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Hi, You reviewed my prolgue before, But I totally re-woked it, and now it has more stuff in it. Link here!
Thank you!
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I would really appreciate it if you could review my newest piece. Its pretty short. hehe. Anyway, thank you. :D

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Could you review my prologue? That'd be awesome :D
Thanks in advance!

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Galerius, lilymoore, asxz, and MySunshine - I'll get to them this weekend. I promise.
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*revives*
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Hey, Mars, I'd love some help on this. Thank you if you get around to it!
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Yes can I get a review please with extra fries and an Ice tea, for this.

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I would be very thankful. So thanks in advance if you review it.
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Guyyyyyyssss. I'm bored. Gimme something. :)
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Alright, here's something for you: post528324.html#528324

But, just a warning, it has gay romance in it, so if you don't want to critique it because of that, then that's okay. I wasn't sure...so its rated R, I hope you don't mind!
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*pokes*
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Please review:

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Hello :)

Please review
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Thank you!
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Heya Mars!
Could please review a short story I wrote? It's rather rusty and unpolished. I'd like an in depth review.
The link: topic47744.html

Thank you very much!
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Done and done! :D
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Hi Mars!
Will you review my poems?
I am using them as an english project and I need you to rip them to threads!
Thanks lots!

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