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* don't know, when he finally come though i will catch him up, or maybe have to take his character over*
Mando Sensai~~
Mando stood his ground nit bothering to move. Though the kids were better then he thought they would be he did not need to really contiotrate to avoid attacks. Mando saw the fight happen and laughed, looked like this team would not be that good toghther. Suddenly Usiko sat alone on the grass, it was hard to tell but Mando thought he was wearing a smile. Then suddenly he heard a twig snap and jumped up just as Akira kicked where he was. Akira jumped up after him and his hand just missed the bells. Mando kicked at Akira and saw him fly back to the forest. Then Mando looked up just in time to see Usiko coming at him once more, stupidly from the front.
"not so stealthy are you but hey you are naruto's boy" Mando said
"well i don't need to be stealthy" Usiko said and kicked at the master, who easily dodged it and kicked Usiko back and he puffed to smoke.
"got ya" Mando heard a voice from behind and then saw the foot of a clone. Mando had been tricked, and was unable to dodge the kick. Mando was then shokced to find him on his way to another Usiko's punch. Mando quickly made a few hand signs and suddenly a pillar of earth rose under the usiko and shooting him up. Mando landed and then before a second had past he saw three Usikos and a Akira charge at him. Mando did a few more signs and then did the same earth rising attack as before. To find them all go up in smoke and the originals attack him. Manod easily jumped over them kicking theirs heads. Mando landed were the laid and said. "your going to have to do better then that to get the bells," and laughed. But the laughter was sort lived, at that moment he heard wind whoosh around him and a giant blade come to him. And on top of that as the blade approached he saw the two boys next to him disappear into clone smoke. The blade hit his leg but barley hit him, brushing past it .
"ha that was a weak attack, better wok on that accuracy." he said.
"not really" Mando heard Usiko said followed by the sound of bells. "she had it perfect, so we stay ninja right"
"i guess" Mando said, then added in his mind, these kids might just have a future as ninjas after all.

*So I'm skipping ahead a bit, I hope you don't mind. This is kinda of after they are dismissed and it is just talking about how excited Suika is and everything. Sort of before their first mission.*

Suika~ Village

Suika was psyched for her first mission. She'd jumped up in joy when she'd found out that Mando had said yes that they could stay ninjas. But she was also made because he'd said her accuracy was horrible. Suika had just shrugged off the comment, though, and made herself happy by saying if it weren't for her amazing Maru Katana, they wouldn't be ninjas. She needed something to mkae her feel a little superior to the "Amazing Usiko."

Suika walked down a desolate path, the sky darkening each minute. The sun was setting beyond the horizon. Lamps were being flicked on in windows and at outside stores. Suika stopped. What was that? her mind panicked. Her head darted around. There it was again. And again. It sounded like the snapping of a twig.

Then she saw a shadow. Suika was about to run, but something was holding her back. Curiosity? The need to feel danger? Or did she just want to prove her skills?
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I figured that this could be an open spot to bring someone in, or just to get some dialogue going to get to know some characters better.

LaReina!

Usiko~~ (i am switching to first person)

I was so excited about staying a ninja. It was because of his clones and plan that they became them along with Suikas amazing accuracy. Who else could catch those two tiny strings with such a big weapon. I was so excited not even Uncles neji's Super tough Byakugan training could not bring him down. Though every thought of him as so good because he was the the past hokage's son and a Byakugan user, he was terrible at the byakugan. He was not very good at focusing on the chakra points or doing the thin chakra hits, plus he could not use the sight that well either. He could at most mange to hit one or two points ad keep the sight on for about 5 or 10 minutes. After the training Usiko went back to his home and then took a quick cat nap, or as his fathers were called fox naps, before dinner

Suika~ Village

Suika's eyes widened in fear, but all that approached her from the shadows was a mangy mutt. She rolled her eyes. "you overreact so much sometimes Suika," she told herself, and continued walking to her home with a bounce in her step.

She wondered if some of the other rookies had finished their tests and stayed ninja as well. And she also wondered how pissed some of the girls in her class were at her. After all, some of them found the Uzumaki twins a little cute.

Suika found herself snorting with laughter at the very thought of their angry faces. It made her think of the stories her mother told her. About how Uchiha Sasuke used to be very popular back in her time.
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We're going to have to find a way to meet up again squad!

LaReina!

Yahiko looked around, but could find no trace of his new sensei, "Where did he go?"

"As if I should know?" Replied Koka with another question.

"Think, where would a simpleton go around here?" The group thought for about fifteen minutes before Yahiko had an idea, "The memorial. It's the biggest thing to importance around here." The others agreed and headed out.

When they reached their destination Sarjen sensei looked pleased, "So now you've found me, not you have to hit me."

Yahiko unsheathed his sword, "Attack consectively, one of us is bound to hit him." And so they did. Time after time again he either dodged the attack or blocked it with a kunai, "We need a plan?"

Sarjen seemed pleased that they had found him together and as they thought he asked, "Came unprepared? Well... that makes this fun."

Genjutsu wasn't his style, but as he quickly made the hand signs he captured all three with his jutsu, making them relive horrible memories in stunning detail. The method which it started would be no different then usual, the target would simply see a blinding flash as Sarjen cut through their body and they believed they were about to die. The memories would assault them by using their own fears and stimulation to trap them in a nightmarish world.

Koka was the first to break the jutsu, nearly immediately. By quickly halting his flow of chakra he was able to dispel it, and in a quick move he used the back end of his blade to knock Yahiko and Denrei out of the genjutsu. Koka was the most skilled at Genjutsu and spared no time in countering Sarjen's move with one of his own.

Quickly signing with one hand the signing out Heaven's Torment, Sarjen became blinded by the light. Sarjen quickly cut his own flow to release the jutsu, but the true threat of Koka's jutsu came from his inability to use elemental jutsu. The boy had effectively countered his planned escape.

Unable to get close to Sarjen, he called out, "One of you use whatever you got. Hit him now, don't get close."

Sarjen began to build up chakra again and start hand signs, but quickly Koka interrupted him with another Heaven's Torment. The Jounin had a smaller window now before he dispelled the jutsu, and he pulled out his chakra enhanced knuckles. Ready to do battle close range, perhaps even blinded by the jutsu!

Denrei

Denrei saw their teacher arming himself, and quickly shouted a warning to his two companions. He’d been the slowest to recover from the genjutsu attack, but now he was perfectly capable of putting up a good fight. And all they had to do was hit him.

He gripped the haft of his naginata and stepped forward, focusing his chakra into the weapon to allow him to strike faster with it. He had a significant advantage, given that it was a pole weapon against knuckles.

But that didn’t make him ready to underestimate the jounin. He swung his naginata in wide, graceful arcs, seeking to attack his teacher from unexpected directions. He had vowed he would not be sent back to the academy, and he was going to hit the man if it was the last thing he did today.

Ring, Aro and Kita didn't go far into the forest opting to set a trap for their sensi. Their rigged a coplicated system of nija wire and paper bombs.

Quin entered the forest after the hour was up, when she came upon their traps she stopped abruptly. She smiled then slammed her palm into the ground releasing chakra. that which moved across the ground and disarmed the bombs. and released the strings.

Kita didn't wait, he leaped from his tre position and weaved together his hand signs."Wind bullet" He opened up his mouth and a blew out a large gust of wind compressed into a ball at her. She quickly did her hand signs so fast her hand were a blur. "Blue fire jutsu," She met his wind bullet with a stream of blue fire that increased when it overcame the wind.

USiko~~

After i had a short nap i got up and went down stairs.
"hey mom Kita back yet" i asked her
"no, i think he is still in the grounds" she said back
"okay, i think i'll go watch him." i said and ran off. I arrived at the grounds he was sent to a few minute later to find it occupied but none of the people were Kita. I ran off think were they could be as i searched with the byakugan. I finally found them and laughed. His first day as a genin and training in the forest of death, must have a heavy weight teacher. I ran in and got down the path to him a second before my eyes went back to normal. I lingered near the edge of it and saw three boys and a woman running around.

Experience proved invaluable. Even as Koka blinded Sarjen it was not enough. With one powerful strike the man's chakra enhanced knuckles slammed into the naginata and he grabbed hold of it, wrenching it from the boy's grip with his inhuman strength. He threw it onto the ground rather then breaking it, easily retrieved by Denrei.

Blue fire poured out of his body as his chakra became so potent it became visible, with one mighty blow to the ground, the earth enveloped him as innumerable stone spikes shot forth from his body, ready to impale the genin. He couldn't be serious with this attack?! Yet, he was and the spikes would send the three backwards even further.

Koka was correct in the futility of close range attacks against such a man. The entire training ground would be torn up by the end of this!

"It's futile," he said from within the stone cocoon, the dirt clinging to his skin and hardening into a second stoneskin, "Earth is the most powerful of elements. Guess I am off the hook for another year. Since none of you will be passing. I think I'll invite the Akimoochi's to the barbecue feast which was planned."


Koka had an idea, using experience against Sarjen was the only way to beat him, "Yahiko, use your water harpoon."

"I don't think it will work on something like..."

"Just do it!"

As Yahiko quickly started preparing for the attack Koka pulled the oil from his pack and gathered up his chakra, ready to combine the water harpoon with his own fire element jutsu. As Yahiko's spear thrust forward towards Sarjen and the cocoon of stone, Koka let loose a fireball of immense strength. The two attacks collided and scalding water which showered Sarjen from above.

Letting out a scream of agony, the cocoon of spikes faltered and fell apart into mud, a thick cloud of steam hid their instructor and Koka shouted, "One more time!"

"Wait!" Sarjen gasped from the cloud of steam, "You combined elemental ninjutsu at this stage... that's not bad. Anyways... you messed up my hair! Let's call that a hit... okay."

Koka looked to Yahiko and Denrei, he thought they all might agree, "We need a hit to pass. Let's each take a shot."

"Hey..." Sarjen's features appeared from out of the thick fog, he looked as if he had been in sauna for hours, "You don't want to hurt me... right?"

Koka didn't want to make the first move, but if they wanted payback, he'd be glad to get some. Afterall, jounins punish teams, not individuals. Or at least he thought so.

Denrei

Denrei stepped back, shifting his weight and narrowing his eyes. "What're you playing at, Koka? He just said we'd passed."

"We need a hit to pass." Koka was grinning, "And we haven't got one yet."

Sarjen was watching them closing from the dissipating cloud of steam, watching for Koka's next move. Denrei could see exactly what Koka wanted here - revenge.

"Stop." He said, "There's no point in fighting any further when we’ve already passed. If we try, he’ll just say we have to do more, and then we’ll fail. Why try to beat your opponent further when he's already admitted defeat? It only leads to renewed struggle." He shook his head and stepped back, setting the butt of his naginata on the ground, "If we're finished, Sensei?"

Ringo

Ringo watched from a tree and decided itwas his turn to help his fellow squad man out. The wind was blowing away. He had been waiting biding his time and gathering chakra adn now he was ready.

Jumping through the quickly disippating flames and past the tired Kita his hands flicked into very practiced signals. Then drawing his arms back as if he were about to throw something a bright blue flame burst to life in his hand, "Fire Tornado!"

The he hurtled the flaming ball at the senei. Ringo watched in anticipation of the attack but as the fire ball hit her, a puff of smoke appeared and all that was left was a burning log. Ringo muttered obscenities to himself, "Damn substitution jutsu!"

Then he turend to Kita and gestured to the trees, he had given away their hding places and now they would need to hide again. Kita nodded his approval and they jumped into the forest hopping from brnach to brach at an accelerated speed.

Soon they became a blur. After going a fair distance deeper into the forest, Ringo let out a bird noise. Aro promptly appeared and Ringo waved at her, "Bird noise contact was a good idea, no?"

Kita let out a sigh of exasperation, "What does that woman expect us to do?"

Aro agrred, "It's not like she expects us to defeat her, is it?"

Ringo pondered it for a second, "Maybe the whole point of this was to escape her clutches. Remember she only said that there were bonus points if we snuck up on her."

Kita seemed to mull it over before shaking his head, "Why would she add the bonus points."

Aro put forth an answer, "To trick us?"

The three stod in thoughtful silence before a high shrilling bird noise was heard. Ringo's eyes went wide, "That was the bird sentry I had wtaching for us. That was his distress call."

Kita gritted his teeth, "She's coming?"

Ringo nodded solemnly. Aro asked, "Well, what do we do?"

Kita thought for a second before replying, "I still have a lot of chakra left. i could take her on for a while. If I tried hard enough I could pinpoint her chakra ponts."

Ringo turned to Aro, "And you can?"

Aro yawned as he replied, "I could use earth as a sheild."

An evil smile dawned on Ringo's face, "I have a plan."

Kita looked to him, "What is it?"

Ringo smiled, "Well, Aro can use his earth shield to protect us, while you use your bykugan to pinpoint her chakra points. I'm still burning chakra at an unreasonable rate hear as we speak. I could throw them at her and while she is concentrating on them Kita can use some good aimed attacks."

Aro yawned again and Ringo puleld something out of his pocket. Quickly he stuffed it into Aro's mouth and Aro swallowed it so he wouldn't choke. His eyes water from swallowing such a large object he scowled at Ringo, "What was that?"

"Well, I was hoping a candy bar would keep you awake." Ringo replied with a smile.

"As in a high suagr candy bar?" Aro asked incredulously.

"What else?" Ringo asked back with a raised eyebrow.

Another shrill noise was made and Ringo let out a little gasp, "She's faster then I thought. Gaining on us. That was my hundred metre perimeter bird."

Kita smiled, "Well, let's do this then."

He put his hand out and Ringo and Aro put their hand on it as well. A crack was heard nearby and they broke the goup contact. The fight would now begin.


(Yay. ^^)

WOW... My comp wouldn't start for one day and look what I miss... So I have school and I wont be able to post during the day, but I will post whenever I can.

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Akira didn't think he could be more excited.Before the fight his Sharingan had only been a two comma, but during that last fight it had changed to a three coma. He had suddenly been able to see everything with an unnatural clarity. Akira was positive even now, that he could replicate every jutsu the sensei had used during the fight perfectly. He hadn't gone home because he was still pent up from the fight. He was sitting on the top of the hokage's building looking up at the stars trying to figure out where his life would go now. He sighed and decided it was something best not thought about.

He sat up and dropped off the building, landing quietly on the empty streets. he was walking home when he got an idea. Because of his Sharingan he had never had the ability to do it, but now...

He stood up straight and did hand signs in a blur. When he was done he focused chakra into his hand, charging it with electrical energy. He grasped his wrist and ran down the street. The buildings passed in a blur, and the speed that he was moving would normally create a tunnel in someones vision, but his Sharingan allowed him to see perfectly. He saw the edge of the forest in front of him and he ran in, weaving in and out of the trees. When he was far enough in that he would no harm the village he brought his arm back and struck the chidori into a tree. There was an ear splitting crack, and the tree broke in two.

Akira fell back on the ground and looked at the shattered remains of the tree, all he could do was laugh.

So I'm just trying to find a way to meet up the characters of Squad four again. There's no excitement right now all alone... XD I'm confused as to what time of day it is, so I'm just going to say that it is the evening, following Damars post.

Suika~ Village

Suika had not reached her house before she heard the ear-splitting crack. She decided that since it was on the way, she'd head on over and check it out. Maybe she could even quickly practise a few jutsu before going home.

Suika gracefully glided over the buildings, her feet brushing the hard surface for only a moments time before she lifted back into the air again. She almost closed her eyes, lost in the moment, before she realized that she had surpassed the forest.

The moon peeked through the canopy of the forest's leaves with ease, lighting only a few places with fanning silver. Suika took in a deep breath. She heard a soft noise. It sounded like a cough. Was that a bird, maybe? Or rather a squirrel?

She placed a hand on her Maru Katana and crept through the undergrowth, her eyes squinted suspiciously. Her goggles were on top of her head because it was much too dark to see.

Finally Suika saw the tree, snapped in half unnaturally. The way it had been broken and fallen was not natural. It looked like someone had smashed right through it. The area that had been penetrated was charred, with a tiny bit of gray smoke steaming up from it, being caught in the breeze.

And lying on the ground was Akira. His eyes were squinted shut, his chest spasming. "Akira? Are you seizuring?" Suika rushed towards him. After all, Akira wasn't making a noise when he was laughing. How was she to know that he wasn't having a seizure?
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Yes, I know, the ending is weird. Sorry!

LaReina!

Usiko~~

After i had lost my brothers group i decided to leave the forest, it was night and soon thw worst of creatures would emerge. As I left the forest though i heard a noise i knew all to well, though he had never actually heard it. It was the Sound of chidori, the technique made by his fathers old sensei, and it came from near by. I picked up his pace as he ran to the source and was surprised to see my teammates there. Akira was laying on the ground laughing without a sound while Suika hovered over him looking very worried.
"whats wrong and why did i just hear that attack." I said
"Usiko why are you-" Suika started
"don't have time whats wrong with him" I asked
"i don't know, he seems to out of it"
"okay one sec, i'll check him out" I said then brought out my Byakugan. I quickly side swiped his body and frowned. "his body, is almost completely out of chakara, we need to get him to the hospital, but first we need to knock him out"
"what why" Suika asked
"cause, he is using to much energy right now with that fake laughter, and is not regaining chakra fast enough right now, we need to knock him out to speed up the chakara increase." i said then tried to focus my chakra into to my finger tip, i finally got it and then smashed it into Akira's head. AKira immediately was knocked out and I picked him up. I ran with him in my arms with Suika right behind me.
i arrived at the hospital a few minutes later and handed Akira to a medic. Then i waited, me and Suika sat in silence for awhile till a medic finally came.
"you brought us the boy Akira right" He asked
"yeah, how is he"
"he's fine, should be out by tomorrow afternoon, the next morning at the latest." He said
"so, he is okay" i asked
"yes thanks to you getting him here at that time, f you were even a few minutes later he might have been in here for a week"
"well that good" I said
"so how did this happen" The medic asked again
"well, we were not there but we think that he was performing a A rank attack, the chidori" i said
"okay and hats all you know" he said scribbling it down
"yeah, so can we see him"
"yes, he is weak though, he doesn't remember what happened to him though but his other memories seem to be in order, and when you see him, remind him what happened and tell him not to do that attack for awhile"
"okay" I said and me and Suika left to see him. We found Akira awkae in his room sipping a glass of water.
"hey" he said when we came in.
"you okay" suika asked
"yeah, a little weak but i should be out by tomorrow, then we can go on out first mission" he said
"so long as you don't use the chordori that is" i said quietly
"the chidori, i did the chidori" He said hopefully
"yeah" I said. "i got you in here, it uses up way to much of your chakra and if you keep using it you will just end back up here again"