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Random Vampire Story 2

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Anney

I walked along the street, hoping I'd make it back to one of the decent abandoned buildings before the sun got too high.

As the first rays hit me, the burned through my cloak. Not enough to do too much damage, but enough to hurt.

Silently, I cut across a parking lot and dove through the broken window to my "home" (if you could call it that).

I threw myself onto my bed, which was a mattress on the cement floor. The only good part about it was the comforter, which had been given to me by my best friend.

I haven'ts een much of her lately, I thought. Quickly, however, my thoughts channeled in on Nick. I grabbed a stikey note, quickly scrawling on it:

Meet Nick. Park. After sun down.

I placed the note on my bulletin board - where everything important went.

"Oi vey," I sighed. THe thought of Nick gave me such an odd feeling. It was good, but unfamilar to me. "What am I doing?"


**Ayumi - if we wanna go with having her ex-fiance show up, he could show up in her place of residence next time I post.

ALICE!!! You want one of your characters to be her best friend? Teh one she hasn't seen in a while? Maybe your character could go to see Anney and find that she's gone, and see the note above saying to meet Nick. Hence pulling people together? Cause right now we've got, like, two stories going at once, I think.

Opinions/Suggestions?!?!**
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**I agree with Bella. Get everyone together. ASAP.**

**I can't think of anything to write. I'll post in the morning.**
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**Alright an do I'll have to skip ahead to the next night then.**

Sybyla

I was really against going with him, I didn't want to get him into any more trouble than he already was! Not to mention his little sister! I hated myself for this. But I knew it would just all get worse if I attempted to sneak off again just to save them. Nope. That wouldn't work.

I would have to contact Annie.


Angel

"Who's Annie?" I asked Sybyla when she was telling me and my brother about the idea.

"An old friend, she can make sure that you two stay safe for helpin me get away."

"She's a vampire right?" Kyle asked.

Sybyla nodded. I cringed, Kyle really didn't like vampires, he didn't trust them. If I ever decided I was going to become a vampire hunter like my mom was I knew I'd have to pull him along.

**There, the board is set, the peices are moving.**
I just lost the game.




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Anney

I yawned, stretching out on the old matress. A strange scent crossed my nose.

"Edward."

I had barely said his name when his arms were around me, holding me in an unfriendly embrace.

"My darling Ann, it has been too long!" he said, false joy seeping into every word. I struggled out of his grasp.

"What are you doing here?" my voice was sharp, demanding.

"I came to see you, of course. I want you to come back with me."

"No. Out. Now." there was no reason for him to question me.

"Now now, dear. Don't be so hasty. I really don't want to make a fiasco out of this."

He stepped forward. Toward me. Shit! I thought, wishing Nick was nearby.

**Oki, Anney was jsut kidnapped. I've got nothing for how he goes about it. He's taking her back to his mansion-y thing in France**
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**GREAT!!**

Nick

I woke right after dusk, thirsty again. I scowled. It would only delay my meeting with Anney... Oh, well. It couldn't be helped.

I headed to the park after taking down a wolf. I absolutely refused to feed from humans. I didn't want to responsible for more death.

I sat on the bench where Anney and I had first met, and waited.
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Anney

Dammit! I thought angrily.

Edward was still just as much of an ass as he had always been. He had me change clothes, and I was now seated at his dinner table.

It was either this or he chained me to a bed.

That just sounded wrong.

Please let someone realize I'm missing. Nick may realize, but he won't know how to go about it. I pleaded to unknown forces.

"Hello, my love," Edward said coolly, gliding into the room. I scowled at him, saying nothing.

Okay, Alice is very very confused as to what we're doing. I think I have an order of events that might help some.

-Anney is kidnapped by the vampire who changed her.
-Sybyla plans to go visit Anney, and finds that her home has been completely trashed. She sees the note saying to meet Nick at the park at midnight
-Sybyla goes to the park to meet Nick, thinking he knows where Anney is
-Nick and Sybyla (and whoever else tags along) interact, and set off to find Anney.

That's all I've got. I hope that helps!
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Sybyla

I gave the cabbie Annie's address, and we crammed ourselves in. By the time we'd get there the sun would be down, and she'd be awake.

My hand unconciously went to my neck, something warned me off of this meeting, it wasn't going to go well. I had the feeling that the old debt would be called on. That wasn't a pleasent thought.

But there was nothing else for it.

Angel

The cab stopped and we all got out. I didn't like the look of the building, something about it frightened me. I stuck close to Kyle and Tristian. Kyle kept his arm around my shoulders, it made me feel safer.

"Why do I get the feeling that she's not the only vampire living here?" I asked.

"Because she's not. Don't worry though," Sybyla said calmly.

"Why not?" Kyle asked. I could tell he wasn't that fond of the situation either.

"They're afraid that if they touch me James will kill them."

"Yeah thats you."

"And you're with me, i'm fast enough to become a good sheild."
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Nick

I looked at my watch. It had been an hour...

Where was she?
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(Erm...I need Mable to post XD)
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(oi..i hope she posts soon then. I'm way excited for this to get going, and I don't have anything else to post for Anney just yet.)
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Tristian:

"Your not going to need to be." Tristian replied sharply, a little sharper then he planned though.

Kyle:

Kyle wasn't comforted by Tristian's mood. He tightened his grasp on Angel.


*sorry guys*
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Sybyla

"Its always good to have a back up plan," I said, "just in case."

I came to Annie's door, and knocked, the door swung open too easily. I started to get nervous. I walked into her loft steilthily. I went to her bulleton board to see where she probably was. There was a note to meet a guy named "Nick." The house was in dissary, more so than usual.

Annie was in trouble. Bout time she got into trouble.

I looked at the others, "something's happened to her."


Angel

The worry in Sybyla's eyes softened my resistance to liking her. She wasn't as cold as I thought she had been. Maybe we could get to be friends now.

"So...what do we do?" I offered up. Kyle looked at me incrediously.

"We find this Nick guy and see what he knows," Sybyla said. When we were leaving I was sure I heard her mutter something about not wanting Annie to be hurt when they weren't in contact.
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Tristian:

"Then lets go." Tristian said ushering her out the door. He wanted as far away from this place as he could get. Kyle seemed to want the same thing because he kept Angel close as they headed out hte door.


*Tears*
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*nudges RVS2 back up so someone will hopefully notice and be able to post*
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(I'm waiting for Nick to see us at the park or hear us shouting his name or SOMETHING ^_^ )
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