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Hi! I really want to get my review count up, so please post links to stories you need reviewed here! But first here's a bit about the reviews.

So I'll basically review anything, but I'm extremely bad at reviewing poetry, so please try to keep it fiction only. In fanfiction, I will do my best, but if I have not read the book, I won't be able to give you that good of a review.

Also, I do have school, so I'll do my best to keep up with the requests. But no promises on how quickly they'll be coming.

Oh, and please tell me how hard you want me to be. Like, if you want me to nit-pick or not.

Anyways, that's about all I have to say, so post away!




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YAY! I'm first!

Go as hard as you want. Nit-picks and odd sentences... all of it!
Link here!
Thank you so much!
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First review is done! Anyone else?
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I'm going on a ski trip until Friday night, so I won't be able to review anything until then. But feel free to post anyways! :D I'll get to your reviews as soon as I get back!
~ Patricia Tina :smt006

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Hiya! Do you think you can review mine? Pretty please! Here's the link.
post513119.html#513119
It's in fantasy, hope you like it.
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Second review finito! Any more? :D
~ Patricia Tina :smt006

Don't look in the spoiler.

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Hey, I have something for you. It's part of a novel but I'm not that far into it yet. There are a few parts already. Feel free to skim through them if you want but I'll give a short summary.

Summary: Dakota finds out her best friend Luke's mom commits suicide. She is trying to help him get through it but she doesn't know how considering she's never been through that. Luke must decide if he wants to stay with his dad who lives farther away from Dakota or stay with his step dad who lives by Dakota. The previous parts are told in Dakotas point of view. This part is Luke's point of view.

If you could help, that would be great.

Link: topic44680.html
Genre: Other Fiction
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Please please please? Review my work?

I will repay with reviews of my own n_n Just click the link in my signature.
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I have a couple; I won't give you my fan-fics, unless you have read Warriors or Redwall.

The Test A True story/event

Vashoa's Life My first story-ever.

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Hiya!
Could you please review my story?
the link is here topic45833.html
Thank you so much!




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