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Another Naruto story book

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here it is a new naruto one sense the other one is so messed up.

Plot-You are new genining of the leaf village, you have been assinded to your squad and given a leader. You will go on missions given by the Hokage to learn more and become better ninja.

Rules-
the usual rules
also you may swear


Profile-
Name:
Age- 12- 13
Gender:
Rank- you will all start out as genin
Appearance:
Jutsu- ( by this i mean there favorite, or one their clan is known for)
Weapon:
Personality-
Other-

Mine:
Name: Usiko Uzamaki
Age- 12
Gender: Male
Rank- Genin
Appearance: he has short spiky brown hair, blue eyes that are covered slightly by his headband. He is average hieght with a slight build. He usually wears a blue robe that goes to his knees with white lightning patterns, and a black shirt and black pants under it.
jutsu- he uses a jutsu that covers his body in a lightning shield, that blocks most attacks and shocks anyone who tries to hit him, it can expand to any size and also can explode. He can also put it around others when he is not in it. Also has some
Weapon- He likes tom use a special Kunai that when hits its target deliveries a nice shock and also a katana that helps direct electric blows from his shield. Also has the bykugan but it is not that strong.
Personality- kind of a clown, he can be very goofy and immature, but he is very determined and does not give up easily.
Other- up for love. the 9 tailed fox now lives in him.


Also for those who do watch the or read naruto this will be taking place after naruto's death.
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Name: Kita Uzamaki
Age- 12
Gender: Male
Rank- Genin
Appearance: Short black hair, leaf villgge headband on leg. Huge Shuriken on back. Bright blue eyes.
Jutsu- Wind cannon jutsu, and his fathers shadow clone jutsu. Limited bykugan from his mother hinata.

Weapon: Various Shurikens
Personality- Very competitive, like challenging people to battles to prove his prowess.Plans on being the 8th hokage, and ocasionly trys to attack his father.
Other-



*Lets make the Hokage Naruto*
This is one little planet in one tiny solar system in a galaxy that’s barely out of its diapers. I’m old, Dean. Very old. So I invite you to contemplate how insignificant I find you.

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Name: Suika

Age: Thirteen years old

Gender: Female

Rank: genin

:!: Appearance: http://drakhand006.deviantart.com/art/Tira-by-Artgerm-48619427
Her hair looks like this: http://i306.photobucket.com/albums/nn245/Athena_47/Vampire%20Knight/Yuuki-chan.jpg
She actually only looks slightly like Tira from Soul Calibur. (I was watching a friend play this and thought this character was awesome.) Her hair is actually bright red, the colour of garnet, and she has hazel eyes. Her complexion is quite fair, and she gets freckles when she's in the sun. She wears red goggles on her head, and one of the lenses has a crack across it. She uses "Tira"s weapon. The giant circle-blade thingy. I call it a Maru Katana (I google translated it! ;)).

Jutsu: Wind slice. Description: Using her weapon, which is like the one in the URL, she jumps into the air, concentrating her chakra to spinning around the weapon. She makes the air spin in two directions, and the place where they clash will be where the person is hit. Creates alot of damage. Her family specializes and is known for wind techniques, hence why she knows this.

Weapon: In the URL.

Personality: Acts very outspoken, but kind. She is bubbly, but can be serious. She is very observant and catches up on things quickly. When she has a crush, she usually acts very shy and holds it in, until she finds out if the person likes her back.

Other: She is "up for love" though she is only 13.
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okay from now on no jounin, i will use characters from the show as the leaders of the groups so all must be genin


Okay the first three are now group 4
their leader is
Name: Mando Asami
Age- 30
Gender: Male
Rank- Jounin
Appearance: pale white hair that is kept under a hood, he has red eyes, though no sharangan,, he is tall but looks scrawny.
jutsu-
Ninjutsu-
He uses a earth attack that raises pillars from the ground around the enemy hitting him up then letting him fall the hitting him repeadidly.
He has a fire technique that lets him rise pillars of it from the ground on the enemy if in range and it stays on for a few minutes at max.
he is a skill shadow clone user able to make 20 stable clones and keep them for a while
He can us an attack the shots a large amount of water from his mouth fast.
Tiajutsu-
he has a wide variety of attacks in this and is very skilled in the art.

Genejutsu-
He can trap his opponents in another world, where no matter where the go they will end up back where the started, He can also pill multiple ones on top of each so even if the do break it they will still be trapped in another place.
He can also make one where they are underwater and unable to breath, this makes the opponent stop breathing and eventually die.
Weapon- He carries a giant scroll which he uses to summon a sword the when hits absorbs some chakra from the enemy.
Personality- he is very serious and strict making it hard or his squad at first through after some time can show a gentler side.
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Yeah! Group four! And we have the smoking sensei! Hurrah!
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oh yeah, cool i guess




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Name: Aro Tokaya

Age: 12 1/2

Gender: male

Rank: Genin

Appearance: Dark, red hair and golden, fox-like eyes. He wears a Leaf Village headband on his left arm and usually goes around bearfoot. Aro also has a red sash with an arrow piercing through a leaf in black ink and a scar across his back from a training accident. He carries around a jacket that's often lost and usually has on a short sleeved shirt under it.

http://draemface.deviantart.com/art/Fox-Boy-97805804 (take off the ears)

Jutsu: He's able to bring up the earth and use sand as a shield or weapon.

Weapon: Whatever's around him (he doesn't like to carry weapons).

Personality: Lazy. Aro is quiet and yawns a lot--even if he's not sleepy--and is usually absent-minded. He spends most of his time outdoors (in trees) and is very competitive. Aro tries to stay away from any type of sugar-related food because he has a habit of going overboard and getting really hyper.

Other: Up for love, I guess ^^
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Name: Ringo Tori, (It means Apple Bird, cute! ^^)

Gender: Male

Age: 13

Jutsu:

Ninjutsu. He is rather best at this. He can summon ferocious birds, (Lol, his best attempt so far is summoning a bird that was so young it couldn't even fly. The good thing was that it was at least a ninja hawk hatchling.)

His best elements are wind and fire, he can slightly get a grasp on lightning if he tries. One of his preferred attacks when using elements is called, "Hinote Gufuu." (Fire Tornado.) Is takes a few minutes to gather appropriate chakra (at his level) but when unleashed is much like Sasuke's fire attack, (for the death of me I cannot remember its name.) Though instead of coming from his mouth, it can appear out of any part of himself that he wants. Ringo is quickly learning to buy fire proof clothes.

Taijutsu. He is always ready to use this and he has a fairy nice stock of blades and weapons ready. His attack power is fairly okay, but with more training could improve a lot. He has been focusing on perfecting his ninjutsu and so hasn't paid much attention to his taijutsu.

Genjutsu. His worse jutsu, but behind his overly bad score in this is the ability to easily break and and see through them. If you can't actually do them learn how to go against them (One of his mottos.)

All in all, his ninjutsu is his best followed closely by taijutsu (he could improve in this if he tried.), but his genjutsu is questionable.

Appearance: (Normal)
http://shinne.deviantart.com/art/Red-Wall-85734737

(Tee-hee, this one is during his Fire Tornado.)
http://fez-kuro.deviantart.com/art/06-Roziel-63821221

Weapons: Kunai and a few of those throwing round spiky things. (Yes, I do have a horrible memory.) Like Tenten he can summon (?) weapons from those summoning papers, but only very limited weapon summonings.

Personality: Actually Ringo in a lot of regards is like Naruto/Sasuke. To explain this I will first have to tell you about his history.

History: At an early age he began training to become a ninja. Ringo grew up by himself and so has that carefree attitude which Naruto has. However his has the death intent of Sasuke, because he knows who killed his family and wants revenge. He has devoted his life into getting it, but because the murderer was the old Hokage and the old one is dead Ringo aims to become a better Hokage than him and the current one so that what happened to him will never happen to anyone else. So, his goal is to become the Hokage.

And Back to Personality: Ringo is a very complex person, he mostly has a carefree attitude, but at times he will snap and wonder why he is not getting stronger. He is a happy guy, who is random at times with a strange sense of humour and blunt honesty. Though he can sometimes twist the truth to suit his purpose. He laughs a lot. Ringo was oftened teased as a little kid about being an apple bird. he now resents anything to do with apples and birds. It doesn't help that the beasts he summons are birds and that his favourite food is apple.

He's not too experienced, is he?
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Name: Akira (subject to change)

Gender: Male

Village: Hidden Valley of the Leaf

Rank: Genin

Age: 13

Appearance: Average hight with a muscular build. He has dark hair that always looks jumbled and messy (sort of like kakashi's but shorter). He is pale, and he doesnt know why, because he spends most of his time outside. He wears a grey jacket and black pants. His head band is tied around his right shoulder.

Ninjitsu: He specializes in Lighning based attacks, and is able to pull off a chidori, but only once or twice a day.He has a large amount of chakra, but he cannot focus it enough, and every time he uses a jutsu he wastes alot of chakra. He uses his Ninjutsu to support his Taijutsu attacks.

Taijutsu: This is his strongest. He spends most of his time developing his phisical attacks and has become very fast and strong.

Genjustsu: He can only perform minot illusions, and even those are not the strongest. If he uses them at all it is a last resort. He has focused his senses to alert him to Genjutsu attacks and he can escape from them easier than most people.

Sharingan: Acts like Sasuke's he can read opponents movements, and the movements of objects. he can also coppy the Jutsu of other ninja, but because he has had limited exposure, he does not have a great repitoire.

Weapons: Akira uses a katana as his main weapon, but he also has kunai hidden all over his body.

Personality: He is a very loyal person. He prefers to spend most of his time with his few very close friends. Most of the time he seems very relaxed, and almost lazy. However when the situations arises he turns very serious, and never misses a thing. If you dont know him you might think him impartial, but that is the opposite of what he is. He loves to joke and have fun.

History: Akira's best friend Alyx was a member of Uchina clan and was incredibly sick. When he was so sick that he could not move he was forgotten by everyone he knew except for Akira, who visited him religiously. He would spend days at a time with Alyx. When Alyx was about to die he passed his Sharingan to Akira. Alyx's sacrifice is the reason Akira is so loyal to his friends.

Other: Up for love i guess, a lil young, but whatever.
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okay the last three are team 6
the leadear is

Name: Quin Zakuer
Age- 23
Gender: female
Rank- Jounin
Appearance: Ice blue hair and green eyes. Were the general Jounin outfit
Jutsu-
Ninjutsu-
can combine her elemental chakras to make a new sub element of metal, she can use this to make shoot metal bullets at the enemy quickly, make metal pillars from the round, turn her skin to metal and other things.
She can summon birds, her favorite is Esuma, a giant dove that she rides on and and drops bombs from.
Tai justsu-She is skilled at tiajutsu
Gen jutsu- She can trap her enemies in a sleep state genejutsu
Also sends them to a world where pain from weapons and memories attack them.
Weapon- is a skilled explosives expert, with bombs that do many things and have different power.
Personality- She is a tough on determined to teach her students to the best she can, tough she might make them hate her she only has the best in mind and lightens up at times but not really.
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Name: Denrei

Age- 13

Gender: Male

Rank- Genin

Appearance: http://xx-pumpkinqueen-xx.deviantart.co ... n-85941150 But unlike in the picture, he does not wear armour, only loose white and grey robes with Kanji embroidered on them.

Jutsu- Taijutsu: This is his best jutsu. He can attack with almost unnatural speed with his naginata, almost as though he were wielding a knife instead of a pole weapon, although his speed only augments his strength, rather than diminishing it.

Ninjutsu: He can fire a focused burst of wind at an opponent, but usually focuses his chakra to increase his own speed, agility and acrobatics.

Genjutsu: This is his weakest jutsu, the only technique he knows with it is the ability to sense the use of jutsu near him, and the ability to predict the moves of others to a degree.

Weapon- He fights primarily with a naginata, but he also keeps several kunai an shuriken with him.

Personality- Calm and collected, with the focus of a true warrior. He appears very standoffish, but it is simply because he is contemplative to the point where he is in an almost constant state of meditation.

Other- up for love.
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Wait. Why no jounin? Do we all have to be from the hidden leaf now? And hurray for toting the dead as alive.
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Name: Yahiko Myoujin

Age- 13

Gender: Male

Rank- genin

Appearance: http://appler-pie.deviantart.com/art/It ... O-38807353

Jutsu- The Myoujin clan is known as a sword arts clan. They primarily fight with a sword so Yahiko doesn't have too many jutsu. Those he does know are water based. His favorite technique is the Water Harpoon Jutsu. A spiraling cone of water flies from the source in an attempt to impale the enemy.

Weapon: Katana

Personality- Your average teenager. He can be calm and collective, but is still a kid and will act like one at times. Is as stubborn as an ox, but loyal to those around him. Over all a nice guy.

Other- Up for love.
I will always fight back, no matter what.




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When can we start?
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after one more genin joins then we will have 3 even squads.



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