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Lost_in_dreamland
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Fri Dec 12, 2008 6:05 pm
Lost_in_dreamland says... · Fri Dec 12, 2008 6:05 pm
If you want an indepth critique visit here please
http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic40810.html
Ok
I'll review anything

I'm bored, I have a lot of time, I want to review. Got it? Good :lol:

My reviews tend to be long, very long. I copy and paste the whole thing, go through it line by line, then have subcategories
plot character development Grammar etc
then I conclude my opinions.
Example ?
http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/post459369.html?highlight=#459369

So if you want one just say :D
If you have multiple requests that's fine too, but please just give me one at a time....x

I specify in:
Plot
Characterization and especially, especially, especially, especially word choice. Description too :D

-bye x
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Rascalover
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Fri Dec 12, 2008 9:15 pm
Rascalover says... · Fri Dec 12, 2008 9:15 pm
Will you review

topic40060.html

please and thank you

Tiff
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Who needs a review? :) http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic38078.html




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Antigone Cadmus
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Sat Dec 13, 2008 1:15 am
Antigone Cadmus says... · Sat Dec 13, 2008 1:15 am
nevermind
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Lost_in_dreamland
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Sat Dec 13, 2008 12:33 pm
Lost_in_dreamland says... · Sat Dec 13, 2008 12:33 pm
I've done yours rascalover ;)
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Lost_in_dreamland
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Tue Dec 16, 2008 7:11 pm
Lost_in_dreamland says... · Tue Dec 16, 2008 7:11 pm
Kaila, I've reviewed them all ;)
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Night Mistress
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Wed Dec 17, 2008 11:29 pm
Night Mistress says... · Wed Dec 17, 2008 11:29 pm
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review, please.
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niccy_v
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Tue Dec 23, 2008 5:27 pm
niccy_v says... · Tue Dec 23, 2008 5:27 pm
topic40209.html - Chapter 1 Stepping Into Static

topic40419.html - Chapter 2 Stepping Into Static

If you can critique BOTH... now that would be simply AMAZING! But i really want chapter 2 reviewed more!

Thanks
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Lost_in_dreamland
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Wed Dec 24, 2008 11:06 am
Lost_in_dreamland says... · Wed Dec 24, 2008 11:06 am
I'll review both Niccy ;)
and now's your chance people, I'm not going out on Christmas eve until night time xD, ya I'm that sad but... So if you want something reviewed ask now :)
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niccy_v
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Wed Dec 24, 2008 12:29 pm
niccy_v says... · Wed Dec 24, 2008 12:29 pm
if you don't have anything better to do...

Advanced crit - but do not feel the need to do anything major with it, I'm all good for just general stuff, I think most of the grammar/spelling is all good...

topic40583.html

Firebird
It's got an eagle...he turns into an eagle when he wants, but he does get violent in the next half I kind of have under construction...
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DreamyAlice
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Sun Apr 16, 2023 7:11 am
DreamyAlice says... · Sun Apr 16, 2023 7:11 am
Hello, I am one of the res crew mods here on YWS. This is a message just to inform you that I will lock and archive this thread as it is not active anymore. We have to archive and lock the inactive threads to keep the forum organized so no worries, if you'd like to reopen it at any point in the future please contact a current resources moderator, we would be happy to reopen it for you ^-^

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