Critiques Anyone? (Closed until contest critiques are done)

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I'm first go me! Will you read And The Light Fades? Or like a chapter of it. It's in advanced critiques not novels. Linkage for you: topic58539.html
Thanks Jen!

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Hey would you take a look at this for me?
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Your both done. Any others?

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Can you please review this for me.

Link; topic65658.html
I do not have a short attention span, I am-Hey look it's a sparkely KITTY! Quick Catch it!




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Puffy, I'll do yours in a sec.

This is once again closed. If you noticed my recent contest, I received over 20 entries, so I now owe over 100 critiques. Haha. =] Opening again soon.

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Hello, I am one of the res crew mods here on YWS. This is a message just to inform you that I will lock and archive this thread as it is not active anymore. We have to archive and lock the inactive threads to keep the forum organized so no worries if you'd like to reopen it at any point in the future please contact a current resources moderator, we would be happy to reopen it for you ^-^

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