The New and Improved Twisted and Completely Out There Story

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Even though she was far into pregnancy, Alexx was quick and graceful in the way she dodged Peter's magic. She sent mental bolts of energy back at him angrily. She had yet to forgive him, and didn't plan on it anytime soon.

"Alexx, stop fighting," Adam snapped, trying to keep his voice low.

"Why?"

"He wants you to fight. He wants to weaken you, get you tired. Then he'll try to get you, and your baby. You can't keep fighting."

"then what do I do?"
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Hate flurred in Sara's eyes, even though she had expected this she was still pissed off. She felt a surge of power flow through her and she stepped right infront of a blast. Greg moved to stop her but she was too quick.

As the power flew straight at her it stopped, "it seems these little showdowns of ours keep popping up don't they?" she said and lashed out at him. He deflected it like he was swatting it at a fly.

"Silly Sara," Peter said and lashed a blast of energy at her. It knocked her down but she got right back up and starting lashing at him again, this time with Greg at her side.
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Peter shot blasts of raw power. Greg deflected with waves of water. Sara struck at Peter but he was os well defended it looked impossible.

[/i]We need help[/i] Thought Greg. A massive storm clooud formed in the sky. A single toornet of water flew from the sky before making a trun between Sara and Greg straight to Peter. Infused with Sara's power it was a hundred times more powerful

Powerful enough to knock Peter down. He leapt into the sky. Green lightning came down upon them. Alexx didn't blibnk as she leapt between the lightning and her friends, Greg and Sara.

A blinding light erupted from the blast. Sara and Greg screamed out but no sound could be heard.

"This cant be!" screamed Peter, "That should be my power!!!"

Alexx stood in shock, Some kind of shell was being emited from her stomach!

"Alexx!" Sara said running up to her. "You'r okay!"

"My baby..." Alexx gentley rubbed her stomach.
"Maybe Senpai ate Yuka-tan's last bon-bon?"
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"I'll kill you ALL!!!!" Peter focused all his power. A ball of red power formed in his hand.

"Oh my God," breathed Greg. The sky sank to a deep red as the buildings of the neighborhood started to break apart.

Peters power was bending sapce and time. Everything was going to collapse if they didn't stop him.

"Take this you Son of A....." the last bit was drowned out as a massive beam of energy shot past Alexx, Sara and Greg, colliding with Peter.

Alexx turned to see a gapping hole in the Space time frabic. Standing there was Owen. He had the weapon and was getting ready to to fire again.

"Dont just stand there, help me!" Owen called to them.
"Maybe Senpai ate Yuka-tan's last bon-bon?"
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Sara picked up the short hem of her dress and ran towards the weapon, grateful that the dress didn't have a train. Her Greg and Alexx all joined Owen at the weapon.

"Grab hold there," he instructed. Everyone grabbed a spot that seemed to be for better aim. All of them focusing plus the weapon duplicated their powers by at least twenty. The weapon fired off striking Peter in the chest. He disentergrated, leaving behind only a pile of ash.

They all walked out of the whole and it sealed behind them, it started to rain. "Greg stop it," Sara said.

"Again it's not me, I promise. It's not this time."

"Mom's going to kill me for ruining her dress."

"Um... Sara," Alexx nudged her and pointed to the ground. Two bodies were lying on the ground sevral yards away.

"Mom! Dad!" she shouted and ran towards them. She tripped a couple times but didn't fall until she was between them. "Mom," she whispered, leaning close to her. "Dad," she did the same with him. "No," she sobbed. She couldn't stop herself, she sobbed uncontrolably.
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Greg went to his still soon to be wife's side. It was brilliant. All that power and now Peter was finally dead. Owen hugged Alexx tightly.

Greg looked at the pile of ash sitting on the cracked fondation of the house. People were in the streets looking at them. How are we gonna explain this?

the ashes started to glow. Hundreds of balls of light erupted from it. People started to form. All the powers Peter had killed and stolen were being revived. But how?

The street faded away and the Elders were there. Sara still cried but not as hard. Her parents bodies turned to light and faded away.

"We are so sorry, Sara," said one of the elders. "We cant bring them back but, We can have them here for your wedding."

Their tattered clothes repaired themselves. as Sara's parents appeared.

"Go on, my child,"said her mother, "Get married."
"Maybe Senpai ate Yuka-tan's last bon-bon?"
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"But-"

"Shut up Sara," her father scolded, "you're getting married while we're here to watch."

"Here," her mother said taking off her ring, her father did the same and handed them to her. "So you'll never forget."

Sara smiled and walked back over to Greg. She handed him her ring and kept his in her palm.

"Are we finally ready to get this going?" the elder asked.

"Yes," Sara smiled and turned to Greg.

"Good, do you Greg take this woman to be your loftly wedded wife, to have and to hold in sickness and in health, so long as you both shall live?"

"I do."

"Do you Sara take this man to be you're loftly wedded husband, to have and to hold in sickness and in health, so long as you both shall live?"

"I do, I absoloutly do."

"Greg place the ring on her finger and repeate after me... 'with this ring,'"

"With this ring"

"I do thee wed."

"I do thee wed."

"Now Sara place the ring on his finger and repeate after me, 'with this ring'"

"With this ring."

"I do thee wed."

"I do thee wed."

"I now pronounce you man and wife, you may kiss the bride."
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Um...ok. I'm not gonna say that I'm not angry with you, Mad, because I am. But I'm not mad at you because you brought back Peter, although that does screw things up. I'm mad because your arguement is the same argument I used when you tried to BAN ME from your story book because "I was messing with the plan." You're being a hypocrit, and that ticks me off. But, Alice, I never said anything about yelling at him at the library. But, Mad, it's not really our problem that YOU missed the PLANNED meeting. I mean, there are only 4 of us doing that, so we can plan it out to some extent.

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Bella requested the deletion of Mad's post up to here. I respected that as it is her storybook.
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Some time Later

Sara and Greg walked up to the big two story house. It sa near the ocean and the sound of waves could be heard. Children played in the frony lawn while Alexx, Owen and other parents watched on.

I cant believe Mathius is one year old already, Thought Greg to Sara.

I know. It seems like yesterday we were hearing Alexx's screams from the waiting room. They both giggled and walked up the steps.

"Guys! I'm so happy to see you." said Alexx giving Sara and Greg a hug. "Come on, I'll show you where to put the presents."
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Should we tell her now? Sara thought to Greg.

After the party, this is her son's birthday.

good idea.

Of course it's a good idea. Hey I've been meaning to ask you, since we're both half vampires now what will that make-

I'm not sure either. Thats the only thing I'm afraid of.

They put the presents on the table and walked back with her to the rest of the parents.

"Want a drink?" Alexx asked and leaned towards the punch bowl.

"Yes please," Sara said and took a glass.

"Who's driving?" Alexx asked before she took a drink.

"We walked why?"

"That's the dad punch, you know for the dads to drink and the moms drive."

"Oh," Sara put the glass on the table. "Never mind then."
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"Aww, he looks so freaking adorable," Alexx cooed from where she sat, watching her son wobble around in the grass with the other kids.

"I know," Owen replied, sitting down next to her. Sara came out of the house with the cake, a large number one shaped candle in the middle. Greg followed her with the lighter. They put the cake on the picnic table and all the parents ran to grab their kids.

"Blow out the candle, honey," Alexx said to Matt. Just as he took in a huge breath, the flames of hte candle became unnormally huge and engulfed the picnic table. Owen was fast enough to grab matt and pull him away while Alexx tried to put out the fire.

"Not today," Sara muttered, trying to help.
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Greg taking on the protectiveness of a future dad and loving husband pulled Sara away and put the fire out with Alexx. He ignored the annoyed glares coming out of Sara's eyes, and was just happy nobody was hurt.

"He's quite the little blower," Sara said sitting back down.

"Yeah he is, I just hope he gets his wish though," Alexx said lovingly and rubbed his stomache. "Is the cake good enough to eat?" she asked.

"Yeah, it doesn't look too bad," Greg said examining the cake. He took a corner of frosting and licked it, gagging he spit it back out, "I take that back." Alexx and Sara burst into laughter.

"Oh well, we'll just serve ice cream." Alexx said and put Mathius back down.

"Ice cream sounds really good," Sara said. "I'll help."

While they were walking into the house Alexx asked Sara a question, "Sara you muttered something when the cake caught on fire, something like 'not today' what was that about?"

"I'll tell you later."

"Tell me now."

"I'll tell you later."

"When you're drunk?"

"I'm not getting drunk, I'm not going to be drinking for a while."

"Oh my god, you're pregnant arent you?!" Sara nodded.
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Greg looked over the cake. What a waste. He loved cake.

"So," said Owen, "Have you and Sara thought about a youngster of your own?"

"Yeah...though it's a bit complecated now..."

"How so?"

"Well, we have to think about how our powers are gonna mix not to mention the whole half and half making a whole if you know what a mean."

"Well, from what Alexx just said she's already Pregnant so congrats." Owen gave greg a pat on the back.

Greg looked up at the house and saw Sara when tehy made eye contact she smiled and shrugged. He never could get really mad at her.
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She figured it out, nothing I could really do without lying to her.

I understand she's not making a big deal out of it is she?

I told her not to today, its her son's birthday. We're going to be celebrating tomorrow.

okay
Sara and Alexx walked back with the ice cream bowls and spoons.
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"Why do you think the flames did that?" Alexx asked no one in particular. Matt had been put to bed, and Greg, Sara, Owen and Alexx were sitting in the living room talking.

"I don't know...Matt could have done it," Sara reasoned.

"I doubt it; what if..." Owen's voice trailed off.

"What?" Greg pushed.

"Well, we never really got rid of Hannah. I mean, Peter is long gone. We did the whole ritual and everything, so it's impossible for him to come back, but Hannah just left...."
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