June's review thread

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I pretty much let this die before and because I've been getting a lot of review requests via PM, I figured it's a good idea to reopen this, without making a new thread.


Oh, yeah, Rosey needs a break.


I will review almost anything, but be warned that I approach R rated works with much caution. If I turn them down, it's nothing personal. I'm probably just not able to review it at that time.

I'm not a big Sci-fi or fantasy fan, but I will review those as well. I might delay them, but I will get them done.

When asking for a review include:

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You may also specify what kind of review you would like: a line-by-line, nit-pick, or overall. And yes, there's a difference between line-by-line and nitpicks.


So! Post away!
Last edited by Juniper on Mon May 25, 2009 8:26 pm, edited 5 times in total.




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Looking for reviews on this piece:

(Working) title: Cat Steps
Genre: Fantasy
Link: topic40125.html

Enjoy! Go ahead and be as harsh as you want.
Last edited by Rosendorn on Mon May 25, 2009 9:54 pm, edited 1 time in total.
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Completed Rosey! :)
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Title: A Strange Hauting
Genre: Other
http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/post447085.html#447085

Title: Excerpt From My NaNo (Sorry the title kind of stinks)
Genre: Other
http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic39491.html

Title: Hey, Babycakes
Genre: Romantic Fiction
http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic36932.html

If you could review any of these, I'd appreciate it! Thanks so much!
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The title: Stepping Into Static
The Genre: romance
The link: topic40209.html

It has vampires, it is a love story, mild language but nothing you have not heard before! There are more chapters, you do not have to follow it though...
Anything you can do critique wise would be appreciate
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Okay! I will get right on all of them as soon as I can =)
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Sarah wants a Juniper berry! :wink:
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Because I already adore you and will do even more so if you read it. :wink:
Thankyou kindly, June dahling.
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Title: Poison Love
Genre: Romance Fiction
Link: topic31457.html
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can you review this too?

topic32635.html - this is chapter 1
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The title:The Scribe
The Genre:Action/Adventure Fiction
The link: topic40417.html




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I'm on them my dearies. Just give me a day!
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*triumphant music*

I'm done! I have finished all of your reviews and I am now awaiting lots more :). Keep them coming!
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June, Can you review this for me?

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well I really need my third chapter to be reviewed. Its not really important to know what "Silent Hill" is, even though its a fanfiction. All you need to know is that "Silent Hill" is a town that people's worst fears take shape.

topic40923.html

If you need to know what is happening Beth is looking for her missing sister. Right now she is currently in Silent Hill, with Sera. Sera is a really nice person who wants to help Beth, however Beth hates Sera.

prologue- Beth has a dream that her sister disappears, and it comes true

ch1- 4 years later Beth (18 years old) thinks about the past, and how no one really looked for her sister (Alex). Sera makes her appearance. Its highschool graduation day, and Beth leaves her hometown (Ashfield) and heads to Silent hill to find her sister. (Since she got a note in Alex's handwriting saying "Silent Hill").

ch2- Beth's car brakes down, and she has a strange dream. After she wakes up, Beth hitchhikes, and surprisingly Sera appears and offers her a ride. When they are driving Beth falls asleep, and has a nightmare.

ch3- topic40923.html

please review it *Begs*


title: Silent Hill Requiem

genre: horror/mystery/drama/angst

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