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**Sorry for my absence. I was at my friend's house.**

Nick

I was still sitting there, two hours later. It was almost three, now...

I stood up, stretching. What had happened to that girl?

"Nick!" I heard in the distance, by several voices. "Nick! Where are you?"

Not Anney, but someone distressed. I moved to meet whoever was calling me. "Here! What do you need?"
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Sybyla

"Nick?"

"Yeah."

"Do you know where Annie is?"

He shook his head. Oh crap, only one person...or vampire would be able to take Annie down.

"Edward," I breathed in annoyance.


Angel

"Who's Edward?"

"Old...aquantince of Annie's. He's....obsessed with her in a way," Sybyla explained.

"Wait Annie's missing?" Nick said agast.

"Yeap, thats the way her apartment looks."
I just lost the game.




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Nick

I snarled, infuriated. How could this happen? Why did this happen?

I would find out. I looked at the girls, completely enraged. "Show me her place. Now."
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Sybyla

"Hold on a second," I said, seeming to startle everyone. I didn't care that he was a vampire, I needed to know if we could trust him. "Can we trust you?" I demanded.

"Can you help me find Anney?"

"Yes I can help you find Annie."

"Then yes, you can trust me."
I just lost the game.




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Anney

After being forced to share food with the thing I was embarrassed to call my ex-fiance, he showed me to my room.

He was being kind, for the moment, and actually allotting me my own room instead of forcing me to bed with him. I had the feeling this kindness wouldn't last long.

After I had been left alone, I sat at the window seat, looking up at the sky.

"Oh, my dear Nick, where are you?" I sighed. Already I had felt such a bond to Nick...it was disappointing to have to leave him so soon.

Has anyone noticed...? I thought sadly, knowing the only one to notice would be Nick, and he had no way to reach me anyway. He would think I had skipped out on him, and he would move on.

I sighed, wishing I had some way to contact someone.

Oh! Whoever posts next should most definitely try calling Anney's cell phone, which is convienently with her *wink *wink*
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Nick

I followed them to Anney's house, and helped them investigate every inch of it. There was no trace, except for the broken lock on the door... Someone had gotten in and taken her, that was certain.

Then I had an idea. I pulled out my cell phone.

"What's Anney's number?" I asked one of the girls. When she gave it to me, I quickly dialed it and waited. "Please, pick up, Anney. Please."
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Anney

I fell onto the bed, angry with myself for being stupid now. If I would've kept moving, not settled in one place for so long, none of this would've happened.

There was a buzzing in my pocket.

Of course! I thought, rolling my eyes and pulling my cell phone out of my pocket. I answered quickly.

"Hello?" I said softly.

"Anney!"

"Oh Nick!"
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Nick

I looked at the others. "I got her!" Then I returned my full attention to her. "Anney, are you all right? Where are you?"




**All I've got...sorry... I'm still suffering from whiplash...ugh...**
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Sybyla

My eyes widened in horror. She wouldn't be talking long. She had to know the dangers of it...right? She knew what Edward is capable of.

"Paris?" Nick said questioningly. "Alright, we're going to get you...Me and a-"

Impatiently I took the phone away, "Annie, its Syb we're coming to get you."

"Alright."

We hung up in unison.


Angel

"What was that about?" Nick asked. I gave it to Sybyla, she had some guts to stand up to a vampire like that.

"The longer she's making noise the more danger she's in. Do you want that?" she glared at him questioningly.

"No."

"Exactly. Her making noise puts her in more danger and if she got caught it puts us without the ability to rescue her."
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Anney

I hated to let Nick go so quickly, but I knew what Syb was doing. Edward was dangerous, and he was a vampire. He surely heard every noise I was making, even the sound of my cell phone vibrating.

Looking out the window, I considered chucking my cell phone to the ground below. But this seemed pointless - it may become useful later. So instead I pulled the battery out, making less noise than it would have to shut it off, and shoved both halves under the mattress.

Then I laid back down on the bed, the room vaguely catching my memory. I hated it.


>>hey, if anyone wants to do some random posts as Edward and be all mean and saddistic and what not, feel free. It would give me something more to do. :D
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*****I is lost, someone fill me in****
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**Okay, Anney was supposed to meet Nick in the park, but didn't show up. Angel and Sybyla were on their way to see Anney, only to find she's missing. Now, all three are trying to find out what happened and where she is so they can rescue her.

Oh, girl, you should not have given us permission to play as Edward! XD**


Edward

I stepped back from the door, feeling almost angry that she was still in contact with the outside world. Nick, she had said. Well, if he did manage to come, he would have a not-so-warm welcome waiting for him.

I opened the door a few seconds later, pretending not to have known she was talking to anyone.

"How's my favorite girl doing?" I asked, voice dangerously low. "Not too lonely, are you?"

"Stay away from me, Edward. I'm fine!"

I smiled evilly, moving in quicker than she could counter. I pinned her to the wall by her throat, my other hand holding both of her wrists in restraint.

"You never should have left me, Anney. You should have stayed, where you belong."

"Get...off...me...bastard..."

I snarled at that, shoving her roughly onto the floor. She crashed so hard, the boards groaned as she whimpered. I knelt before her, making her look up at me, making her kiss me. "You'll learn to like it here. Get over it."

With that, I left.
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>>oh God, what have I gotten myself into...

Anney

As Edward left, I growled low at him.

"You know me better than that," I said softly, knowing he'd hear it as clearly as if I had said it aloud.

I watched him closely as he turned back toward me, a small smirk playing on the corners of his pale lips.

"Really? We'll see about that, love. We'll see..." he turned back around, shutting the door loudly behind him.

"Bastard," I muttered angrily, knowing he could still hear me as I got to my feet.
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***It's been five days, people.***
"Neglect not the gift that is in thee, which was given thee by prophecy, with the laying on of the hands of the presbytery." Timothy 4:14 KJV




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**I dunno what to post. I can't be blamed, I was the last one to post. If you wanna do something else as Edward, go ahead. *makes the voice Anney should have* Save me! Save me!** :D
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