Saint's Critiquing Shop!

Teague · 2008-03-24T13:52:10Z

Come get your fiction critiques here, folks! Post a link to the piece and I'll get to it as soon as I possibly can! Please, fiction or artwork/photography only. I fail at life with poetry. ^^ I'm open to critiquing a story as it progresses, and critiquing revisions as well! :D I'm doing something crazy! I crunched the numbers and found out that I need 800~ more critiques to get 5 red stars. I really want to be the 3rd member to achieve that, so I've set a goal! If I do 11 critiques a day for 11 weeks, I'll have hit my goal by July! Obviously, I'm going to need *loads* of critting fodder, so request as many pieces as you like! Please! To-Do Critiques Runaway Tree Draft 2 Arieda's Photos Five Bars in Rome: A Letter to an American Soldier Azaleas for Susie Finished Critiques Chance of Snow P1 Gates of Glendon -- Prologue Gates of Glendon Ch. 1 & 2 Fantasizing Check back here to see where your critique is! -:pirate3:

ProfessorRabbit

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Fri Aug 22, 2008 11:03 pm

ProfessorRabbit says... · Fri Aug 22, 2008 11:03 pm

If you're really hurting, I wouldn't mind review on all of these. In order from most wanted to least:

Deimos' Custom Vacation
topic34739.html

Thanatos
topic33549.html

Goddess Fallen
topic32528.html

Theodore King
topic32382.html

Umm... that's actually everything I have to offer, at this point. I hadn't realized I had so few things posted!

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romance otaku

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Fri Aug 22, 2008 11:15 pm

romance otaku says... · Fri Aug 22, 2008 11:15 pm

hi, could you do my second chapter of my book?

the link is in my sig.

thx

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Sat Aug 23, 2008 2:20 am

Jon says... · Sat Aug 23, 2008 2:20 am

topic33850.html

It's Chapter Six of Six, to understand it you might want to read the other five, they take about ten minutes each.

I would like it if you would critique those too but that would bump the post so i would only like Chapter Six.

Thank you

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Tue Sep 09, 2008 2:09 pm

PenguinAttack says... · Tue Sep 09, 2008 2:09 pm

I is lubses yooh foreverz.

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"Sometimes things just break" (or sommat like that, I can't rightly remember the title. xD

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fun4eva

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Sun Sep 21, 2008 3:38 am

fun4eva says... · Sun Sep 21, 2008 3:38 am

topic36248.html

Please do critique.
Thanks a TON in advance. I
would really, really appreciate it if you review/critique.

Fishr

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Sun Sep 21, 2008 3:13 pm

Fishr says... · Sun Sep 21, 2008 3:13 pm

I just revised this last night. I'm calling it my Second Draft. It still needs some work but I can't quite put my finger on what exactly. Rip it to shreds for me.

topic36291.html

Thank ye, oh Gracious Saint!

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deleted2

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Sun Sep 21, 2008 3:28 pm

deleted2 says... · Sun Sep 21, 2008 3:28 pm

http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic32793.html

Thanks !!

^-^

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Mon Oct 20, 2008 6:31 am

OverEasy says... · Mon Oct 20, 2008 6:31 am

First attempt at a new style? It needs work, so I am asking people that I know will be brutally honest with me

lol I know I can count on you.

topic37529.html

OverEasy

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olivia1987uk

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Mon Oct 20, 2008 1:21 pm

olivia1987uk says... · Mon Oct 20, 2008 1:21 pm

topic37545.html

It's a romantic fiction piece, hope you don't mind...it is the third part of the first chapter. so hopefully you'll look at the others too

Olivia
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Via

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Mon Oct 20, 2008 2:32 pm

Via says... · Mon Oct 20, 2008 2:32 pm

*makes shameless plug for self*

http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic37414.html

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DreamyAlice

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Sun Apr 09, 2023 10:59 am

DreamyAlice says... · Sun Apr 09, 2023 10:59 am

Hello, I am one of the res crew mods here on YWS. This is a message just to inform you that I will lock and archive this thread as it is not active anymore. We have to archive and lock the inactive threads to keep the forum organized so no worries, if you'd like to reopen it at any point in the future please contact a current resources moderator, we would be happy to reopen it for you ^-^

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