The Random Vampire Story [1]

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Caiden gasped at the anger in Colt's eyes, she quickly stepped away from Will and backed against a wall. He was scaring her. Maybe she shouldn't trust him after all.

"Colt," Brent said, "Calm down man!"

He turned to glare at him and Caiden got a good look at the huge canines he held. Fear granted her speed as she ran out the door out onto the lawn and down the street as fast as she could. She didnt' know where she was, where she was going but anything had to be better than what she had run from.

Soon she realized Will was running up behind her. "Caiden," he said, "come back to my apartment, I'll take you to the hospital in the morning and everything will be alright."

Fighting back tears she nodded and he ran with her to the bus stop and they got on.
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Colt felt his fangs slide out and it didn't hit him how bad that was until after Caiden had seen them and taken off. He spun around to feel Will hit him hard in the face knocking him back a few feet. He heard Will take off running after Caiden and his anger boiled.

"Colt! She didn't remember! Is she still?" Brent started helping him up.

"No, she is human again and no she didn't remember." He replied, "Want to help me find her?" Brent nodded and they ran out the door. Colt breathed in but couldn't find but a faint scent of her.

"What's wrong?" Brent demanded,

"I can't smell her for some reason." Colt growled, he caught a faint trail and started after it. But he kept losing it.
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Caiden let herself doze a little on the bus, and only forched herself to stay awake when Will nudged her and said it was time to get off.
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Colt saw a bus pull up close to him and he jumped on. He could smell Caiden on it faintly and it wasn't the one that they had been on before. He walked over to the driver.

"Two people got on this bus earlier, where did they go?" Colt demanded describing both to him.

"Can't tell ya, buddy." The driver smiled. Colt bent down close to him showing his teeth.

"What was that?" HE demadned,

"I'll take you there." The driver stuttered,

"Good boy." Colt smiled, "And don't use that phone of yours either."
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Caiden curled up on the couch with a blanket as she flipped through the channels while Will took a shower. When he came out he was fully dressed-she hoped to make her more comfortable.

"Would you mind if I took a shower?" she asked.

"Not at all, I'll throw your clothes into the washer when you get out."

"Thanks," she said.

Once she got out of the shower she dried herself off and wrapped herself in Will's robe so she would have more than a towel covering her. She went and sat in the living room with him while she waited for her clothes to be done.

"Would you like something to eat?" he asked, "you look like you haven't eaten in a while, and you threw up so you're running on nothing at this point."

"Thanks." She stood up to go help him, and before she realized it he was kissing her. She forced her head away and slapped him.

"Atta girl," a voice said from the door. She turned and smiled when she saw Colt.
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Colt walked towards Will quickly while Brent stood in the doorway smiling, "Atta girl." Brent laughed. Colt yanked Will up and shoved him back against a wall hitting him hard in the gut.

"That is for hitting me earlier," Another powerful blow landed in Will's gut. "That's for taking her," then another, "and that is for trying to take advantage of her." He let Will sink to the ground groaning. He turned and looked at Caiden.

"Where are your clothes?" He asked softly.

"In the dryer, I had taken a shower and didn't have clothes. Colt threw his foot back into Will's gut. He looked down at Will.

"What was that for?" Brent demanded from the doorway.

"For him not being a gentlemen and offering her some clothes, she might be a girl but last I knew every guy has at least one pair of sweats and a shirt." Colt growled, "But you didn't want her in clothes did you." He frowned, he heard the dryer ding as done. "Brent get her her clothes."
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Caiden stood in awe of what just unfolded before her. What the hell?! She wanted to grab her clothes throw them on and run from them both. She wanted to knwo what was going on, why she didn't have her memory, what Colt was, why all this was happening and she wanted to know now.

Swallowing down the lump in her throat when Brent handed her her clothes she fled into the bathroom to change. Once she was fully cloathed all her confusion and frustration burst forth and she found herself sitting on the ground in the bathroom crying...again.
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Colt walked to the bathroom door after Caiden hadn't come out. Brent was watching Will. He heard a soft sobbing from the door.

"Caiden, you ok?" He asked softly. No response. He pushed the door open and sat down next to her wrapping his arm around her shoulders and pulling her close. "Sorry you had to see that." He whispered softly.
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"I-I wish I could remember something" she said between sobs, "everything's so strange. I want to understand it all."

She fell into another sobbing fit and let her head fall into his lap.
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Colt held her close, "I wish you could too." He sighed kissing the top of her head gently. He held her tightly hoping to comfort her as much as possible. "When your ready to go find Slade just tell me." He said, "Take all the time you need."
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"the sooner we go the better," she said whiping her eyes, "even if I do look like a mess."

Colt chuckled, "you never look like a mess, you always look perfect."

She gave him an unconvinced smile, "you're such a sweet talker."

He grinned, "got you before."
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"And it isn't just to make you happy, you really do." He smiled kissing her forehead. "Do you want to walk or me to carry you?" He asked looked into her eyes never wanting to look away.

"I can walk for now." She sighed,

"Alright, but if you want me to carry you I will." He smiled helping her up.
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Caiden stood up and yawned, she had to keep herself awake somehow. She really didn't feel like passing out any time soon.

"I think I'll need a cup of coffee soon," she yawned again.

"Or just some sleep."

SHe shook her head, "I don't wanna sleep like this, all worried and confused."
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Colt frowned, "Listen, you need to sleep. If you don't I'll make you." He said looking at her. "Now, let's get going." He smiled wrapping his arm around her shoulders and they headed towards Slade's place.
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"How can you make me sleep?" she asked raising an eyebrow.

"Other powers come with the fangs."

She could feel her face pale when she remembered the site of them and anger flashed in his eyes. The same anger he had shown when he had kicked the crap out of Will, but he hadn't used the fangs. She wondered if he ever did.
I just lost the game.



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