Young Writers Society

Ok! This is perfect! We will start now! I just have a couple thingd to say first.
1. Please no more escapee's i wanted there to be less than other people, so unless i have already talked to you there are no more being created.
2. Again with the rating. I know that i said PG13, but i want to keep it as PG as possible. SMALL relationships are ok.
3. Try and keep everyone in character.
4. If you are going to add another character later on tell me first.
5. No character is perfect.


Great job so far! have fun!

*Question: Are we all starting alone and finding each other?*

Crunch, crunch, crunch. Kale made her way through the forest, heading back towards her campsite. I'd better gather some berries to eat, she thought and added a sigh aloud. If only I could hunt.

Kale picked some berries that she knew were edible from the bushes and returned to her camp.

*Not a long entry but I wasn't sure what to post. *

She kept running, making sure they weren't following her. Trees rushed by and suddenly she felt her power draining. What was about thirty miles per hour suddenly became twenty, then ten, and then she stopped.

She brushed her dark hair out of her eyes and drew in a breath. Where was she? She looked around at the trees towering over her. Kayla started walking down a trail. Suddenly she heard noises and walked slowly towards them. She noticed a girl. She was tall and she was wandering around her campsite.

Kayla didn't know who she was but she decided better safe then sorry. Using all her strength she felt the power run through her and she didn't see her arms anymore. She thought that when she was invisible like now she could see herself but she learned she couldn't. She wandered towards the girl and watched her closely. Looking for anything suspicious.

Max~~

Max expertly lept through the trees making sure that she stayed ahead of the roaring cop cars.

How did they find me?

She was confused, she had expertly gotten to and fro from the bank where alot of valuables were kept and even manged not to set off the alarms. Her all black attire made her blend into the night sky and she hid in a large tree. in her right hand was a bag full of large and uncut diamonds. She was going to sell them to warring companies that were trying to bring her parents down. She smirked to herself and the cop cars passed, going in a completely opposite direction. These diamonds were gonna bring her in a big haul and cripple her parents. the night was silent and she lost her footing, down she went and she hit the ground with a thunk.

*I'm gonna start hope I do it right, science forever dream since are characters abilities are the same can they be brother and sister*

Jack

I pulled out my iPhone and called Robin as I looked through the pockets of one of the Eight dead soldiers it wasn't me this was information Jay got when he scanned through the mind of an outcast we just met, Jess.
"Robin the info's right but he's still here as well as about 8 soldiers only their not exactly well um, living." Their was silence on the other side of the phone for a second "anything else?" She asked
"nope nothing boss they've all got their well lets just say say the walls are brain coloured, Jay didn't see any of that did he" I asked really Even if Jay had seen it and thought their was some danger he would of still told me to
go. "No that wasn't in Jays readout" Robin replied she was serious right now she was always like this when she was worried about something as was Nichole "hey Robin I'm sure it's all right I mean it's not that fresh it's dried and any..." I was interrupted "heeelp me" someone groaned desperately I hung up and moved slowly over to the bathroom were the groan was coming from. I kicked the door open inside was a soldier all dressed in black with a bullet proof jacket clawing at his stomach sat their "he's still here" the man growned. Dam I thought jumping backwards Most outcast were in groups or together but some went mad with power and just kind of went around leaving a trail of human debris. As a man appeared behind me I dived out of the nearest window and fell the three stories landing on the roof of a bus I rolled off and took out my hand gun. Shit I thought I only 5 bullets I'd used all the others when we were crossing into california a few weeks ago. I ran down the nearest alley but I could feel him just behind me then I was thrown with out anything touching me. I was chucked into ongoing traffic and a car crashed into me the Killer looking from the sidelines I pulled my leg back into postion and felt the cuts healing, now their was a new glint in the Killers eye "an outcast" He said moving toward me. He didn't get close before Robin lifted me up and started carrying me home. If any of us ever just hanged up the phone it was her call to come get us. "I was kinda hoping you would pick me up when I jumped out the window".

*the whole people thing is plot building for my charector hope it's okay*

Kale moved around camp, putting firewood here, putting up a stray article of clothing or two, and tidying up all around.

She got an eerie feeling but ignored it.

Then, she heard a crackle of leaves a few feet from her. She whipped around. "Is anyone there?"

*Here's my post. Plenty of room for someone to jump in, just telling you that now.*

Kori Baker

She cowered in the corner of an alley, behind a disgusting garbage can. Two men loomed over her. "An outcast, are you?" his voice was gruff and powerful. When Kori didn't answer, the man grabbed her neck and pulled her two her feet. "Answer me!"

Kori squinted her eyes shut. This pain ... it was nothing like the faces they made in the movies. Kori wanted so much just to vomit on the man, or kick at him, but she didn't have any air. "Why aren't you answering. We know you're an outcast, but why won't you confirm that?" He jerked his head towards Kori, and the other man threw a punch at her head.

She wobbled backward, grasping her throat. Air ... it was so good to be able to breath again. Kori was hit again ... and again ... she felt the blood bubble from her nose and dribble down her mouth. She sucked in a breath as the next impact came to her stomach. The bile rose, and she leaned over, on her knees, begging for mercy. The two men dragged her up by the arms. "Let's take her back." The began dragging Kori's limp body back, blood and bruises, but Kori wasn't completely unconscious.

She felt her body grow cold, and soon she slipped out of the grasps of the two men. "What? Where'd she go?"

"How should I know! She just disappeared!" The scrambled around looking for Kori, but she was right underneath them-- hiding in their shadow.

She couldn't remember how long she'd been there for, but Kori had lay unconscious in a park, dazed and broken. Her eyes opened, a blur of navy. Someone loomed over her protectively. "Are you okay?" They said.
- - -
See? Room for someone to come in!

I have to learn to be quieter, Kayla thought to herself. She looked down at her arms which were slowly becoming visible.

"You caught me," she said and shrugged her shoulders.

The girl jumped back, clearly surprised. "I'm Kayla," she continued. "And you are...?"

Max~~

The thump had made Max dazed and confused, she wandered out of the woods stupidly.

"Where the bloody hell am I?" she murmured.

The cops were gone and I still had the bad intact and I tossed the bag of diamond into my nap sack. There were benches and a girl was laying down near them.

Random place to sleep..

She walked over and surveyed her, "Holy crap!"

The girl was bleeding and bruised, Max picked up her limp body and took her back and layed her up against a tree. She set up camp and waited for the girl to wake up.

"You ok?" Max asked when she finally woke up.

"Kale," Kale introduced herself. "I'm Kale. I see you're an Outcast, too. Invisibility... Nice." She smiled.

Kori Baker

Dazedly, she nodded her head. She groaned as she moved. Her stomach hurt. "Slightly," She muttered, propping herself up on the tree further despite the fact she was in an unpercedented amount of pain. "Thank you."

There was a heavy-looking bag on the ground. As much as Kori wanted to know what was in it, she remembered first-things-first. "I'm Kori ... and you might be ...?"

Evan~~

Darting through the bushes I made sure not to make a sound. The area was thick with much foliage so I could walk through and not be seen. But this was to risky to leave to chance. I climbed up the large tree then hid in the leaves. Under me the forest was now active as large men cracked the branches. After the last defining crunch I kept climbing up till i reached the top.

I know had a view for a miles out. The towering silver building rested to my right. The lights bringing life to the forest hiding it. Men and women of a variety of sizes ran out in waves. Watching them carefully I saw that the forces were thinning and the area i was in would soon be a virtually empty. Waiting for a bit I saw the final group dart out of the building and I jumped from my spot.

I ran into the buildings walls then searched for a vechile. my eyes found a jeep near the back. Running to it the bright lights began to fall on me. They had found me . Putting more speed in my run I was able to reach the car. I hopped in and hit the throttle.

The car went forward with uninspected speed. I had to lighten my hold on it to keep from crashing. Skillessly I drove out of the building and into the open forest. Speeding past the countless guards I found my way away. After I got away from the forest I ditched the car and ran. I was free. But what now?

Jack

We flew through the soft breeze high above the clouds were the moon could be seen lighting up the sky. "You know I did get one good thing out of all those soldiers" Robin nodded "oh yeah what is it"
"well you know how when you escape from the facility you still have the tracking chemical in your blood well this gps shows were they are and we got a nice new one file says she sinks into your shadow weakness she's suseptital to violence and not that strong" Robin smiled the number of outcast was going up hugly soon the governent would have to go global just to keep track of us and well we were always looking for ways to widen are group of three. "so what should we go see her" Robin asked looking at the gps and swiviling so we could go in the right direction "we, Robin we have a simple operation I'm the people person Jays the is he teling the truth guy and your the leader drop me off near them Ill walk the rest of the way."
"okay call me if you need me to pick you up remember you can't bring them home until the tramer on her as worn off" I nodded as she dropped me of I walked to them and was surprised to see a girl sitting next to her.

Kylie.

I strolled through the forest calmly. I didn't have anything to worry about. I wasn't myself, or rather who I was supposed to be, so they wouldn't find me.

I was beginning to feel the weight of the large black duffle bag though. I kept this bag for occasions such as these.

They had come to Steven Richards apartment to look for him this time. I got out fast. Poor Steven though, he will just disappear.

Now I was Janie Martin.

I stopped for a moment to pull Janie's long annoying red hair into a pony tail. I really hated some of my aliases.

I started walking again. Sirens broke through the silence.

"crap, i need to get out of this city." I said to myself as I broke into a run. There had been a recent growth in the number of outcasts lately, which was strange since you are only born an outcast and I've never heard of anyone being made that way. The governement is trying to destroy them so I don't see why anyone would want to make more.

I keep running into the trees, cursing whoever brought the police this close to the forest.

Max~~

Max looked over at the girl, "I'm Max!" finally a person to talk to she thought to herself, "How did you get beat up so bad?"

The random person kept leering at the bag full of expensive rocks and answered ,"Some guys, they found out I was an outcast" she cringed at the word and fell back.

A figure landed silently near her set up camp and Max noticed that it was none other than Jack,

"Yo," Max acknowledged him and Kori looked at him questioningly. Jack looked at the bag and then nodded to Max smirking.

"At it again eh?" he said sighing.

"Yee-up"

"What are you talking about?" Kori asked confused.

"My late night camping expeditions" Max lied through her teethe because she didn't know this Kori girl all that well.