Rated for swears, suicide, and teenage boy's thoughts.
This is my new story, Suicide Kills Us All. (Which is a working title.) It's kind of strange. Connor kills himself, and it's kind of people's reactions...eh, you need to read it. Like, you *need* to. You *want* to.
Things to look out for:
- Character development! It's the whole point I wrote this, and I *need* to develop different voices.
- The therapist part. *Very* bad. (So stick it out - it does get better! In my opinion, at least.)
- Title suggestions.
- If you needed more hints/more subtle ones.
- Anything else!
Thanks so much! PM me if you'd ever like a critique in return.
Oh, and this is 31 words shy of 5k, but I figured it would be all right. Close enough, and such a shame to cut up.
~JFW1415
Edit: It was so late when I posted this that I forgot to give credit where credit was due!
Sam: For writing 'Parking Lot Sparrows,' which inspired me to write this.
Suzanne: For pointing me to Sam's story and telling me that I need to write more like that.
Cal: For making the Table of Doom (Historic.) I kind of stole the chart, took out many words, added one, and wrote. Then I ditched the words.
Thanks you guys! You're all freakin' amazing. (As are all those who critique!)
(Note to self: check out The Laramie Project.)
Currently being edited.
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