Rydia's Reviews

http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic28900.html

Revised version of He's Just Human. It's due soon - can you give it a quick glance?

Thanks!

~JFW1415

Part One
Part Two

'Cause your amazing and you love me.

And would you like a critique?

~JFW1415

Just to let you all know that I've now got two weeks of freedom so if you have any critique requests, now's a great time to send them.

I have a list of about eight at the moment but if you give me more links then I have something to look at once I've done those and I promise that the longest you'll have to wait is three days (unless it's an advance critique or I get absolutely flooded with requests).

I would really like more thoughts on this poem:

Sinking

I had trouble with it so that would really help me out.

Thank you!

I need more requests! Come on people, there's a begging permit here with your name on! I'm pretty hopeless at finding random pieces for me to critique these days and I've grown laaazy so I need you to help me out! Request a critique, you know you want to, right?

*Poke* If you're begging...

Suicide Kills Us All

(It's a very light 'R.' Just a few swears and slutty girls saying that they love Connor.)

I know it needs a lot of work, but it's better to have a lot of opinions before I get working on editing, si?

Thanks!

~JFW1415

Kitty! I loved the critique you gave me for my Advanced Critique section novella a while back, so here I am again, begging for another:

I got a three-part story called Tangled Up In Blue. It's from the Romance section and it's rated R. You don't have to read the three parts if you don't want. Don't even have to finish reading the first one.

But... it'd be nice. Thank you!

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I actually have a story that has description! Like, your level of description! And that I think needs more! *Gasp* 'tis a historical moment right here.

Anyways, I think you'll like it, and I will look forward to your details critique.

Out of Focus

Thanks so much Heather!

~JFW1415

You asked for it, here it is.

Crit.

There, now you've something to do.

Want to do a song? Not my best, but it's alright.

You Knew

Never mind.

Kitty (:

It would be awfully nice if you critted my Dawn With Fox on my Featured Works.

hehe.
-Medusa.

Hey, Kitty15. Will you to do me a favor and tear my poem to bits. Please?

http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/post389949.html#389949

Thanks bunches.

Saber, love. This is rated R and it isn't fab, but I'd love a crit whenever you can get to it.


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Life: In Which Mistakes Are Made.

*Hearts* Le Penguin.

Okay, I'm going to make this the cut off point. I've certainly got time to do the remaining two critiques posted above but any posted after this message will probably not be done until I get back from my trip to Greece on the twentieth of July.