Critiques Anyone? (Closed until contest critiques are done)

Read the post goose, I am only asking for one review :p but the part that needs reviewing is chapter two! The first two have been looked over really well already.

I figured you'd want to read them first

OverEasy wrote:Read the post goose, I am only asking for one review :p but the part that needs reviewing is chapter two! The first two have been looked over really well already.

I figured you'd want to read them first

Haha, yeah, but it's me - you know I'll have to comment.

~JFW1415

Hahaha true story :p

Ok ok ok I'm sorry, I just really need help on chapter two, I feel like I am rushing a lot again.

All empty except for Con's, but I'm planning on doing all the chapters of Creep, so I'll get to his a bit later.

Fill up these spots people!

(Oh, and sorry for the wait to those I just finished. I was a bit busy with school.)

~JFW1415

will you review this for me?

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Night, you're all done.

Any others?

~JFW1415

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I would love you like a fat kid loves cake if you reviewed for me.

Do you still have a spot left??

post470382.html#470382 (Rip it to pieces as best you can!)

Yepp, there was room, scasha.

However, now the list is full so I will not be accepting anymore requests until I clear it out.

Con: Hopefully I'll be getting to all the chapters of Creep today, if I can make myself actually be productive.

~JFW1415

Open once more. Send in those requests!

~JFW1415

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I'm not quite sure I understand Rule #2 of the "don't"s, but that's a chapter one, and just the chapter one, no more'n all.

Hello there.
If you are still open I would like to ask for a critque for my one story. It is slightly lengthy and I understand if you don't wish too. I just need feed back because I really wish to figure out how I am supposed to improve because it is my first post I put up here.
http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic40519.html
Its main focus is Other Fiction so I am sure you will be able to easily critique it.
You only have to if you want to.
Sincerily,
~Incognito Temptation

Neeeever mind. Didn't see that you were closed. And here I was thinking I had nabbed the last open spot. Oh well.

In case this would still count, here would be an old piece made new.

There is now one spot open. There will only be one open at a time until February, when my finals are over.

~JFW1415

If that spot's still open, you can review mine =]

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Hope you enjoy it!