Ummm... I have just a few things to say.
1. I think that we should start over completely, so forget everything that has happened before, and please delete all of your posts. Sorry this is all my fault; I should have been the first one to post, so if i don't get to it tonight please dont post anything.

3. For your first post please tell what your character is doing at the moment.

I was just really tired last night and made a rash decision lets continue as we were and please don't drop out!




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"Yeah, it can come in handy," Kayla told Kale. "So, if you're an outcast also...what can you do?"

Kayla hoped she could do something somewhat helpful. It could help if they needed it.
"Can't stop, won't stop. I must be dreaming."




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Max~~~

Jack, me and Kori went back to the hideout. Jack carried Kori and I carried Kori's stuff. He went to go shower her off, the perve, and I went to the kitchen to eat since granolas get a tad boring after a while. I chewed over my plan for the diamonds and smirked at the haul I would receive. Someone finally walked in..
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Okay, it's short, I know ...

Kori Baker

After showering, she felt very much awkward. She knew she should be grateful for his ... version of "help" but she seriously saw in a much different way. Kori carefully dried herself off, wincing whenever she hit a still-open wound, or a bruise. Her wet hair clung to her face. It was drying in a million different directions.

Someone had given her an extra pain or clothes, so Kori pulled on the oversized sweatshirt and athletic pants, and slipped her feet into her worn out sneakers. Where was her backpack? I really hope they didn't steal it and leave ..., Kori thought, rounding the corner of the pharmacy.

Kori pushed open a random door and peered in. Everything was dark. She flicked the lights on. "Max? Erm ... Jack?" Someone swivelled around quickly. It was only Max. Thank God! Kori thought, her heart pounding.
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Yeah ... someone else is going to have to give it a go. I have nothing.
"Man is least himself when he talks in his own person.

Give him a mask and he will tell you the truth."

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Jess

I sat silently on the coach of the hideout it was a nice place for and outcast. A small apartment in the middle of new jersey it ad a kitchen and two bedrooms as well as a living room which was packed with two pull out sofa beds. I wasn't inside though I was out side on the small balcony cradiling my belly and waiting for the small kicks "what powers will you have my angel" I whispered to the baby secretly praying it wouldn't have any powers. Jack walked out on to the balcony not wearing his black coat "Jack when you and Robin and Jay find Rob your just gonna be so surprised he's so hot" I smiled just thinking about it he was my own perfect little Edward "we did find him, I'm sorry Jess he's wasn't okay he's dead" Jack finished their was no easy way to tell someone their love ones dead which is why Jack had said it so bluntly. I felt tears come to my eyes and I started to sob quietly even so I was still aware of the prying eyes of many of the other Outcast. Jack left.


Jack

I left Jess she had to deal with this her self that was the only way she'd get through it I said hi to Kori as I passed her and walked into my room Jay was already their. "Jack be nice to Jess she's new" he said in his ever knowing way I nodded and he walked out of my room, I put my gun on the table next to my bed and kicked off my jeans before going to sleep it wasn't that late but I hadn't slept in days.




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*sorry Im gonna make up for that last post*

"Oi!" I put my attention on the pans on the large stove.

She silently and cautiously took a seat at the bar, and watched me expertly flip my creations of chocolate and batter. I then proceeded to stir the scrambled eggs in the pan, adding cheese, the bacon sizzled beconing to be flipped over.

"Brinner?" I offered still not looking directly at her.

"What?"

"Breakfast, dinner that whole deal." I looked through the cabinets, "Did they reorganize again?"

The scents of my creations wafted through the air and had obviously had smacked Kori in the face, I heard a low growl of her stomach and I pulled out three plates, if Jack decided to join us or if we had an unsuspecting guess. Robin would be here soon, that was a definite so I pulled out a forth plate.

I put out the food, expertly put together in front of Kori and she gulped it down in big chomps.

"Hungry eh?" she nodded and went back to her food.

I was putting food on a plate for myself when someone else joined us.
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Kori Baker

Kori nodded gratefully at Max and scarfed down her food, ravished. It hurt to swallow, with her stomach muscles moving and all. "Hungry, eh?" Max said, watching Kori eat her food without any manners. Luckily it was only girls there.

"Yeah," Kori mumbled between a mouthful of food and stuffed another forkful into her already-full mouth. Max got up and put some food on her plate. Kori saw her hand slip as her head darted around. She heard the crack of the glass on the floor, and when Kori looked up, a figure stood in the doorway. Kori was frozen with fear.
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Anyone can jump in now, ha ha ... heh.
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Give him a mask and he will tell you the truth."

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"Woah calm down." I said. I knew I looked like one of those government officials after the outcasts. I had to change quickly once the cops came and I managed to steal a uniform and a car. Their reaction must make them outcasts.

I stared at the two girls, they looked pretty pathetic actually. One girl with some pretty crazy brown hair was frozen in fear. And another girl who looked similar but more sporty stood holding a spatula at me like it would shoot bullets.

I quickly change back to Jonie, still not wanting to reveal my true identity.

"I'm an outcast too, it's okay." I tried to calm them down, but they still didn't look to great. I swear one was almost disappearing.
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ROLAND

I rose my hand and threw the guy through the window, turning as I did it. There was another agent in front of me. He fired the pistol in his hand so I brought up a shield. My body quaked as the bullet impacted. I cursed quietly and pulled teh gun out of his hands, firing it while it was still in the air. He fell to the ground screaming and I ran past.

I ran down the hallway of the Inn, looking for a way out. I saw a stair case and ran down them. I slowed when I got to the first floor and put the gun in my jacket. I walked out into the lobby, and across to the parkinglot. A couple of agents ran by me so I pulled up my collar and looked down. When they passed me I jogged to the road and called a taxi. I needed to get out of town. That forrest would probably be fine for a while, but I wouldn't be able to stay indeffinately.
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You got that right, Lauren!

Kori Baker

A rush of cold water felt like it was dumped through Kori's body, and slowly the shadow began to coarse through her veins. She felt her legs wavering, and soon she was completely engulfed in shadow, just watching the two girls.

"Kori, where'd you go?" Max said. She wasn't trusting the other girl yet, even though she had said she was an outcast too. Kori's head appeared, then the rest of her body did. [i]Dang it! Why didn't I think about doing this [/b]before?
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That's all I've got!
"Man is least himself when he talks in his own person.

Give him a mask and he will tell you the truth."

-- Oscar Wilde



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