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"Caiden, Caiden stay with me." He ran into the jailand quickly sneaked into a room. He grabbed one of the guys and bit into his neck quickly putting Caiden's mouth on the cut. He held the guy still until she had drinkin enough.
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Name-Clara
Race- witch
Age-17
Eyes- bright intense green
Hair- black/ glossy curls cut just above her shoulders
Clothes- LOVES black very punk rockish
Form-
5'5"
skinny
orientation- None she thinks relationships are a waste of time
Personality- Clara is loud "extreme", she loves anything random and is very musical. Clara totally freaked when she found out she was a witch, now she loves it and uses her power to get back at people she doesn't like.
Occupation- high school student , she research's the history of witch's in her spar time.
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charlee not to be rude or sound like a b***h or anything but this is a "closed storybook" you'd have to ask me if you could join before you did and we are already too far into the plot for new characters.


Caiden's head hurt, there was a ringing in her ears. Where was she? What was she doing? She couldn't remember anything. She couldn't even remember what her name was.

She opened her eyes and looked around wildly before her gaze came to the dead man only inches away from her face. She screamed.
I just lost the game.




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Colt looked at Caiden surprised, "Hush, do you want to get us caught?" He demanded. He picked her up and ran out of the jail her screaming and kicking and trying to get away. "Caiden, stop. relax."
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Caiden struggled wildly and finally got him to put her down. "Who are you?" she demanded backing up slowly.

He looked at her astonished.
I just lost the game.




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"Colt, your boyfriend. Are you ok?" He looked at her surprised, he tried to cup her face in his hands, she backed up fear in her eyes. "What's your name?" He demanded.
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"My name is--its--I don't remember."

The guy looked worried and stepped foward again, trying to cup her face. She saw such raw true concern in his eyes that she let him. "What do you remember?"

"Being next to a dead guy!"
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Colt ran his hand through his hair. He needed to drink, he breathed in and stopped dead. She was human, how?

"Ok, your name is Caiden, and your going to have to trust me. I don't know what happened, but something made you lose your memory. I need to go talk to someone. Can you wait out here for a little while?" He asked gently.
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Caiden nodded, "since I have no where else to go and no one else to trust." Colt leaned foward slightly as if he were going to kiss her or something, but caught himself and quickly ran into the building again.

Caiden felt a little dizzy and sat down against the wall.

"Hey Caiden," someone said, "long time no see."

She looked up to see a rather handsome looking man standing above her. "Do I know you?"

"It's Will," he said, "Will Cleveland?"

Caiden shrugged, he looked hurt. "Don't be insulted, I don't even remember who I am right now."

"What do you mean?"

"Everything, is just gone."

"What happened."

She tapped her forehead, "nothing remember?"

"I should take you to the hospital." He grabbed her hand and pulled her to her feet, she looked at the door hesitantly before going with him. The hospital was a good place to go.
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Colt quickly drank as much from his victum as possible then ran back outside. Caiden was gone. He sniffed the air, she had left with someone. He quickly followed the sent to a hospital and then into the waiting room. She was sitting with a guy looking around.

"Caiden, I thought you were going to stay put." he said walking over quickly. He looked her over to make sure she was ok then looked at the guy. "Who is this?"
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"I thought the hospital would be a good place to go, how did you find me?" she ignored the question about who Will was.

"I saw you guys leave out a window. Who is this?"

"I'm Will Cleveland," he said, "who are you?"

"Her boyfriend."

"How did she lose her memory?"

"I don't know."
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"How do you not know?" Will asked looking at him suspiciously.

"Cause, it happened suddenly. One second she knew who she was, the next she didn't even know her own name." Colt said breathing in deeply. This guy smelled bitter, maybe from anger. He was good at hiding it. Colt stopped breathing, there was to much blood in this hospital. He made it look like he was breathign normal though.
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"So the hospital is the best place for her," Will said.

"I was on my way to take her there," Colt said, "I just went inside to call a friend of mine and ask what it could have been."

"And what did he say?"

"He had no idea."

Caiden's heart stuttered, how did nobody know? Her stomach roiled and she felt bile rise in her throat.
I just lost the game.




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Colt looked at Caiden, her face was pale. He put his hands on both sides of her face and looked into her eyes. They slowly closed. "Caiden, look at me." She did, he frowned, there was a small purple piece in her eye, you would have to be looking for it to see it. Witch His mind screamed. He sighed and leaned back on his heels, how could he have not known. "Caiden, we need to go see Slade, the doctors wont be able to do anything. He will, will you come with me?"
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Caiden's first instinct was to say "yes" but she couldn't open her mouth without barfing. She was sure her face was more than pale, it was probably turning green. She stood up and ran down a few feet and barfed into a waist basket.

When she was done she sat down against the wall and drew her knees up to her chest and rested her forehead against it. This was all too confusing, all too strange. She wanted something familiar to show up.
I just lost the game.



A woman knows the face of the man she loves as a sailor knows the open sea.
— Honore de Balzac