*shurgs*
I'm gonna work on my pirouettes.
Hmmm...probs gonna dance to Drops of Jupiter...
good song for lyrical && jazz.
Bye guys! Be on tommrow...maybe. (:
*Well, we can either crash the plane and kill everybody, crash the plane and kill only Gary and Ballow, or, in a fit of total boredom, some of us can take up the characters. Bolt's gone. Let's see, there were nine on the very first try, so... we have less than half the original people.
Do we kill the story, snatch a sudden burst of action and spill some dramatic points, or just kick bolt's characters off the island and continue?*
Religion without science is lame; science without religion is blind.
Two things are infinite: the universe and human stupidity; and I'm not sure about the the universe.
Education is what remains after one has forgotten everything he learned in school.
*Maribelle is in an insane state she'd be very dangerous to cross I'm pretty sure we should just kill them and keep going with the story, and maybe we can let some new people join in the story?? Because you have to understand that there are more survivors like these kids than they believe. I could make another character if necessary, but I'd definitely want to make a bad guy. Being bad is always fun. (;*
*I was thinking we might let new people join for a sequal (I know, I'm thinking way to far ahead). We could let new people into this one... after all, one remake is enough, right? (remember our first try?)
So who thinks we should let new people in?
And how (sh)would we do it?
One idea I had the other night for such an emergency was that the government of one nation or another, probably America, snatches our characters and gets them to help 'mentor' some teens who were just found to have powers.
Speak your mind everyone! Please!
And Bolt, if you actually want to stay in, but are bored out of your mind, jump in. Grab some glory, or drama, or something! You could even steal the show just this once if you wanted.
Sooo...?*
Religion without science is lame; science without religion is blind.
Two things are infinite: the universe and human stupidity; and I'm not sure about the the universe.
Education is what remains after one has forgotten everything he learned in school.
I agree with Bolt.
Somethng I would recommend is doing a sequel like StolenHearts said.
Bascially if Bolt doesn't mind staying in for just a few more tiny posts we can have something happen like kill of all the shadows or suddenly they all dissapear.
Now the charcter's have nothing to worry abour right?
WRONG!
So they all leave everyone & go back to their normal lives, leaving their unfinished love, friendship, etc. storiea behind.
So don't make the character's fall in love just yet.
Now the shadows didn't exactly go...
They just went back to get stronger & better then ever...& I mean A LOT stronger.
So now the teens come back & realize it's up to them to save the world...
but thiss time it's going to be a lot harder, a lot bloodier, & a whole lot of drama.
So there is the sequel.
Ahahahaa I don't think it's the best idea..but that's all I got. (:
We eventually arrived at the home of Dr. Kevin R. Smithal, professor in pretty much everything paranormal. Pulling up to the huge Victorian style house, I noticed Julie put her hand to her forehead and Raven slip on her jacket. I tried not to panic. We walked up to the French doors and Damien knocked with the gargoyle knocker. The doors creaked open to reveal a young man, probably in his early twenties. Julie gasped and, looking back, I saw Raven grab her arm, her face covered in goosebumps, and say “Get a hold of yourself, girl. You need your sanity.”
“Who are you?” asked the man, his voice like ice. I noticed that his eyes were different colors: one was black and the other was gray.
“We’ve come to see Dr. Smithal. Is he here?”
“I am he.”
At that, Raven quickly approached him, holding a knife. When she raised it to stab him, he grabbed her wrist and she fell to the ground, gasping for a breath that wouldn’t come to her. “Shadow!” she was able to get out before collapsing. At that, everyone but me powered up, and I grabbed Raven’s knife. Smithal ran into the house and we were quick to follow.
The place seemed haunted at first glance. And as a matter of fact, it was, in a sense. But with shadows, not ghosts. Smithal ran through a door, and when we followed, we were dumbfounded. The room had four doors inside. “Split up,” Maribelle shouted, and at that, we did. Spencer and Joseph went through one door, Ballow and Cadence through another, Gary and I through the door, and Maribelle and Julie through the last one.
The hall seemed to go on forever, twisting and turning, but never ending. Gary looked as if you couldn’t tire him if you tried. He was so awesome…
“Stay away from me!” shouted a voice from a few yards down the hall. It was Smithal. “I am more powerful than all of you put together!”
“No you’re not. Your power is failing! I’ve seen it myself!” Gary said forcefully, balling his fists. I had never seen him like this. Anger obviously filled him.
“Fool. I gave most of you your powers. Through fighting my creations, I’ve let you all become more powerful with each of their miserable lives that you take. I can take that power away just as easily!”
The others ran in with Julie at their lead, shouting, “He’s not down any of the other halls,” before they noticed Smithal. Hate filled their eyes, and anger sharpened the air. Everything was tense. Then Julie cried “Get him!” at the top of her lungs, holding Smithal still with her mind. At that, everyone used everything they had to destroy Smithal. The force of everyone’s power overwhelmed him so he was dazed just long enough for everyone to finish him. When they were all exhausted they stopped and looked at him.
He was dead.
A scream came from the direction of the entrance, more of shock than fear. I ran back, not noticing if the others were following. I heard some of the guys trying to pick Smithal up from the ground. When I reached the entrance I saw Raven standing up, leaning against the wall, breathing deeply. The only scary part was that her eyes were an icy blue, piercing and soft at the same time.
“What’s wrong?” I asked hastily.
“They’re gone… all of them! I don’t feel anything! The earth is free! We’re all safe!” she answered, looking straight ahead. She was smiling. I looked behind me and saw that Julie had followed. She looked a bit lightheaded.
“Are you okay?” I asked her. What a change!
“Yeah. Better than ever! Now I know what it feels like to not have a headache.” And then I knew.
It was over.
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Next post: Final Goodbyes
Don’t worry all of you who want to continue this story. There will be a sequal. We just have to finish up this story, and then we’re good. Don’t use up all of your drama points in the next posts! Save them for Five Years Later. Hee hee!
Religion without science is lame; science without religion is blind.
Two things are infinite: the universe and human stupidity; and I'm not sure about the the universe.
Education is what remains after one has forgotten everything he learned in school.
All of us (Me, LaReina, boltageman, JustDance=] and StolenHearts) have reserved spots for the sequal. It is not nessecary that those reserves are taken up. I will post the sequal tomorrow, or when this storybook is officially ended.
Religion without science is lame; science without religion is blind.
Two things are infinite: the universe and human stupidity; and I'm not sure about the the universe.
Education is what remains after one has forgotten everything he learned in school.
*Does a dance at getting reserved spot* Sorry I feel so special >w<;;
5 years is pretty fair to me, everyone will at least be in their 20's
Maribelle
I couldn't let myself get heartbroken over the shadows disappearing, but I had never had people surrounding me like this. Everyone's thoughts collided in one another, it's funny how such different people can be thinking the exact same thing.
"So I guess this is it..." I said slowly. I looked at each person individually, some crying some keeping their faces solid.
The first person I hugged was Raven.
"Maybe someday we can meet for a music get together.- I smiled. "I mean really, Raven you are my friend."
I moved on to each and every person and finally was finished.
"It was nice to have some people around me, I hope you guys have a good life." I laughed, holding back my tears.
After I was done I watched as my friends said their goodbyes
By request, we are continuing THIS story, Reign of Darkness, for another... oh, ten, twenty pages? So we're not doing the sequel yet. Sorry to get your hopes up!
-Joseph-
"You go on, guys," Joseph said to those who still lingered in the room. "I'll get rid of him."
Everyone but Joseph left, who, instead of throwing Smithal's body out the window, got down on his knees beside him and shocked Smithal. Nothing. He did it again. Nothing. Once more. A heartbeat. And again. Consciousness. Once the man who had been so near death everyone thought he was dead groaned, Joseph threw him against the wall and held him there.
"Why did you send my that technology? Why did you turn me into this?" he asked, angry as, well, you don't want to know how mad he was.
"So I could show you what anyone else would be blind to," Smithal whispered. "But first, could you please let my feet touch the ground?"
Joseph sent him sprawling halfway across the room.
"Talk, you worthless son of a--"
"Please, keep it clean and I'll tell you what I have planned for you," Smithal said quickly, getting into an easy chair. "You see, Joseph, I found a source of power so great, I could control the world. Of course, there's more than that..."
Smithal continued to give Joseph all the details to everything about everything about shadows and their power. Joseph soaked it up liek a sponge. It was amazing how no one had ever thought to do that before...
"So you see, Joseph, alone, you all easily defeated me. But together, nothing would be able to stop us! We could take over the entire planet! You could be normal, abnormal, whatever you wanted just by saying so. You could have friends or enemies with a single word! Keep me alive, and I can share that power with you. I could give you abilities beyond your wildest dreams! We can raise an army of my creations, stronger than before. You could create androids to aid us.
"We can rule together, if you just help me. Leave me alive until tomorow night. Think about it. And when you come back, you can join me, or kill me. Your choice."
Joseph left the man alive and headed downstairs, his head raging with emotions and thoughts. Hugs and hangshakes were being shared by everyone. He saw Maribelle look at him funny as she hugged him, before turning to hug someone else.
What would he do?
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So, let's keep everyone together for one more day, to celebrate or something. And then BOOM! The second wave!
Was that all right?
Religion without science is lame; science without religion is blind.
Two things are infinite: the universe and human stupidity; and I'm not sure about the the universe.
Education is what remains after one has forgotten everything he learned in school.
