Autumn's Blaze

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Cara--

Cara pulled away and looked towards the woods. "Why do you always do that?" She asked,

"What?" He looked at her concerned.

"Kiss me when I'm trying to make a point. You keep tellin yourself lies, I'm nothing special. Nothing of any worth except to those mages and they want me dead." She stood up. She didn't know what was making her say this, but her heart was tearing in two. She just didn't want him hurt.

idiot. Fire growled. She blocked him out and walked towards the woods leaving the man she loved, and her life's companion behind her.
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Christian

My heart exploded, not like when she kissed me, but in a new way, a way that hurt. I wasn't going to let her go that easy. Not when she had become that important to him.

"Cara," I said as I followed her, "I'll always be able to find you now, you'll never be away from me."
I just lost the game.




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Cara---

"What do you mean?" She asked as she kept walking. She could tell Fire had stayed behind. She didn't need him anyways.

"We're bound together. I will always know how to find you." He replied softly.

"Right, if I dont' want to be found I wont be." She spun around and faced him. "Do you think I want to leave you? No, I don't, your the only one that has ever really cared, that's why I have to leave. Because I wouldn't be able to live if you got hurt because of me."
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Alzz, just have Kayla wake up. Or have her already awake, sitting with the others.

I've got nothing until Bella posts. *Pokes and prods*

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*Um...still nothing, I'm rather slow tonight*

Christian

"So leaving won't hurt me? When I saw you walking away my heart shattered into a thousand tiny peices. I need you Cara." His voice became a whisper, "I need you."
I just lost the game.




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Cara---

Cara looked down at the ground. "But you wont be dead, you wont be phisically hurt. YOu wont miss me that bad. After a week I'll just be an aquantice." She said tears rolling down her face. "Why can't you understand that. I'm just a bother, nothing more."
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Christian

I pulled her into a hug, "you aren't a bother! You're a necessisity!"

*sorry >.<*
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Cara----

"Your lying!" She cried trying to push away. He wouldn't let her go and she broke down into sobs. She hugged him pulling him close letting the tears fall and the pain sink from her.


*GRRRR*
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Christian

I took this as a sign that she would stay, my knees went weak with a relief of their own. We fell to the floor, I was still holding her tight. "I won't let you go," I breathed against her neck, "I never will."
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Arabella **I apologize for the long pause in my posting**

"A few hours at the most...I think," I replied. "I can't be quite sure, I've been sleeping too." Chuckling, Ramere leaned down and kissed my forehead.

After letting out a big yawn, we both got to our feet and looked around the camp. The mage moved slightly, but was still too far out of it to completely wake up.

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Cara---

"T-that doesn't make sense." She sobbed, part of her wouldn't let herself stay, but the stronger part was keeping her there. She held him tight, she wasn't about to let go. No way was she going to give the half of her a chance to leave. Not when he had brought her senses around a little.


*GRRR*
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Christian

"IT makes perfect sense, I'm never going to let you go, you're always going to be with me."

Her sobbing doubled and I just let her cry it all out.

*yeah me too*
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Cara---

Cara didn't know why she was balling, it was probably because she had never felt loved or cared for. When she couldn't cry anymore she looked up at him. "I-I'm sorry." She muttered, his shirt was soaked.


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Christian

I smiled, "it's okay, sometimes..." I had nothing to say, so I kissed her instead. When we parted, "explination enough?"

She nodded and pressed her cheek to my chest, I rested mine against the top of her head.
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Cara----

Cara clung tightly to him. She didn't want to get up, but she knew they were going to have to. "I-I warned you I do stupid things sometimes." She smiled up at him. "I guess that was one of those times."
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