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<Billy>

I picked up what appeared to be a diary, looking at it curiously. I turned it over, there was no name on it. I shrugged, I'd just hand it in to the office.

"Hey wait!"

I turned back around, looking at who'd yelled out. Damn, a girl. I smiled.

"Yeah?"

"You've got my journal!"

I looked down at the journal, panicking. I held it out for her.

"I didn't read it, I swear!"
He had decided to live forever or die in the attempt. - Yossarian, Catch-22

Wide-eyed stupid.

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Audra

This guy was amazing! I was actually impressed by him! But, whoa...I had to keep a hold on myself. I had to remain "indifferent" to keep people from saying things, from assuming things...

"Yes, actually I do," I admitted, picking at my polished blood-red nails. "But I only write when I'm really tired. It's when I write the best, when I can think."

I looked at him, shrugging. "No, I draw most of the time. Dragons, anime, elves...stuff like that."
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(So, this is a boarding school? Everyone lives on campus or something?)

"I'm a bit of an artist myself," Kai said, his face still propped on his hand. "I wouldn't mind seeing some of your work sometime."

Audra felt heat rushing up to her face again. At some point it just started getting annoying. "You look a little old to still be in highschool," she said, trying to change the subject again.

"I'm only eighteen," he said. "But, you're right. I already finished grade twelve two years ago. Now I'm just getting some extra credits so I can get into the right college program."

"Two years ago?" Audra asked. "This is your second year in school after grade twelve?"

Kai shook his head. "No, this is my first. I was in Japan last year in an exchange student program," he said, smiling.
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(yeah different apartment things-whatever they are-for different genders of course.)

Alice

I grabbed my journal and pushed it inside my bag and cluched it to me.

"I believe you," I said looking up at him, tall people made me feel nervous, especially the cute ones, "I'm Alice," I said sticking my hand out.

"I'm Billy," he said shaking my hand.

I knew I was in iminate danger of flirting, and I had to flee.

"Well thanks for not reading my journal," I said and turned to go back to the lunch room.
I just lost the game.




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((Wow I missed a lot. I thought Alice was sitting with me. *is utter confused* I think I might have to drop out if the storybook keeps going this fast. I'll see if I can squeeze back in.))




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(I think i messed you up Lupe, if you introed me I missed it. Just come find me again or something...)
I just lost the game.




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Name: Adine
Age: 14
Gender: Female
Education: umm..school?
Family: Mom, dad, dog!
Appearance: Black hair that reaches the middle of my back. Pale. 5 foot 6 inches. Umm, I can't tell you the color of my eyes.
Personality: Well, you will find out...I think. I can't really think of how my personality is! XD
History: hmmm...I was born and hopefully won't die anytime soon.

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I'M NOT SURE HOW TO START. SOME HELP PLEASE!
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*Ok so i didnt get on for the weekend, and now its 4 pages in. HOLY CRAP! My guess is that there is a dress code thing in this school, but if this post is bad, just tell me, and ill delete it.*

Always moving around. Maybe this place will be permanent for once.
At the thought, he smiled. He and his family hadnt lived in the same place since the divorce. In the course of 2 weeks, they had already moved 3 times.

Looking down and walking through the hallway, he could tell people were looking at him. Soon, some guy finally stopped him.

"You know, there is a school uniform, you might want to wear it if you dont want to get into trouble."

Looking up at the kid, he looked at Connor as if he were an idiot." I just got here. My parents just dropped me off, its my first day."
It's ok to be a kid sometimes,

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Audra

I looked at him. An artist as well? Interesting!

"That'd be cool. I'd like to see some of your works, too!" I added, trying - and succeeding - to contain my growing thrill.

This was too cool!

"But tell me, why'd you go to Japan? Was it fun? What did you learn while you were there?" I prompted, hoping I wasn't getting annoying.
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<Billy>

I kicked myself, pissed as hell. You are NOT letting this one slip through your fingers, Bill, I thought. I jogged after her.

"D'you mind if I have lunch with you? I'm kinda new here and don't really know anyone."

She looked at me, and I felt myself redden a little. Watch yourself, buddy. Don't be too transparent.
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Wide-eyed stupid.

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Alice

"Sure, tomorrow," I said teasingly walking away letting him follow if he chose.

"Why not today?"

I waited a couple seconds and the bell rang, "lunch is over."
I just lost the game.




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Bella~

I pointed Ariel toward her next class, and ran to find Alice.

"Hey, come on!" I grabbed her arm, dragging her toward our next class. Alice came slowly, a large grin plastered on her face. "What are you so happy about?"

"Nothing..."

"Oh, that is totally not nothing!" we walked into the classroom, taking our seats at the far back. "Tell, Now!"
i carry your heart(i carry it in my heart) <3

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Alice

"No!" I shot back, I wasn't going to tell her, at least not yet. I'd already made too many mistakes when it came to this sort of thing and I wasn't going to make any of them again. If I saw Bill again I'd explain it to him.

I mentally smacked myself, not like he would care anyways. He was just new to the school and I was polite to him, and flirting. I mentally slammed my head into the wall. I had the fleeting thought that if I acted on how many times I did that in my head I would probably be dead.

The bell rang and I grabbed my stuff and ran out of the class, bent on getting away from Bella's questions until I could say it was nothing and everything was back to normal.

Even though normal sucked.
I just lost the game.




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Bella

I sighed, wishing my best friend was slightly more open with me. Oh well, no big deal, I determined. She'll tell me eventually...

My next class, the last class of the day, not including my extracurricular whatnots, was English. It was the only class I didn't have with Alice.

I went to sit down, and found a boy sitting in my seat.
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One nice thing about Challenger: you get a lot of free time.

I finished my assignment, then pulled out a piece of paper and started to draw. As usual, I started with an oval shape for the face, then drew the guidelines. Let's see... should I have realistic eyes this time? Yeah, I decided.

"Whatcha drawing?" someone asked. I didn't recognize the voice.

"Nothing." I covered the paper.

She laughed. "It's anime, right?"

"Um, yeah," I mumbled. "I haven't really started yet." Oh, please go away. I just want to finish.
"The one thing you can't trade for your heart's desire is your heart."
Miles Vorkosigan

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Brian Jacques



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