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Reason Invalid · 2008-08-07T03:59:26Z

Yes, I am accepting requests for critiques. Please do ask me if you need a review for your story. However, I can't promise you that I'll always be around. :wink: So. How are my critiques like? This really depends on your piece. Sometimes, if I feel the need to be nitpicky about your story, I could be quite thorough and quote every other sentences. Other times, when I feel your piece is self-contained enough, I tend to give general suggestions and less detailed reviews. But depending on your request, I could review to your needs. What do I tend to critique on? I am not too heavy about grammar. However, my critiques usually focus on plot development, atmosphere and description. What do I review? Historical fiction, other fiction, scripts, adventure fiction, and non-fiction. What do I avoid reviewing? Essays, novels with long chapters (though there are exceptions, I just need to see if I'm interested), and poetry. Only novels are exceptions, essays and poetry will not be accepted. Do I review anything else? I would, but only if you give me a valid reason of why I should. So how much does it cost? My reviews are free for the moment. What are my principles on reviewing? On writing? For reviews, I would say I try to be direct, and precise. It's better to know your mistakes straight off the bat before it kills your story, I'd say. As for writing, coherence would be the most important. No matter how wonderful your ideas may be, if it's not handled in a logical manner, it's still going to turn out rubbish. ~~~ And that concludes my introduction of my service, use it as you wish. :D XD Have a nice day, come again. :P

Bickazer

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Wed Nov 26, 2008 3:46 am

Bickazer says... · Wed Nov 26, 2008 3:46 am

Would you take a look at an excerpt from a science fiction novel I'm working on? It isn't too long...(I hope), and it's in desperate need of some feedback.

topic38763.html

Thanks very much in advance.

Ah, it is an empty movement. That is an empty movement. It is.

Reason Invalid

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Thu Nov 27, 2008 12:26 am

Reason Invalid says... · Thu Nov 27, 2008 12:26 am

Done with Bickazer's! Going on to Rascalover's soon.

It is only when dissonance plays one will find pleasure in consonance.
topic34094.html <-- Free Reviews

Lord Anzius

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Sat Nov 29, 2008 3:10 pm

Lord Anzius says... · Sat Nov 29, 2008 3:10 pm

Please review these:

http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic36987.html This shouldn't be prologue

http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic34323.html The mansion chapter 1

http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic35415.html The mansion chapter 2

http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic34985.html The ripper prologue

Please

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miyaviloves

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Fri Dec 05, 2008 7:53 pm

miyaviloves says... · Fri Dec 05, 2008 7:53 pm

Heylo!

Could you if you get the chance take a look at this for me:

topic39665.html

It's super short, its a small piece from a novel I am writing and it's just at the moment a real awkward piece of writing, any critique would be very much appreciated!

Thanks!

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DreamyAlice

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Sun Apr 16, 2023 6:50 am

DreamyAlice says... · Sun Apr 16, 2023 6:50 am

Hello, I am one of the res crew mods here on YWS. This is a message just to inform you that I will lock and archive this thread as it is not active anymore. We have to archive and lock the inactive threads to keep the forum organized so no worries, if you'd like to reopen it at any point in the future please contact a current resources moderator, we would be happy to reopen it for you ^-^

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